BFG Studios Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 [spoiler=Deadly Demon Healer (Tuner)] [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/6930/390021c.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]This card can be treated as a non-Tuner monster for the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can activate 1 of these effects:[/b] [b]- Your Life Points increase by 500 points.[/b] [b]- Your opponent's Life Points decrease by 500 points.[/b] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Forceful Demon Defender (Tuner)] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5217/390021e.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]This card can be treated as a non-Tuner monster for the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of these effects:[/b] [b]- Increase the ATK of any other monster you control by 500 points.[/b] [b]- Decrease the ATK of a monster your opponent controls by 500 points.[/b] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Unified Demon Supporter (Fusion)] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/6930/390021c.jpg[/img] Lore: [b]"Deadly Demon Healer" + "Forceful Demon Defender"[/b] [b]Once per turn, you can activate 1 of these effects:[/b] [b]- If you would take Direct OR Battle Damage (not involving this card): Increase your Life Points by 1000.[/b] [b]- If a monster you control (excluding this card) attacks or is targeted for an attack: Increase your monster's ATK by 1000 (until the end of the Damage Step).[/b] [/spoiler] I think it's not exactly an archtype; i never intended it to be... but these monsters are monsters with multiple effects that benefit you and not your opponent... they may also be Tuners, but they also have a Fusion monster that follows along with them... I know its not the absolute greatest, but I just think that having multipurpose types are interesting and useful... so i hope you like them too, and any feedback is appreciated... thanks in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 for Healer, what exactly is this part in the effect? "[b]Your opponent's" [/b]I don't get that part, were you trying to add something into the text? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 oh, it added itself in as code for a [b]'[/b] symbol... just treat it as that, sorry, i uploaded my stuff weird (fixed) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Hrm. This is pretty solid, original if that. I don't think I've come across cards with effects like that before. [color=#ffffff]Inb4pplstrtcorrectingme.[/color] I like these effects a bit they're something different. But I would like to see more into this if you'd like to continue this set. Pretty impressed. There's also no flaws that I can think of to point out. [color=#ffffff]Inb4pplcorrectmeagain[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1325233386' post='5738446'] oh, it added itself in as code for a [b]'[/b] symbol... just treat it as that, sorry, i uploaded my stuff weird (fixed) [/quote] then only the 1st card is somewhat meh 500 burn isn't really much, and the same is true for 500 LP gain I'd make both the burn and the gain bigger similar to that like the fusion of 1000ish, but still different than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Pretty good and original effects !!! Tuners: I really like the part that they can be treated as they were non-Tuners. It is a very helpful effect since you can have a wide range of Synchros you can Special Summon. The first card is pretty good. You can Activate its second effect and then go for a synchro summon. This effect wont harm your opponent very much but it still gives you an advantage. The second Tuner is a bit Overpowered. It has 2000 ATK and it is only a level 4 monster with a good effect. In my opinion you should either reduce this card's ATK to 1800 or 1700, or add a drawback. Fusion: The fusion is very good I really like it !!!! It has 2 powerful effects and reasonable ATK and DEF. Nothing to say . You did a great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 well thank you all for giving great amounts of feedback... from what i can tell, you all like the set, but the first card needs some work... i can agree... it's just that i dont know exactly how to do so... [quote name='Finding The Everlight' timestamp='1325235311' post='5738454'] Hrm. This is pretty solid, original if that. I don't think I've come across cards with effects like that before. [color=#ffffff]Inb4pplstrtcorrectingme.[/color] I like these effects a bit they're something different. But I would like to see more into this if you'd like to continue this set. Pretty impressed. There's also no flaws that I can think of to point out. [color=#ffffff]Inb4pplcorrectmeagain[/color] [/quote] well, thanks for that... i think its always nice to know i made something sort of original... and it's also great that you think there aren't any flaws... that's nice to know too lol... unfortunately, i never really intended to continue this set... i mean, these were the only ideas i came up with... hmm, maybe if i get more time i'll see if i can't come up with anything else... but im unsure about continuing [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325250630' post='5738530'] then only the 1st card is somewhat meh 500 burn isn't really much, and the same is true for 500 LP gain I'd make both the burn and the gain bigger similar to that like the fusion of 1000ish, but still different than that [/quote] i could tell someone would point out that 500 isnt a big number... it's just that i don't want these cards to have overkill added into their effects... it's just that i know the numbers need to be a tad bit higher, but idk how much would be considered a non-OP'd number... and besides, the stats are equal on both the tuners, so i just like keeping it at 500... for now... [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1325262502' post='5738820'] Pretty good and original effects !!! Tuners: I really like the part that they can be treated as they were non-Tuners. It is a very helpful effect since you can have a wide range of Synchros you can Special Summon. The first card is pretty good. You can Activate its second effect and then go for a synchro summon. This effect wont harm your opponent very much but it still gives you an advantage. The second Tuner is a bit Overpowered. It has 2000 ATK and it is only a level 4 monster with a good effect. In my opinion you should either reduce this card's ATK to 1800 or 1700, or add a drawback. Fusion: The fusion is very good I really like it !!!! It has 2 powerful effects and reasonable ATK and DEF. Nothing to say . You did a great job [/quote] those were all of my goals... i like having multipurpose effect cards, and in this case, the Tuners for Synchros can also be used for a Fusion... again, i know it wont harm your opponent or help yourself very much... but it's better than nothing... i just dont know how to increase it so it wouldnt be very OP'd... the stats on both cards are actually the same, the first one with 500/2000... the next with 2000/500... but i'll think about changing it anyway... and thanks a lot... the fusion i thought would be the trouble maker with feedback... but glad you really like it... I also thought that having a Tuner Fusion (something that hasn't been actually printed yet) would be really cool lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BryantJ Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Nice artwork great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 well thank you for the complement... not my art though... next time, try to go into more detail of the cards though... please? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 bump... sorry, i dont normally do this, but i want to see if the positive feedback continues... but then again, any and all feedback is welcome lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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