hatepain99 Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 [center][img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/4771/343683.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Lore:1 demon tuner/1 or more non-tuner dark monsters if you attack your opponet directly they loose an additional 500 points damage[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novias_The_ArchFiend Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 IMO, the OCG is a little off, try [i]If this card attacks your opponent's life points directly, they take an additional 500 in life points damage[/i]. Overall, the card is good maybe a Fiend type over demon, but yeah, good card, fairly reasonable effect balanced with decent ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 It's ok, I like that you kept it simple. My advice, don't use fake-types. It's not against the rules or anything, it's just usually frowned upon. Try making it a Fiend. As far as the effect goes, I think the fix would be '[i]If this card attacks your opponent directly: Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.[/i]' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novias_The_ArchFiend Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 [quote name='Angeloid Beta' timestamp='1325732158' post='5748856'] It's ok, I like that you kept it simple. My advice, don't use fake-types. It's not against the rules or anything, it's just usually frowned upon. Try making it a Fiend. As far as the effect goes, I think the fix would be '[i]If this card attacks your opponent directly: Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.[/i]' [/quote] with that the summoning conditions, IMO, I would change to [i]1 Fiend-Type Tuner + 1 DARK or more non-Tuner monsters[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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