I spy with my little eye...a typo in these cards (The Flame Barrier) (37/37)

[Strider Tigerwolf]

[spoiler=Intro]It turns out that a friend of mine from work is non other than @Cody Frost! (OMG NO WAI!) He's been busy as ever with work and school on his end (etc etc) but he still love yugioh. After a talk, we were discussing our favorite created archtypes, and the one that popped up for him was "The Flame Barrier" monsters. After taking a look at them and him taking a look at my cards (because we proxied them irl) he told me if I could edit this archtype and in many ways make them "better" than before. So once more, the Flame Barrier monsters are back! With several edits of course~

 

One of the biggest changes is going to be the DEF points. Instead of 800, its going to be 500 (since when the Flame Barrier monsters are destroyed, they deal 500 burn to both players.) Other than that, its going to be some of the OCG and maybe a few picture modifications (since I don't like some of the pics).

 

[spoiler=Storyline]

The Ice Barrier has been on an imperial campaign throughout the Duel Terminal. Several tribes and clans have been slowly and pathetically overrun by their icy grasp. Outraged, a new clan has begun to oppose them entirely. Grasping the flames and energy of the sun, they oppose the Ice Barrier clan with their full force. The rise of the Flame Barrier has begun.

 

As time passed, the clan grew and soon flourished in a unique volcanic plane. With they're current power, they are holding their own against the might of their icy enemy. But now they see another enemy before them trying to smite down their flames. The Gishki empire has risen up against the Flame Barriers, demanding their new found land for its unique alloys. With the Steelswarms and Verz on their side, the Flame Barrier clan is surrounded against powerful enemies, with no way out.

 

After several battles and struggles, the Flame Barrier clan has learned some of the ways of their opponents, and now they are attacking back using similar methods. Along with this, they have harnessed the power of their land and its creatures. Fueled with new power, they begin to fight back, and are now standing their ground against their enemies.

 

The clan of fire can bare no more. They have put together all their might to fend off their enemies once and for all. Using all their power, skill, and resources as well as the tactics they learned from their enemies, they bring forth a new and more potent power, and with it they begin their ruthless counter attack.

 

As they battle raged on, the clan's knowledge of their land furthered along with their ability to manipulate its abundance resources. From the fires, they found ways to concentrate the very essence of energy into a form of healing magic. However, it didn't end just there. As well as healing, they learned of destruction and with these basis created powerful spells and weapons. Using them, they drove back their enemies back to their homelands, and established themselves as a force to be reckoned with.

 

[spoiler=Xyz Synchro Summoning]

When you Xyz Synchro Summon, you need an Xyz Tuner and an Xyz non-Tuner (like in norm. Synchro Summon) and you add up the Ranks of both monsters so they equal EXACTLY the Rank of the Xyz Synchro Monster you're attempting to summon (like how you add the Levels of the monsters in Synchro Summon).

 

That's part 1. Part 2 is where both the Xyz monsters are sent to the Graveyard BUT all Xyz Materials that were under those monsters are stacked together and placed under the new Xyz Synchro Monster as its Xyz Materials.

 

So wait...does this count as a Synchro Summon or an Xyz Summon?

 

ANSWER: Neither...

 

Xyz Synchro Monsters act as both Synchro AND Xyz monsters, so they are affected by several cards such as De-Synchro and Galaxy Storm, BUT their summon is an XYZ SYNCHRO Summon, so cards like Splash Capture, and Synchro Strike cannot be used against them. Cards like Xyz Reborn and Wicked Rebirth can be used on them if they are in the Graveyard, but cards like Descending Lost Star cannot be used with them as they have Ranks like Xyzs, not Levels.Cards that would affect solely Xyzs or solely Synchros on the field work against these cards, (similar ruling for De-Synchro and Galaxy Storm).

 

So basically:

 

(with 1 Xyz Material under him) + (with 2 Xyz Materials under him) = (3 Xyz Materials under him)

 

Without further adeu, here they are once again.

