Chancellor Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 If you read my post earlier you would know that i have been working on this new archetype, so please rate and enjoy! [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8373/305640k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" + "Metal Warrior - Steel Drummer Y" When this card destroys an opponents monster, deal half this cards ATK as damage to your opponents life points. [img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" + "Metal Warrior - Storm Jet" When this card destroys an opponents monster, you may flip a coin. If Heads, you may attack your opponents life points directly, if Tails this card is destroyed. [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Steel Claw Z" + "Metal Warrior - Stagzoid" When this card successfully destroys an opponents monster, it may attack your opponents life points directly. [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Steel Stagzoid X" + "Metal Warrior - Feral Beast" Once per turn you may use one of the following effects: * By banishing this card and one "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" from play, you may special summon to your side of the field one "Metal Warrior - Ultimate Pyrozoid" * By banishing this card and one "Metal Warrior - Storm Jet" from play, you may special summon to your side of the field one "Metal Warrior - Ultimate Stormzoid". [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8686/305640f.jpg[/img] Lore = This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the Effects of "Metal Warrior - Mecha Zoid" and "Birth by Light". Once per turn, by sacrificing 500 life points, you may attack your opponents life points directly. [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the Effects of "Metal Warrior - Mecha Zoid" and "Birth by Light". Once per turn, by sacrificing 500 life points, you may destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field. All credit for the images goes to R.I.PbumpBUMP!common guys, lets get some reviews! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 Stagzoid's effect is a little like Little Winguard's effect, but at least 2000 def is enough to hold most lv4s Steel Claw Z looks fine the way it is, burn is very well done Storm Hunter's tail effect is a little too much given what's needed to bring it out. I'd have just said if tails it then its effect gets negated until next turn Steel Stagzoid X's effect is good, but you should have given the direct attack for more than just the summoning turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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TheKaitoKid Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='Chancellor' timestamp='1325540257' post='5744861'] If you read my post earlier you would know that i have been working on this new archetype, so please rate and enjoy! [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8373/305640k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [b]OCG Fix: [/b] [i]When this monster attack a non Machine-Type monster: Inflict 200 damage to your opponent.[/i] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]When this monster attacks an opponent's monster: It is switched to Defense Position during the End Phase.[/i] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" + "Metal Warrior - Steel Drummer Y" When this card destroys an opponents monster, deal half this cards ATK as damage to your opponents life points. [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]"Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" + "Metal Warrior - Steel Drummer Y"[/i] [i]When this monster destroys an opponent's monster: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of this monster's ATK.[/i] [img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/5367/305640.jpg[/img] [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]When this monster destroys an opponent's monster: Target 1 card in your opponent's hand; Banish the target.[/i] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" + "Metal Warrior - Storm Jet" When this card destroys an opponents monster, you may flip a coin. If Heads, you may attack your opponents life points directly, if Tails this card is destroyed. [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]"Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" + "Metal Warrior - Storm Jet"[/i] [i]When this monster destroys an opponent's monster: You can flip a coin and gain the following effects based on the result:[/i] [i]* Heads: This monster may attack your opponent's Life Points directly.[/i] [i]*Tails: Destroy this monster.[/i] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Steel Claw Z" + "Metal Warrior - Stagzoid" When this card successfully destroys an opponents monster, it may attack your opponents life points directly. [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]"Metal Warrior - Steel Claw Z" + "Metal Warrior - Stagzoid"[/i] [i]When this monster destroys an opponent's monster: It may attack your opponent's Life Points directly.[/i] [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = "Metal Warrior - Steel Stagzoid X" + "Metal Warrior - Feral Beast" Once per turn you may use one of the following effects: * By banishing this card and one "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" from play, you may special summon to your side of the field one "Metal Warrior - Ultimate Pyrozoid" * By banishing this card and one "Metal Warrior - Storm Jet" from play, you may special summon to your side of the field one "Metal Warrior - Ultimate Stormzoid". [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects:[/i] [i]* Banish this monster and 1 "Metal Warrior - Flame Claw" you control: Special Summon 1 "Metal Warrior - Ultimate Pyrozoid" from your hand.[/i] [i]* Banish this monster and 1 "Metal Warrior - Storm Jet" you control: Special Summon 1 "Metal Warrior - Ultimate Stormzoid" from your hand.[/i] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8686/305640f.jpg[/img] Lore = This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the Effects of "Metal Warrior - Mecha Zoid" and "Birth by Light". Once per turn, by sacrificing 500 life points, you may attack your opponents life points directly. [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned from the hand by the effects of "Metal Warrior - Mecha Zoid" or "Birth By Light". Once per turn, pay 500 Life Points: This monster may attack your opponent's Life Points directly this turn.[/i] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/5367/305640.jpg[/img] Lore = This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the Effects of "Metal Warrior - Mecha Zoid" and "Birth by Light". Once per turn, by sacrificing 500 life points, you may destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field. [b]OCG Fix:[/b] [i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned from the hand by the effects of "Metal Warrior - Mecha Zoid" or "Birth by Light". Once per turn, by paying 500 Life Points: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.[/i] All credit for the images goes to R.I.P bump BUMP! common guys, lets get some reviews! [/quote] Nice cards. They look like Digimon which I don't mind at all. For Mechazodi you should specify where you can Speical Summon the "Stormzoid" and "Pyrozoid" from. I assumed the hand. Also the Ultimate Stormzoid and Pyrozoid should be effect monsters not Ritual monsters. They're also ridiculously overpowered. I've posted some OCG fixes under the original lores although I'm unsure on some of them they should for the most part correct.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chancellor Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='TheKaitoKid' timestamp='1325704559' post='5748003'] Nice cards. They look like Digimon which I don't mind at all. For Mechazodi you should specify where you can Speical Summon the "Stormzoid" and "Pyrozoid" from. I assumed the hand. Also the Ultimate Stormzoid and Pyrozoid should be effect monsters not Ritual monsters. They're also ridiculously overpowered. I've posted some OCG fixes under the original lores although I'm unsure on some of them they should for the most part correct.. [/quote] thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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