Rivenroth Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 I entered this card in a contest, and I decided that I actually want some more criticism on it. I tried something way different with the effect (different for spirits anyway) and I'd like some feedback on the way it's received mostly, but OCG errors and fixes are welcome as well. Last thing, when you're reading the effect, whoever has control at the time a part of the effect is applied, is the person applying said effect. [spoiler=Yomi Isayama][img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3529/yomiisayamauwk.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 Don't believe in your own Bump. Believe in my Bump that believes in your Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 /Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3ath79 Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Pretty much tribute 1 monster, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls, inflict 1250 damage to your opponent. Effect is good but it can be beaten easily. I'm not experienced at card analyses, but I know that this card would be banned even though this^^ is all it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='d3ath79' timestamp='1325863212' post='5750819'] Pretty much tribute 1 monster, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls, inflict 1250 damage to your opponent. Effect is good but it can be beaten easily. I'm not experienced at card analyses, but I know that this card would be banned even though this^^ is all it is. [/quote] Nope. Good card design. A small lava golem. if it returns to the hand at the End Phase, how does the 800 burn apply? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1325988450' post='5753586'] Nope. Good card design. A small lava golem. if it returns to the hand at the End Phase, how does the 800 burn apply? [/quote] They control it, take the damage, and give it to me during my Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Angeloid Beta' timestamp='1325988591' post='5753595'] They control it, take the damage, and give it to me during my Standby Phase. [/quote] Nvm this card just got a bit OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1325988845' post='5753607'] Nvm this card just got a bit OP. [/quote] So I'm assuming you thought the burn would be applied to yourself? Would it be better that way, or should I just remove that burn effect completely? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Angeloid Beta' timestamp='1325989289' post='5753617'] So I'm assuming you thought the burn would be applied to yourself? Would it be better that way, or should I just remove that burn effect completely? [/quote] No, just the fact that you can constantly clean your opponent's field. It's laval golem...x infinity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3ath79 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1325991722' post='5753712'] No, just the fact that you can constantly clean your opponent's field. It's laval golem...x infinity. [/quote] Read my first comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 [quote name='d3ath79' timestamp='1325992965' post='5753760'] Read my first comment. [/quote] Irrelevant. Your first comment was dumb, IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1325991722' post='5753712'] No, just the fact that you can constantly clean your opponent's field. It's laval golem...x infinity. [/quote] Well, how does "When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy one monster you control and one your opponent controls; Both players take damage equal to half the combined original ATK of the destroyed monsters." sound for a fix on the field clearing part? I like the card idea, so I'd like to try and make it balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakuza13 Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 O-O OMG that card is amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 [quote name='Angeloid Beta' timestamp='1326073684' post='5755554'] Well, how does "When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy one monster you control and one your opponent controls; Both players take damage equal to half the combined original ATK of the destroyed monsters." sound for a fix on the field clearing part? I like the card idea, so I'd like to try and make it balanced [/quote] No, then it's just bad. If both players take dmg, it's just going to make it easier for ur opponent to win, or you're suicidal. It's always going to be a bit OP, if u balance it, then it just sucks. Leave it like this, make more cards. kk[quote name='Zakuza13' timestamp='1326079337' post='5755734'] O-O OMG that card is amazing [/quote] Sadly, you need to say more than that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1326150924' post='5756801'] No, then it's just bad. If both players take dmg, it's just going to make it easier for ur opponent to win, or you're suicidal. It's always going to be a bit OP, if u balance it, then it just sucks. Leave it like this, make more cards. kk [/quote] Alright then, thanks for all the feedback sgruggy ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 [quote name='Angeloid Beta' timestamp='1326164430' post='5757240'] Alright then, thanks for all the feedback sgruggy ^ ^ [/quote] No problem. Still need new ppl to critique my set b4 it dies LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3ath79 Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 Allow your opponent to attack as well, then take away the 800 damage, but then it wouldn't be the card that you want. There is no way for you to fix this card, because you really like it. This card might be limited, but it is broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 [quote name='d3ath79' timestamp='1326206737' post='5757627'] Allow your opponent to attack as well, then take away the 800 damage, but then it wouldn't be the card that you want. There is no way for you to fix this card, because you really like it. This card might be limited, but it is broken. [/quote] Take away the cannot ATK, do not change the burn Just special summon in DEF position to troll em rofl. And no it's not near broken tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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