 

[spoiler=The Traps]

[spoiler=TFBR-037 - Vespial's Dragon Cannon]

Activate only if you control a face-up FIRE monster. Target 1 card your opponent controls: Destroy it. You can banish this card in your Graveyard to activate 1 of the following effects: ● Destroy 1 card you control. ● Add 1 banished FIRE monster to your hand. ● Send 1 FIRE monster from your Deck to the Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-036 - Battleground]

Half all damage you take from "Flame Barrier" monsters you control. Once per turn: You can destroy 1 monster you control.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-035 - Shield]

Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack and you control 1 or more "Flame Barrier" monsters. Negate the attack and end the Battle Phase: Destroy 1 monster you control.

 

[spoiler=The Spells]

[spoiler=TFBR-034 - Solar Feathers]

Target 1 FIRE Synchro or Xyz Monster in your Extra Deck: Banish target monster and this card. During your next Standby Phase: Special Summon that monster and apply the appropriate effect, based on the type of card Summoned:

● Synchro Monster: Special Summon 1 FIRE Tuner monster from your Deck.

● Xyz Monster: Attach this banished card and 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your Deck to target monster as Xyz Materials.

You can only activate 1 "Solar Feathers" per turn. You cannot Special Summon a monster(s) during the turn you activate this card.

 

[spoiler=Sword of the Fire King]

Equip only to a FIRE monster. The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and inflicts Piercing Battle Damage. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: During the End Phase; you can banish 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard and add this card to your hand.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-032 - Battle Stone (Quick)]

Target face-up "Flame Barrier" monster gains 1000 ATK. During the End Phase: Switch that monster to Defense Position until your next End Phase. If this card is banished: You can return this card to the bottom of your Deck; send 1 banished "Flame Barrier" card to your Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-031 - Flare Stone (Quick)]

Activate 1 of the following effects: ● Send 2 banished "Flame Barrier" monsters to the Graveyard. ● Send 2 "Flame Barrier" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. You can only activate 1 "Flare Stone of the Flame Barrier" per turn.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-030 - Heal Stone (Quick)]

Discard 1 "Flame Barrier" monster in your hand: Gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. If this card is in the Graveyard: You can banish 1 "Flame Barrier" card in your Graveyard; return this card to the bottom of your Deck.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-029 - Purities (Field)]

Half all damage you take from "Flame Barrier" monsters you control. Once per turn: You can return 1 banished "Flame Barrier" monster to your hand.

 

[spoiler=The Monsters - 28]

[spoiler=TFBR-028 - Kegan Pyralis, Supremacy (Xyz Synchro - Boss Monster)]

1 Xyz FIRE Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Xyz monsters

When this card is Xyz Synchro Summoned: Return all Synchro and Xyz Monsters that are Banished or in the Graveyard to your Extra Deck. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from thsi card; destroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn: You can banish 2 "Flame Barrier" monsters from your Graveyard; attach 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your hand or Deck to this card as an Xyz Material. Once per turn: If this card would leave the field; you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-027 - Kamya, Demon (Xyz Tuner)]

2 level 5 FIRE monsters

Once per turn: You can attach 1 "Flame Barrier" monster to this card as an Xyz Material. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon: This card's Level becomes equal to the number of Xyz Materals attached to this card. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

[spoiler=TFBR-026 - Deimas, Overlord (Xyz Tuner)]

1 level 4 FIRE Tuner monster + 1 level 4 FIRE monster

If this card is used for a Synchro Summon: This card's Rank becomes its Level. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; return 1 banished "Flame Barrier" monster to your Graveyard. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-025 - Lyager, Twin (Xyz)]

2 level 4 FIRE monsters

One per turn: You can return 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Graveyard to your Deck. If you activate this effect: Banish 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck. You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card: Send 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Extra Deck to the Graveyard. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-024 - Vespial, Summoner (Xyz)]

2 level 3 FIRE monsters

One per turn: You can detach 1 of Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 banished Level 4 or lower "Flame Barrier" monster. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-023 - Gaiaz, Soldier (Xyz)]

2 Level 2 FIRE monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; add 1 banished "Flame Barrier" card to your hand. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-022 - Egastul, Flare (Xyz)]

