Chancellor Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Okay, so i've been absent from YCM for a while, and recently came back to it, so here is a brand new card which is the start of a new Archetype i'm working on. Please rate. [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/5367/305640.jpg[/img] All credit for image goes to R.I.P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Loki Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Only 200 damage? That is almost nothing. Maybe you should bring it up to 400 damage or something. But it is a pretty cool card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeoMaster123 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 I agree with Loki, in a duel 200 per BP is nothing. Maybe 500 is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chancellor Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Loki the Lion' timestamp='1325519129' post='5744337'] Only 200 damage? That is almost nothing. Maybe you should bring it up to 400 damage or something. But it is a pretty cool card. [/quote] [quote name='LeoMaster123' timestamp='1325519445' post='5744343'] I agree with Loki, in a duel 200 per BP is nothing. Maybe 500 is better. [/quote] okay, thanks guys will change it accordingly, but do you think i could turn it into an archetype? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [b]When this card attacks a non-Machine Type Monster, inflict a further 400 Damage to your Opponent's Life Points after the Damage Step.[/b] ^^^ Use this effect instead. EDIT: Lol NINJA'd. Consider the effect I gave you an overall effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chancellor Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Dark Necromancer' timestamp='1325520567' post='5744363'] [b]When this card attacks a non-Machine Type Monster, inflict a further 400 Damage to your Opponent's Life Points after the Damage Step.[/b] ^^^ Use this effect instead. EDIT: Lol NINJA'd. Consider the effect I gave you an overall effect. [/quote] thanks for the tip! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aranger930 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 pretty cool definately make this an archtype i cant wait to see. but work a little on ocg writing and i agree with everyone else make it do a little more. 500 seems best. picture is an awesome choice. please make more soon. i cant wait! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Dark Necromancer' timestamp='1325520567' post='5744363'] [b]When this card attacks a non-Machine Type Monster, inflict a further 400 [u]points of[/u] Damage to your Opponent's Life Points after the Damage Step.[/b] ^^^ Use this effect instead. EDIT: Lol NINJA'd. Consider the effect I gave you an overall effect. [/quote] [quote name='Chancellor' timestamp='1325520819' post='5744365'] thanks for the tip! [/quote] Fixed my lore, and no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeoMaster123 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 [quote name='Chancellor' timestamp='1325520565' post='5744362'] okay, thanks guys will change it accordingly, but do you think i could turn it into an archetype? [/quote] Obviously! This can make a good archetype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 well the burn concept is a good idea but at 200 that is virtually nothing 1800 is good, but it's not that great for a lv4 I'd raise the atk to 1900, then make the burn at least 500 instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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