Cherz Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 Hi, i just got back on card maker(for those of you who care) and i made sum mushroom cards. Unfortunatelly, i was unable to find good pics. Help with new pics would be greatly appreciated. [img]http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/7853/491591.jpg[/img] [img]http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7853/491591.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7853/491591.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7853/491591.jpg[/img] [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/9758/491591n.jpg[/img] lol, this pic sux [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/6839/491591e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/7853/491591.jpg[/img] [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6611/491591d.jpg[/img] could some one help me with the picture on this card? plz? thats all, some help with my pictures would be greatly appriciated. [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7853/491591.jpg[/img] [img]http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6172/491591x.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 these look like they're from the nintendo universe, you sure they don't belong to pop culture? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 yea, but i couldnt find good pictures this was the best i could do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 well at least write out the 1st card's lore, it's too small to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 k, there. the lore is written out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 As I have seen the names of your cards aren't capitalized. For example "chaos mushroom" should be "[i][b][u]C[/u][/b][/i]haos [u][i][b]M[/b][/i][/u]ushroom" Now let's check the effects. Chaos Mushroom : It has the same summoning requirements with many other chaos monsters. Nothing wrong with that but the second effect isn't that good. Your mushrooms don't have powerful effects to help this card (except for "Shadow Mushroom"). I would have allowed it to be Normal Summoned and I would have added an effect to support plants as some other of your monsters do. Magic Mushroom: This seems too easy to Synchro Summon. I don't know it seems that something is wrong here. . Maybe say that you can't Special Summon monsters from your Graveyard the turn you Special Summoned this card ??? Millin' Mushroom: It has a good milling effect that helps you send Bulb , Spore , Plaguespreader to your Graveyard and in addition this card's level is increased. I like it. Mushroom: This is also an instant Synchro with spore but it is better since it is only Level 1 and it isn't Special Summoned by its own effect. I would have added an alternative effect while face-up on the field but if you leave it as it is it is still a reasonable card. Plushroom: As i can see from your archetype the effect can be used for great combos. For example: Summon plushroom special summon mushroom, send spore to the grave,special summon spore synchro summon something good. or Summon plushroom and special summon shadow mushroom which gains great attack. or special summon plushroom , 2 other copies of it and then another shroom, exceed summon a monster etc. When i first saw plushroom , I thought that it was useless due to this many restrictions for the summoned monster but i was wrong. It is very well made. (In my opinion) Possessed Mushroom: Well the effect seems nice and in order to activate its effect it will probably be in ATK position so you take some damage. Although it is a good card, I wouldn't use it. Shadow Mushroom: Well this one will never be tribute summoned. So if you run in your deck mystic tomato or plushroom you can have a free beater. I think it is good enough just for the ATK gain and the other effect it has. Well let me tell you something about the OCG. We say Graveyard and not graveyard. We say Special Summon and not special summon.We say declares an attack and not declars (this was probably a typo but never mind) When you say that a card gains attack you don't write attack in the card but you write ATK. Same goes with Defense. Now for the whole archetype. At first glance it didn't seem good but as I saw the cards better I realized that these cards are good plant support. They can also support each other. The only one I think that doesn't fit much with this archetype you made is "Chaos Mushroom". The majority of your cards is good but you need to fix some of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 thanx 4 the help, i am definetly going to make the ajustments (and yes, that was a typo) thanx. Im going 2 make a syncro, but i cant find a picture.chaos shroom was made because theyare both light and dark. I would use it to mimic shadow mushroom.and i changed possesed mushroom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 phew, finished adjusting sum. ill finish 2 morrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 i got some better pics! finally, i can convert png to jpg! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Hmmmm interesting synchro. Since your cards are based on spore it is ok that it needs him as a tuner. The first effect is kind of Oped since you can either send Dandylion, Spore or bulb. These are too good targets to be sent to the graveyard as a cost. And you can send them from your Deck . The second effect is good since it is once per turn. For the first effect i Suggest you to say "Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard......." this way you can send Spore, Dandylion or bulb without making your card oped. (If you have either of them in your hand) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 k, i see what u mean, i will change that then. thanx 4 your help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 It was nothing I really like helping other people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 same here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 bump, i guess... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 For Spore Defender : I think it is a nice Addition to your set It protects your mushrooms and you Special Summon your key card. I love the picture Nothing wrong with the card. I have spotted a really small ocg mistake. You have to say Special [b][i][u]S[/u][/i][/b]ummon not Special summon. Your card is pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Thanx thats an easy fix. i also like the picture i found. oh, and thanx 4 the link 2 the sight. its been helping on my pics, like on my potan set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 new card posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 The new card isn't that good. Banishing 3 monsters from your Graveyard to just take control of a monster. The cost during your End Phase is too much because you take 1500 damage for sure and if you have summoned cards like "Chaos Mushroom" you will have to pay 2500 Life Points to keep the monster. But you will use it for a synchro , xyz or tribute summon so the effect during the end phase doesn't matter this much. Well I would prefer to use "Mark of The Rose" than your card. Just remove some drawbacks and it will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 k, i didnt want to make it broken. but, i guess im going to change itedited my trap, hope this makes it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Banishing a spore and sending the top card of your deck is a good drawback. For the last part of the effect I think that destroying the monster is too much. But maybe it just seems this way only to me. If I were you I would return it to the opponent. The last part doesn't really matter since you will probably use that monster for a summon of an other monster so it isn't really necessary to add my suggestion. For the most part, your card is very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 what about the name change? does that help at all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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