2 Level 1 FIRE monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; banish 1 "Flame Barrier" monster in your Graveyard and 1 card your opponent controls. If this card does not have an Xyz Material: Destroy this card. If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-021 - Tyrannous, King (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Flame Barrier" monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. While this card is face-up on the field: Face-up FIRE monsters (excluding this card) gain 500 ATK. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card and 1 card in your hand; add 1 "Flame Barrier" card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-020 - Taolith, Spear (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Flame Barrier" monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. While this card is face-up on the field: Players can only activate 1 Spell or Trap Card per turn. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card and 1 other "Flame Barrier" monster in your hand; negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card and destroy it.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-019 - Teslska, Purity (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Flame Barrier" monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. When this card is Synchro Summoned: Gain Life Points equal to half the total ATK of all face-up "Flame Barrier" monsters you control. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card; Special Summon 1 banished non-Synchro/Xyz "Flame Barrier" monster.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-018 - Spar, Gun (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Flame Barrier" monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. If this card battles a non-FIRE monster: Destroy that monster immediately (without damage calculation). If this card is in the Graveyard: You can banish this card; draw 1 card.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-017 - Torai, Twin (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Flame Barrier" monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. Once per turn: You can return 1 banished "Flame Barrier" monster to your Deck. If you activate this effect: Send 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card; send 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Extra Deck to the Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-016 - Asteria, Blade (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. Once per turn: Target 1 face-up FIRE monster you control; it gains 1000 ATK until your next End Phase. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card; negate the destruction of 1 "Flame Barrier" card you control.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-015 - Armolite, Seal (Synchro)]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. During your opponent's Main Phase: You can Synchro or Xyz Summon using this face-up card you control. If this card is in your Graveyard: You can banish this card; destroy 1 card on the field.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-014 - Quo, Synchron (Tuner)]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Flame Barrier" monster: You can banish this card and 1 or more non-Tuner "Flame Barrier" monsters in your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Synchro "Flame Barrier" monster from your Extra Deck whose Level is equal to the total Levels of the monsters banished by this effect. This is treated as a Synchro Summon.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-013 - Zowwk, Wyrmling (Tuner)]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. When this card is Summoned: You can take 1500 damage and Special Summon 1 Tuner "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck in face-up Defense Position except "Zowwk, Wyrmling of the Flame Barrier".

 

[spoiler=TFBR-012 - Kirya, Phoenix (Tuner)]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. If this card is used for the Synchro or Xyz Summon of a FIRE monster: Add 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-011 - Pe'q, Chick (Tuner)]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. You can return this card from your Graveyard to your Deck: Return 1 banished "Flame Barrier" monster to your Deck; shuffle you Deck.

[spoiler=TFBR-010 - Kyaz, Sorcerer]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. Once per turn: You can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. If you activate this effect: Destroy 1 monster you control.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-009 - K'or, Machine]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage; banish 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your hand, Deck and Graveyard. If you control 2 or more "Flame Barrier" monsters with different names: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand).

 

[spoiler=TFBR-008 - Kuzan, Dragoon]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. You can discard this card and 1 other "Flame Barrier" monster you control. During the End Phase you discarded this card by its own effect: Add 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-007 - Kintaz, Armada]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. If this card is sent to the Graveyard: Activate 1 of the following effects: ● Send 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard, except "Kintaz, Armada of the Flame Barrier". ● Add 1 "Flame Barrier monster from your Graveyard to your Deck; shuffle your Deck.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-006 - Ekana, Sorceress]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. Once per turn when you take effect damage: Send the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard. If the card sent by this effect is a FIRE monster: Draw 1 card.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-005 - Toguro, Fist]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. You can banish this card in your Graveyard and 1 other card in your hand: Select the field, your Graveyard or your Banished Zone; both players take damage equal to the number of "Flame Barrier" monsters in the selected area x 300.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-004 - Kugitona, Nightmare]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. If you control 2 or more "Flame Barrier" monsters with different names: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). While this card is face-up on the field: FIRE monsters you control (other than this card) are unaffected by your opponent's Trap Cards.

 

[spoiler=TBFR-003 - Kazangan, Warrior]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage; Special Summon 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Graveyard with an ATK less than 1800 in face-up Defense Position. That monster is destroyed during the End Phase.

