gigonake Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Hello, this is my first set. It is based on the planets in the Solar System. Im only done with the monsters and I'm now working on trap/spell cards. Please post your criticism, because I know that my cards are not flawless. Monsters (10) ALL CARDS ARE UPDATED IN THE LAST POST Spells (1): P.S. I need help with the spoilers xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
racher green star Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 i have a one set of stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 mars seems a bit op, for infernities. maybe you could have it say if you have portal to a different world on the feild. and speaking of wich, that seems up. maybe u could make it support the archtype a bit more. otherwise, not a bad set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gigonake Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Thanks, sirluke. I fixed the effect of Mars. Also, I added Saturn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naturiamaster Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 its good, makes me think of the agent archtype though cause thay r based on the planets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eichi Sasa Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 I think all the cards are good. I especially like the Sun. The effect of the card is really realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gigonake Posted August 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 13, 2013 Ok, after 2 years, I finally updated the set. [spoiler=The Spirit of Mercury - Celestia] New things: - Fire and 200 DEF (Rekindling target) - Level 4 (Broken Level 7 synchros with Scarecrow and Rank 4 XYZ) [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Totem of Venus - Scarecrow] New things: - 200 DEF (Rekindling target) - Tour Guide-like effect but you can also bring out Celesia and make a Level 7 Synchro - Searches out the field spell [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Golem of Earth - Eradius] New things: - Betters stats - EARTH makes more sense - Better effect [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Princess of Mars - Utella] New Things: - 200 DEF (Rekindling target) - More balanced effect [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Droid of Jupiter - X-Bolt] New things: - FIRE (combo with Utella) - Better stats - Effect supports the archetype [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Shadow of Saturn - Poison Rain] New things: - The effect should be : While this card is in the graveyard: burn when a monster is summoned [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Sea Hunter of Uranus - Herowith] New things: - A little bit better eff [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Champion of Neptune - Verdic] New things: - WAY better effect - LIGHT makes more sense - Fairy so that you can use his effect faster with Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Prince of Sun - Omega] New things: - Fixed level and stats - Easier summoning condition - Can be used in Agents but I don't recommend it [/spoiler] [spoiler=Portal to a Different World] New things: - Supports the archetype [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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