Neo-R. Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 This is my attempt to create a se of Inner Solar System dragon cards (except Earth) [url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/638/dragonofsilvermoon.jpg/"][img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/2730/dragonofsilvermoon.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/859/dragonofmercury.jpg/"][img]http://img859.imageshack.us/img859/9919/dragonofmercury.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/163/dragonofmars.jpg/"][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1695/dragonofmars.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/684/dragonofjupiter.jpg/"][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/2046/dragonofjupiter.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/543/dragonofvenus.jpg/"][img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/3786/dragonofvenus.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/705/dragonofdarkmoon.jpg/"][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/3674/dragonofdarkmoon.jpg[/img][/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 can you first write the lores for Silver Moon and Mercury first? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Silver Moon: It has quite a powerful effect, I'd make it so it must have three tributes. Mercury: All other to 0... Powerful effect, quite possibly OPed, the fact yours are also effected may balance. Why is it's attribute water when Mercury is the hottest planet? Mars: Very easy to summon, may want to find some sort of limit for it. The burn is useless which may balance the easy summoning. Jupiter: I like this one, good effect for the biggest planet in the solar system. But what happens to the equipped monster once it loses the attack gain? Does it just become dead weight? Venus: The first effect doesn't fit the arch at all. Good secondary effect. Dark Moon: It has a good attack, but there are so many better cards, why bother running it? Once some changes are made I'd love to see the arch developed more (including the other outer planets (Jupiter is an outer planet). Maybe even add Pluto as summon support of some description, or a searcher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [b][color=#cc0066]Silver Moon Dragon Lore:[/color][/b] This card gains the total ATK and DEF of the monsters Tributed for its Tribute Summon. When this card is Tribute SUmmoned, select 1 of the Tributed Effect monsters in the Graveyard. Treat that card's name and that monster's name and and this card gains the same effects as that monster. [b][color=#0000cd]Mercury Dragon lore::[/color][/b] You can Tribute Summon this card with 3 Tributes. When this card is Tribute Summoned, apply the appropriate effectsQ -2 Tributes: Change all monsters on the field to Attack Position -3 Tributes: The ATK of all other face-up monsters on the field become 0To be honest I made all Sailor Senshi from Sailor Moon become duelists, that's why I created a dragon for each one of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 If ever I hated an anime, that's it... Even so Pluto *cough Neptune *cough Uranus *cough (I swear I know that through friends) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Never mind, in any case I would never make snything for Uranus and Neptune, the only thing good for them is the Shadow RealmI can make a Saturn and a Pluto Dragon as well but I am ran our of ideas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inoko Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 So does your Eternal Twin-Headed Eagle have anything to do with the planetary dragons or is it just bonus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Let me explain According to my fanfiction, my character is chosen to inhabit this divine creature inside his body, that eagle gives him ssuper powers to fight evil, along with those powers he was given this card for extra help, after that he asked his friend Atem to teach him how to duel. after hard training, he managed to be the best duelist ever...The ATK and DEF of this card is infinite because he is the chosen one to hold it, however if anyone else takes it, it is very powerfull again since it has ALL the Egyptian Gods abilities together... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inoko Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 XD oops i didnt realize the line between the dragons and eagle, though its a cool backstory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 A whole fanfic lies behind all this, besides I made the dragons for Inner Sailor Senshi, that's why they have those colors.Finally I manages to make a dragon for P;uto And Saturn as well...here goes: [URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/692/dragonofplutom.jpg/][IMG]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5029/dragonofplutom.jpg[/IMG][/URL][URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/16/dragonofsaturn.jpg/][IMG]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8985/dragonofsaturn.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flinsbon Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 It looks like your going to need help from someone who actually [i]likes[/i] Sailor Moon, unlike gimmiepie (no offence to him, but if he doesn't even like the anime idk how much help you can get...) So yeah the effects seems pretty good. I can see Silver Moon's effect is from Sailor Moon's pen and Mercury's is obv shabon spray (i take it you watch japanese with english subs given that u do refer to them as senshi - approved ;D). not sure where the other effects come from, but im not sure either on Venus, Jupiter, or Dark Moon, so i guess theyre fine. For Mars, i'd suggest using an effect from Akuryo Taisan, like negated the effects of monsters. if u use this, the special summon effect is too op, tho. Sry i couldnt offer much more help. If you'd like, u can bounce some ideas off my sailor moon cards (just click on the banner in my sig) or check out the other guy with a sailor moon set in the pop culture section. Or feel free to pm me with questions or w/e. p.s. ur card types should have a capital "D" ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 I am a Sailor Moon fan my friend and I tried to choose thier effects noy according to their attacks but I have my own reasons to do this, I have created many many Sailor Moon cards as well and I use them as my Deck in my fanfic, the girls are my friends and they exist in my Deck hehe, so the Heart of the Cards apples for good here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Dragon of Saturn isn't anything new, it's a lot like Shinato King of a Higher Planer's effect for Pluto it's also pretty good, but it's a shame the effect negation is temporary for that one there's nothing really wrong, would be really nice if you combined it with some ancient gear effects or something along those lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325708804' post='5748107'] Dragon of Saturn isn't anything new, it's a lot like Shinato King of a Higher Planer's effect for Pluto it's also pretty good, but it's a shame the effect negation is temporary for that one there's nothing really wrong, would be really nice if you combined it with some ancient gear effects or something along those lines [/quote] If you have any better ideas about Pluto and Saturn, please let me know and I will re-create them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shelly Xia Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 Hey, New Pharaoh what's the attack and defense for Eternal Twin-Headed Phoenix and Dark Eternal Twin-Headed Phoenix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='Shelly Xia' timestamp='1325714491' post='5748304'] Hey, New Pharaoh what's the attack and defense for Eternal Twin-Headed Phoenix and Dark Eternal Twin-Headed Phoenix. [/quote] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]If the chose ones hold them, it's infinite, or else the ATK and DEF goes like this:[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]-It begins with 4000[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]-This card gains 1000 points for each card in your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]-If this card is Tribute Summoned, it gains the ATK and DEF of the Tribute materials[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]For example: 4000 + 6 cards * 1000 + 3000 + 3000 + 3000 (Three Blue-Eyes White Dragons)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Total: 4000+6000+9000=19000[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Besides you can sacrifice monsters to increase their power, you can transfer all your LifePoints except 1 and fuse yourself with him, or you can offer 2 monsters and make his power infinite for 1 round (not both at the same time) and finally if a monster is summoned, this card can attack aytomatically and decrease the ATK or DEF of the summoned monster by 2000. Finally you can pay 1000 LifePoints to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. [/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 [quote name='Flinsbon' timestamp='1325679728' post='5747631'] It looks like your going to need help from someone who actually [i]likes[/i] Sailor Moon, unlike gimmiepie (no offence to him, but if he doesn't even like the anime idk how much help you can get...) [/quote] I can give help regarding the effectiveness of the cards, and their realism. Pluto and Saturn have good, well balanced effects, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1325793061' post='5749799'] I can give help regarding the effectiveness of the cards, and their realism. Pluto and Saturn have good, well balanced effects, nice work. [/quote] Thank you for your willingness to help but it's ok, I can handle this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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