 

[spoiler=TFBR-002 - Furiance, Creator]

 

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card and banish 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Graveyard; Send 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard and Special Summon 1 "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck whose Level is lower than the sent monster, except "Furiance, Creator of the Flame Barrier". This effect can only be used once while this card is face-up on the field. This card cannot be used as a Synchro or Xyz Material Monster, except for the Synchro or Xyz Summon of a FIRE monster.

 

[spoiler=TFBR 001 - Vulf, Hunter]

If this card is destroyed: Both players take 500 points of damage; Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower "Flame Barrier" monster from your Deck in face-up Defense Position. That monster is destroyed during the End Phase.

[ragnarok1945]

eh, 500 burn is very little, so it's fine on that part

 

for the 2nd part of the effect though, the lv5 or lower monster you should have also said "except Vulf Hunter of the Flame Barrier"

 

well, that'll have to depend

 

if your other Flame Barrier monsters say otherwise, then that's another story

[Strider Tigerwolf]

That's true, but Cody and I both agreed that it shouldn't be much of a problem. I told him I was gonna edit all the "Flame Barrier" monster's DEF to 500 and because Vulf Special Summons the monster in DEF mode, most monsters will be able to run them over easily and the level 5 MAIN DECK monsters this archtype possesses are actually weaker than Cyber Dragon at 2000 ATK MAX, and again, they're being Special Summoned in Defense Mode.

 

Bonus: I'll be posting 2 cards today.

[gimmepie]

From Vulf they remind me a lot of Flamvell, perhaps too much, but I'll wait and see.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Good observation! I thought that too! But Cody said these guys were on his head way before their release. Not only that, but they're not as compatible with Lavals and Flamvell monsters as I thought O_o. Sure a quick Synchro here or there, but this deck runs far better by itself. Well, here are the 2 promised cards!

[gimmepie]

That is quite a powerful effect for warrior

 

But I like it, would be limited I'd say though.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Well warrior can't recycle himself anymore so that's good. And just like Vulf, he destroys the monster during the End Phase so I don't see much trouble in that.

[gimmepie]

I meant Creator lol.

 

Warrior has a standard well-balanced effect.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

True...there should be a better cost for its effect. Maybe a -1 in the hand since I'm still planning on making it keep its strength?

 

Added a discard cost to Furiance.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

3 new cards! Ekana, Toguro, and Kugitona! :3

[Guest Dworkin]

Dose Arts. <3

 

fricking awesome idea. I always thought that Flamvell was the opposite of Ice Barrier. Seems I was wrong! :P

 

They would only work with Flamvell's if they had 200 DEF.

 

I like Vulf, dont listen to rag. Keep his effect the way it is.

 

Furiance is effing sweeet.

 

Ekana seems to be the Broww for these guys.

 

All in all, 10/10. Rly. Keep it coming, this is amazing. Please make more.

[ragnarok1945]

3 new cards! Ekana, Toguro, and Kugitona! :3

 

for Ekana you can make the burn bigger. 500 is virtually nothing

 

see with Toguro you corrected that mistake, and that one's better

 

Kugitona's effect is good, shame it works only for traps. You going to have another that'll work for spells too?

[Strider Tigerwolf]

They would only work with Flamvell's if they had 200 DEF.

 

All in all, 10/10. Rly. Keep it coming, this is amazing. Please make more.

 

I told Cody about them working with Flamvells, but we both decided that "Nah. It'd be too broken."

 

Also, the idea wasn't mine to begin with, but Cody sort of said this:

"Lol! It's like you're the heir of to my Flame Barriers. man!"

It made me feel all special~ XD But yeah, I plan on finishing the edits on the set.

 

I like Vulf, dont listen to rag. Keep his effect the way it is.

Furiance is effing sweeet.

Ekana seems to be the Broww for these guys.

 

I like listening to Raggy~ He gives a nice point of view of things and whether good or bad, there's bound to be something I may not catch. Still, both Cody and I agreed on keeping Vulf as it is. In some ways, we'll find ways to somewhat abuse his ability and beastickness, but it isn't something that can't be overcome.

