r34p3r_666 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 [left]1st deck i made so plz rate;[/left] [left]1-10[/left] [left]monster;"marionette" [img]http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. you can tribute this card to special summon a "marionette" monster from your deck and graveyard, except for "marionette - the princess". once per turn, you can send a card in your hand to special summon a "marionette" monster from your hand.[/left] [left][img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/773/536188n.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can search for a "marionette" monster in your graveyard and add it in your hand.[/left] [left][img]http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can search for a "marionette" card in your deck and add it in your hand.[/left] [left][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can pay 800 life points to special summon up to 2 "marionette" from your hand except for "marionette - the princess" or "marionette - the dancer".[/left] [left][img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2978/536188r.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can pay 800 life points to special summon up to 2 "marionette" from your deck except for "marionette - the princess" or "marionette - the dancer".[/left] [left][img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can pay 800 life points to special summon up to 2 "marionette" monster(s) from your graveyard except for "marionette - the princess" or "marionette - the dancer".[/left] [left][img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7368/536188p.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, tribute a "marionette" monster to destroy a card on the field.[/left] [left][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5673/536188m.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, tribute a "marionette" monster to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.[/left] [left][img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7368/536188p.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, tribute a "marionette" monster to gain 1000 life points.[/left] [left][img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/9859/536188k.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, tribute a "marionette" monster to draw 2 cards.[/left] [left][img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. when this card is sent from your hand to the graveyard by the effect of a "marionette" card, your opponent discards cards until he/she has 3 cards in his/her hand.[/left] [left][img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. when this card is sent from your hand to the graveyard by the effect of a "marionette" card, draw until you have six cards in your hand.[/left] [left][img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, tribute a "marionette" monster to send a card on the field to the graveyard. synchro;"marionette" [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]"marionette - the princess" + 1 or more "marionette" monsters[/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can remove from play up to 4 "marionette" monster(s) in your hand or field to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent times the number of card(s) removed.[/left] [left][img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]"marionette - the princess" + 1 or more "marionette" monsters[/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be summoned in face up attack position and cannot change it's battle position. once per turn, you can remove from play up to 2 "marionette" monster(s) in your graveyard to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent times the number of card(s) removed.[/left] [left][img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/4157/536188x.jpg[/img][/left] [left]"marionette - the princess" + 2 or more "marionette" monsters[/left] [left]this card cannot be destroyed by battle. this card can only be synchro summoned in face up attack position. as long as this card remains in face-up attack position, "marionette" monsters you control cannot be targeted b your opponents card effects. once per turn, you can discard any number of cards to special summon "marionette" monster(s) from your deck up to the number of cards discarded.[/left] [left]spell/traps;change of scene [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. you cannot activate this card if "change of scene - the gardens" is active on your side of the field. once per turn, you can negate the activation of an opponent's trap card and send it to the graveyard. every time this card negates an effect, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.[/left] [left][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. you cannot activate this card if "change of scene - the music room" is active on your side of the field. gain 500 life points each time card(s) are added to your hand outside your draw phase.[/left] [left][img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can only activate this card if "change of scene - the gardens" and "change of scene - the music room" is active on your side of the field. if your "marionette" monsters battles, gain life points equal to double the opposing monster's attack points.[/left] [left][img]http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. you cannot activate this card if "change of scene - the library" is active on your side of the field. once per turn, you can negate the activation of an opponent's spell card and send it to the graveyard. every time this card negates an effect, gain 500 life points.[/left] [left][img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you cannot activate this card if "change of scene - the black gates" is active on your side of the field. inflict 500 life points to your opponent each time card(s) are added to your hand outside your draw phase.[/left] [left][img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9941/536188a.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you cannot activate this card if "change of scene - the world's edge" is active on your side of the field. you can only activate this card if "change of scene - the library" and "change of scene - the black gates" is active on your side of the field. if your "marionette" monsters battles, inflict damage to your opponent equal to double the damage you suffered. spell/traps;"marionette"[/left] [left][img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. negate the activation of a trap card and send it to the graveyard.[/left] [left][img]http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. negate the activation of a spell card and send it to the graveyard.[/left] [left][img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. your opponent cannot summon any monsters this turn and the monsters on your opponents side of the field must attack, monsters that didn't attack is sent to the graveyard.[/left] [left][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7938/536188.jpg[/img][/left] [left]you can activate this card by having 3 or more "marionette" monsters on the field. You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. negate the attack and send the attacking monster to the graveyard. inflict damage to your opponent equal to the attack points of the monster sent to the graveyard and gain life points equal to the damage inflicted.[/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marv_ Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 I am not even looking at these unless you capitalize them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Marluxia~ Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 OCG needs work, your Punctuation needs help, and please use spoilers, I can't stress that enough. Your pictures are colorless, which I hate to see. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naturiamaster Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 the cards pictures and names dont make sense cause a Marionette is a puppet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logaara Posted January 30, 2012 Report Share Posted January 30, 2012 I Would give more but the OCG is bad and you need to capitalize more. I love your artwork though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted February 10, 2012 Report Share Posted February 10, 2012 I love the artwork as well, but i do agree with marionnette not making sense. all your cards have good intertwinning abilities which i love to see. i think those sets work best. 8/10. u should capatalize things to make them realistic by just the slightest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginko Posted February 11, 2012 Report Share Posted February 11, 2012 first off i love the card art of the monsters, the plainness of each pic definitely contributes to the alltogetherness of the archetype. i like that aspect a lot. i also like the uniqueness of this archetype, the fact that all monsters have 0 atk and def is really cool. i'm not going to go over the ocg because that's already been covered, plus you have way too many traps and spells for this archtype, but i like how you had a theme with your support cards too, the "Change of scene" was a good twist. i also like how a lot of the trap cards need 3 marionettes on the field to work, that's really unique and not something i've seen before. come back to this agian in the near future, i'd love to see this improved as well as fixed ocg (capitalization and some phrases) if you were going for looks i'd give this a 9/10, but the ocg just needs a bit of fixing so i'm giving this an overall 7.5/10 edit: you may want one more level 3 tuner in this deck, because just having 1 won't cut it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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