NeoRWBY65 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/8162/199468.jpg[/img][img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8162/199468.jpg[/img] Lore Cannot be normal summoned or set. Must be special summoned by tributing 1 or more monsters with 5000 or more ATK. This card gains 200 ATK for each monster tributed to special summon it. During your standby phase, destroy spell and trap cards up to the number of monsters tributed to special summon this card. Could I get some critiques on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 write the lore out, too small to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325467456' post='5743610'] write the lore out, too small to read [/quote] lore has been put upbump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 special summoned by tributing 1 or more monsters with 5000 or more ATK how you can get monster(s) on your side of the field that are appropriate tributes for this card ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 ocg errors. [s]how the f*** do you get monsters 500 atk[/s] lets just say summoning conditions are way 2 hard 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1325471285' post='5743705'] special summoned by tributing 1 or more monsters with 5000 or more ATK how you can get monster(s) on your side of the field that are appropriate tributes for this card ? [/quote] In real life, Malefic Truth Dragon and Five Headed Dragon both fit the criteria to summon this card, or you could boost a card's ATK with card effects[quote name='Ace9Brine' timestamp='1325473689' post='5743752'] ocg errors. [s]how the f*** do you get monsters 500 atk[/s] lets just say summoning conditions are way 2 hard 5/10 [/quote] Do you mean they are way too hard for something of that power level, or are they just too hard in general? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [b]MAKE SOME SURPORT CARDS THAT ARE BALANCED AND MAKE THIS CARD EASILIER TO SUMMON B?D[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 I believe this is right.: [i]This card cannot cannot be Normal Summoned or set. Must be Special Summoned by tributing 1 or more monsters with 5000 or more ATK. This card gains 200 ATK for each monster tributed to Special Summon it. During your Standby Phase; Destroy Spell or Trap cards up to the number of monsters used in this monster's tribute.[/i] The is simply not going to work, and I can't even think of any monsters with 5000+ ATK. Monsters with this kind of power are usually incredibly hard to get out, so they aren't very popular. If the card ever got into play, it would certainly be just for the 200 ATK boost and the Spell/Trap destruction effect. I can assure you that no person in their right mind would tribute a second 5000+ ATK monster just to boost his ATK an extra 200 and destroy 1 extra card. So that effect IMO isn't even needed. IMO, the card is pretty generic, and I don't see it being used in a real duel. You're new though, cards like this are expected from new comers. You'll get the hang of card making after you've practiced some. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='CM Renji' timestamp='1325477251' post='5743830'] I believe this is right.: [i]This card cannot cannot be Normal Summoned or set. Must be Special Summoned by tributing 1 or more monsters with 5000 or more ATK. This card gains 200 ATK for each monster tributed to Special Summon it. During your Standby Phase; Destroy Spell or Trap cards up to the number of monsters used in this monster's tribute.[/i] The is simply not going to work, and I can't even think of any monsters with 5000+ ATK. Monsters with this kind of power are usually incredibly hard to get out, so they aren't very popular. If the card ever got into play, it would certainly be just for the 200 ATK boost and the Spell/Trap destruction effect. I can assure you that no person in their right mind would tribute a second 5000+ ATK monster just to boost his ATK an extra 200 and destroy 1 extra card. So that effect IMO isn't even needed. IMO, the card is pretty generic, and I don't see it being used in a real duel. You're new though, cards like this are expected from new comers. You'll get the hang of card making after you've practiced some. [/quote] Malefic Truth Dragon, Five Headed Dragon, Dragon Master Knight, and the soon to be released Roaring Express Train-Rocket Arrow all fulfill the criteria for this card's summon (and the last one is actually really easy to summon)[quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1325475895' post='5743801'] [b]MAKE SOME SURPORT CARDS THAT ARE BALANCED AND MAKE THIS CARD EASILIER TO SUMMON B?D[/b] [/quote] Is Gift of the Mirror Dragon acceptable? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Tigerstar10' timestamp='1325478054' post='5743843'] Malefic Truth Dragon, Five Headed Dragon, Dragon Master Knight, and the soon to be released Roaring Express Train-Rocket Arrow all fulfill the criteria for this card's summon (and the last one is actually really easy to summon) [/quote] First 3 are incredibly hard to summon. The last one I looked up, and I think it should be banned the minute it's released. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='CM Renji' timestamp='1325478925' post='5743857'] First 3 are incredibly hard to summon. The last one I looked up, and I think it should be banned the minute it's released. [/quote] What do you mean ban the Roaring Express Train Rocket Arrow? All of its effect except for its special summon hinder it. You lose your entire hand each turn, and you cannot attack with anything during the turn it is summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Yes it has all those hindering effects, but that doesn't change the fact that it has 5000 ATK. Summoning it's easy, then you just have to wait 1 turn to attack with it. Not being able to activate or set cards, and losing your whole hand each turn won't matter if you can beat your opponent in a few turns with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Tigerstar10' timestamp='1325470124' post='5743635'] lore has been put up bump [/quote] ok 5000 or more atk isn't realistic that'll take WAY too long to find, I suggest you fix that part ifrst Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Tigerstar10' timestamp='1325478054' post='5743843'] Is Gift of the Mirror Dragon acceptable? [/quote] make it where they can not be used for fusion summon, synchro summon or exceed summon and they can only tribrute for mirror dragon then yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Gift of the Mirror Dragon is pretty much useless. If you increase your monsters' ATK by 5000 and they aren't allowed to attack until the 5000 goes away, then what is the point in even using it? The only card I can think of that would be useful in that situation is Catapult Turtle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='CM Renji' timestamp='1325481599' post='5743953'] Gift of the Mirror Dragon is pretty much useless. If you increase your monsters' ATK by 5000 and they aren't allowed to attack until the 5000 goes away, then what is the point in even using it? The only card I can think of that would be useful in that situation is Catapult Turtle. [/quote] Gift of the Mirror Dragon is meant to be used with Mirror Dragon[quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1325481205' post='5743941'] make it where they can not be used for fusion summon, synchro summon or exceed summon and they can only tribrute for mirror dragon then yes [/quote] When do fusions, synchros, or Xyz rely on the ATK of their materials? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Oh, I see how you plan on having the support used now. The support card isn't quite as useless now, but it's completely broken. Activate support, tribute a monster or 2 and SS Mirror Dragon. Way broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Tigerstar10' timestamp='1325481832' post='5743956'] Gift of the Mirror Dragon is meant to be used with Mirror Dragon When do fusions, synchros, or Xyz rely on the ATK of their materials? [/quote] rare cases i also mention they can only be tribruted for mirror dragon as well for other real case cards like Catapult Turtle, Misfortune and etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 Nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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