 

Furiance will keep this effect...and will probably be either limited to 1 or semied. Either or.

 

Enka IS the draw engine. It's modeled off this card:

[spoiler=Original Mage]

Lore: When this card is destroyed, both players take 500 points of damage. When this card attacks, increase this card's ATK by 400 points during the Damage Step only. When this card is attacked, decrease this card's ATK by 400 points during the Damage Step only.

IMO, mine is better <u< I have yet to show Ekina to Cody, but I'm sure he'll flip! XD

 

for Ekana you can make the burn bigger. 500 is virtually nothing

 

500 burn solid. No more, no less. Why?

 

500+500+500+500+...= quite a bit of burn damage...And then on top of that Battle Damage? It's gonna be nasty. The ORIGINAL Flame Barrier Monsters dealt 800 burn damage when destroyed (hence 800 DEF), but that makes things WAY too fast. 500 is a little better, and there are cards that deal +500 damage like Toguro, but its manageable.

 

see with Toguro you corrected that mistake, and that one's better

 

And that wasn't a mistake. :P Toguro was modeled after this card:

[spoiler=Original Toguro]

When this card is destroyed, both players take 500 points of damage. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, inflict damage to both players equal to the number of "Flame Barrier" monsters on your Graveyard x 300.

See what I mean?

 

Kugitona's effect is good, shame it works only for traps. You going to have another that'll work for spells too?

 

Probably not. Flame Barrier monsters need some weaknesses and being taken out by Spell Cards seems to be a nice thing.

 

2 more cards are up! Kept them nearly the same since these were some of Cody's final Flame Barrier cards (with the new OCG and stuff).

[ragnarok1945]

all right, let's begin with Kuzan:

 

all it really does is get a Flame Barrier card into your hand, nothing wrong with that, although I would have said "except Kuzan" at the end in getting it to your hand

 

the same goes with Kintaz

 

the 2nd effect where you said send a Flame Barrier monster from your graveyard to your deck, you should have said "except Kintaz"

[gimmepie]

Dragoon and Armada are both very well balanced with good searcher-like effects. I would have given Dragoon a higher attack though (probs 1800 or something) since otherwise he is only really useful in the hand and that makes it harder to find room for him.

 

Before people bring it up, with Effect Veiler there is the added bonus of it being a Tuner and Honest has the ability to return to the hand after it has been summoned.

[Strider Tigerwolf]

@Rag - I talked it over with Cody, and we've come up with a few solutions to edits. What you've been saying about "except (insert card name here)" is actually a good idea, but not with all the cards. I'ma do some edits tmro, since I'ma focus on 2 new cards today but I can still say which ones are going to be hit:

• Furiance
  
• Kintaz
  

Kuzan isn't going to get hit since he adds during the End Phase, meaning you can't search out cards too quickly with him, but he does do a nice set up.

 

@pie - You'll find Dragoon to be quite a nuisance soon as the tuner monsters are brought out. I found out why Cody had made Kuzan the way he did because he has a very special way of...well I'll get to that soon <u<

 

Alright, new cards added! Kyaz and K'or!

 

Not only that, but I also continued off on the Storyline with the second piece.

[ragnarok1945]

so which do you think you would apply for the "except for" cards?

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Furiance and Kintaz

 

and they are edited

[Strider Tigerwolf]

All 4 tuners are added!

[Andrew Long]

Very Nice Mate, they look great!!

@ndy

[ragnarok1945]

personally for Zawwk I think you can take out the 500 damage part since you're already taking another 1500 anyway

 

beyond that the others look fine

 

some of the effects are slightly short, but they balance out so there's nothing wrong with that

[Strider Tigerwolf]

There's a card in the set that can actually reduce the damage done to the owner of the cards, so I'll keep the damage bit as is for now. I'm thinking of the release of the Synchros and Xyzs

[Strider Tigerwolf]

4 of 7 Synchros posted!

[ragnarok1945]

the only one I'm confused about is Armolite.

 

It's a synchro, why are you making it help XYZs?

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Because this is deck uses both Xyzs and Synchros