Ace9Brine Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Hey these are my archer girls plz comment wat u think. [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/5717/276551z.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can tribute this card while it's in face-up DEF position to special summon 1 'Archer Girl' in your hand, deck or graveyard. [b]Rarity[/b]: rare [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/7629/276551.jpg[/img] Sorry i couldnt find any good pics for this one. [b]Lore[/b]: This card cannot be Special Summoned from your deck. You can tribute this card while it's in face-up DEF position to destroy 1 non 'Archer Girl' card on the field. [b]Rarity[/b]: common [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/7629/276551.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]:This card cannot be Special Summoned from your deck or graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned due to the effect of an 'Archer Girl' inflict 800 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. [b]Rarity[/b]: ultra rare [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/9434/276551t.jpg[/img] [b]lore[/b]: Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponents life points for every 'Archer Girl" you have on your side of the field. [b]Rarity[/b]: super rare Plz tell me what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great&PowerfulTrixie Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Shining needs a background....and eff is wierd....needs more to it before i can rate it as an archtype....overall they are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 [quote name='Der Haifisch' timestamp='1325409079' post='5742572'] Shining needs a background....and eff is wierd....needs more to it before i can rate it as an archtype....overall they are good. [/quote] Thanks 4 tha tip.[indent=1]ps. gotta <3 dark magician girl [/indent] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Glory is meh for just a slight burn upon summoning I'd allow it to burn your opponent a little bit each turn or something Ambush is fine the way it is overall the set is really good, though will you add more later? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 i think it seems a bit hard to get the first on the feild. maybe alow it to be special summoned in atk by tributing an archer girl. the set of girls is decent.are u going to make more cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325410372' post='5742588'] Glory is meh for just a slight burn upon summoning I'd allow it to burn your opponent a little bit each turn or something Ambush is fine the way it is overall the set is really good, though will you add more later? [/quote] yes i am going 2 make more cards 4 this set glad you liked them here are 2 more cards [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/7629/276551.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: The equipped 'Archer Girl' gains 800 ATK points. [b]Rarity[/b]: common [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7629/276551.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: Only activate when an 'Archer Girl' monster you control is destroyed by battle. Pay half your Life Points, shuffle all 'Archer Girl' monsters in your graveyard back into your deck. [b]Rarity[/b]: super rare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [list=1] [*]i like them. not much i can criteque. good job. [/list] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='sirluke99' timestamp='1325463043' post='5743500'] [list=1] [*]i like them. not much i can criteque. good job. [/list] [/quote] Thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Bow Upgrade is meh. The card Lightning Blade already does something similar, you might want to look at that and Lightning Blades works for ALL warrior monsters, not just Archers like yours Archer Girl Call's effect isn't worth it especially not for half your LP I'd specify a number, like 1000 LP instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325467413' post='5743608'] Bow Upgrade is meh. The card Lightning Blade already does something similar, you might want to look at that and Lightning Blades works for ALL warrior monsters, not just Archers like yours Archer Girl Call's effect isn't worth it especially not for half your LP I'd specify a number, like 1000 LP instead [/quote] ok ill fix archer girls call. there done: [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/940/276551d.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: Only activate when an 'Archer Girl' monster you control is destroyed by battle. Pay 1500 Life Points, shuffle all 'Archer Girl' monsters in your graveyard back into your deck. [b]Rarity: super rare[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CCX-Kero Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Is a pretty decent set. I think you need to give Shining archer girl a special summoning condition since it cannot be normal summoned or set. some of these effects are very basic such as "bow upgrade" and "ambush" and there are other cards out there that can do the same and work along with this set. I suggest added a more personalized touch to the archetype i.e. make the cards more crafted to work with the basic idea of the set. 6/10 until i see the rest of the set ps: just put the new cards in your original post. just press edit post at the bottom of the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='CCX-Kero' timestamp='1325471097' post='5743700'] Is a pretty decent set. I think you need to give Shining archer girl a special summoning condition since it cannot be normal summoned or set. some of these effects are very basic such as "bow upgrade" and "ambush" and there are other cards out there that can do the same and work along with this set. I suggest added a more personalized touch to the archetype i.e. make the cards more crafted to work with the basic idea of the set. 6/10 until i see the rest of the set ps: just put the new cards in your original post. just press edit post at the bottom of the original. [/quote] k thx :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Ace9Brine' timestamp='1325469540' post='5743673'] ok ill fix archer girls call. there done: [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/940/276551d.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: Only activate when an 'Archer Girl' monster you control is destroyed by battle. Pay 1500 Life Points, shuffle all 'Archer Girl' monsters in your graveyard back into your deck. [b]Rarity: super rare[/b] [/quote] right that makes it better then you going to update another archer soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325480681' post='5743906'] right that makes it better then you going to update another archer soon? [/quote] Hey new update: [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7629/276551.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can target 1 'Archer Girl' monster on your side of the field, you can tribute that card to Special Summon 1 'Dark Archer Girl' in your graveyard. [b]Rarity[/b]: super rare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 i think u should add another effect to her, cause atm its not verry helpful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 [quote name='Ace9Brine' timestamp='1325543733' post='5745089'] Hey new update: [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7629/276551.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can target 1 'Archer Girl' monster on your side of the field, you can tribute that card to Special Summon 1 'Dark Archer Girl' in your graveyard. [b]Rarity[/b]: super rare [/quote] well that's nothing more than a recycling effect, nothing more I mean yes it can work for ANY Archer Girl, but that effect alone isn't going to cut it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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