Jackel The Mad Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/2419/483050.jpg[/img] [u][b][i]Lore:[/i][/b][/u]This card cannot by Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Deamonic Puppetry".Once per turn when this card is Attacked change the Attack target to one Moster on your opponets side of the field.This card gains 500 ATK for each Zombie or Fiend Moster s on the field as long as "Deamonic Puppetry" is on the field . Once per turn pay 500 lp to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Zombie monster from the graveryard.Your can only activate one effect per turn. [img]http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2419/483050.jpg[/img] [i][u][b]Lore:[/b][/u][/i]Once per turn send 2 Zombie or Fiend type monsters to Special Summon 1 level 7 or 8 monster from your hand or deck.As long as this card is face up on the field if you would take direct damage discard one card from your hand instead. All Zombie type monster on the field gain 500 ATK. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/2419/483050.jpg[/img] [u][i][b]Lore:[/b][/i][/u]Flip:Decrease the Attack of all Effect monster on your opponents side of the field by 1000 till the end of the turn.If "Demon Inside" is face up this card is flipped face down at the end of the turn. [img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2419/483050.jpg[/img] [u][i][b]Lore:[/b][/i][/u]This card is treated as a Normal Moster unless it is attached to "Darkest Soul"; if so it gains one of the following effects: *Half the Atk of all monsters on your opponents side of the field till the end of the turn. *If "Pandamonium" is on the field this card can Atk your Opponent directly. [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2419/483050.jpg[/img] [u][i][b]Lore:[/b][/i][/u]This card cannot be normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special by attaching "Icy Hearts" to this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Locke Leed Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 Interesting cards. I don't know if you read my "Leader" card concept but it seems like to me that your Demonic Puppet Master would work better as a Leader card in my new YuGiOh Remix play style... Besides offering you the Leader insight, I think it's pretty good. I'm curious what the others have to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 really good for this Heoya the atk gain effect is fine the way it is although for changing the atk to one of your opponent's monsters, along with the effect of special summoning a lv4 or lower zombie from your graveyard you should have said you can't activate both effects in the same turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 looks little pretty cool, the pics are very nice, the effects looks great I guess I should use those cards if they were real because I love Fiend Strategy, so I could combine with Zombie to create a interesting deck with then =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Thank you for the advise and I will update the card in a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Updated and Added Demon Of Lust Kaz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Lust Kaz's effect is fine, but 500 atk drop is a little bit too weak even Shrink is better than that, and we all know that card isn't popular anymore. Thus you should make the drop at least 1000, it's only 1 turn after all, so there's no harm in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 7, 2012 Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 I'm glad to see you made the changes now I'll wait for the next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 It won't take to long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 Updated added Darkest Soul and Icy Heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Heart's 1st effect is essentially like Shrink, nothing wrong with that neither is the direct atk, 1500 isn't really much the problem with Darkest Soul is that it has no effects on the field any reason why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 I am not sure I just thought a free level 6 is good enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 well it's your call Darkest Soul is relatively weak for lv6, should have made it 2300 atk or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 If you think I should add an effect I have an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Uhm how do you summon Heyoa? It says it can only be summoned by "Deamonic Puppetry", but i don't see it. is it part of a different set? As far as everything else the are pretty balanced. 3 things confuse me though. 1). Demon inside doesn't say where yu send the 2 monsters from, and where youn send them to. 2). Icy heart gets his effects if he is "attached" but he is union. I may be wrong, but I think "attached" is an Xyz term, for material. If that's what you mean, then the whole card is messed up as far as mechanics go. 3).Darkest soul: same confusion about the whole "attaching" term. Please clarify my confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Deamonic Puppetry" is demon inside I just forgot to change it.[/size][/font][/color] 1) I forgot to say graveyard 2) If I remember attaching is for XYZ and Union 3)basically you place Darkest Soul on the field and attach Icy heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Attaching, while they may seem the same, are too differnt. Unions' equip, while Xyzs' attach. It may not seem like it matters, but that changes everything. If icy heart is "attached" to something, it should no longer have an effect, as it is no longer a monster. Plus it wouldn't be able to attack directly, because it's no longer a monster. If it was union, the first effect would be okay, but the second effect will be off since it will be treated as an equip spell, in that case. There are no rules regarding what your card does (as far as being union and "equiping" or being "attached"), so it may make what i said above invalid, but your cards don't follow the normal rules. That is extremly interesting and clever on your part, but that also completely screws up Xyz/Union mechanics and technicalities. We generally try to avoid that when creating cards in general. Simple is better. If they're not simple, then the effect should be clear enough that confusion like i have is avoided. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 Ok well I wasnt sure how to word it but I do thank you for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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