Andrew Long Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Just to run this by you all, i like it and hope you do too. art work is not going to stay like that getting stuff drawn up for it. that's just a random image from the net. THIS CARD WOULD BE LIMITED to 1 per deck as it is a titan. let me know what you think. happy hunting @ndy [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1002/535963q.jpg[/img][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5413/535963.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 You have some OCG errors but I cant really help you with that and the spell card shouldn't have the same effect and picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Great idea! The effect is pretty balanced, but minx is a little weak for a level 8. Your spell card is a good idea too, banish minx then get her effect, except for ALL of your monsters. Good job mate. The only thing would be to work on your OCG (or TCG Grammer). I'm no expert, and effect's like the ones you put is tricky for me. But things like Graveyard or Deck should be caps,as far as that i wish I could help out more. srry. I think you need a different picture for the spell or monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Long Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Yea im getting 2 images drawn up for them by my gf but she is so busy and i cant draw for poo lol Grammer Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Andrew Long' timestamp='1325990984' post='5753676'] Yea im getting 2 images drawn up for them by my gf but she is so busy and i cant draw for poo lol ok will update the grammer [/quote] Hehe, you'll be waiting quite a while. But not only do you have OCG problems, but you blundered on English grammar too. The most notable fail: the Spell Card's name. Here's my rendition of your cards' effects: Nyx - When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, select 1 card from your opponent's hand, then activate 1 of the following effects: • If the selected card is a Spell Card; send it to the bottom of your opponent's Deck. • If the selected card is a Trap Card; send it to the Graveyard. • If the selected card is a monster; banish it and inflict 500 Damage to your opponent. Revenge - To activate this card: Banish 1 "Flame Titan Nyx" from your Graveyard. When you destroy an opponent's monster by battle, select 1 card from your opponent's hand, then activate 1 of the following effects: • If the selected card is a Spell Card; send it to the bottom of your opponent's Deck. • If the selected card is a Trap Card; send it to the Graveyard. • If the selected card is a monster; banish it and inflict 500 Damage to your opponent. Now, I know it isn't perfect, but it's ALOT clearer than what you had. Brush up on the new OCG (and pay attention in class), fix any other card effects you've made, and you'll be improving in no time. As for the effects themselves, I don't really like that you gave the exact same effect to the Spell Card as you did the monster card. I recommend you significantly weaken that effect so it resembles "Nyx" to an extent, but not completely. On "Nyx" though, the effect is alright (the name, Attribute, and Type remiss of Nix from inFamous 2 though xD). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Long Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 prob be waiting ages!!!!! hence why i used stock image lol lol thanks mate, will change them to what you said, as this is only the second post i have made and 4/5 cards I hope you can forgive me. lol. as for the name Nyx is from greek mythology and was a powerful greek god. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Andrew Long' timestamp='1325992772' post='5753749'] prob be waiting ages!!!!! hence why i used stock image lol lol thanks mate, will change them to what you said, as this is only the second post i have made and 4/5 cards I hope you can forgive me. lol. as for the name Nyx is from greek mythology and was a powerful greek god. lol [/quote] Huh, I read Greek Mythology, never ran into her. And don't take my effects to heart, my OCG may be a bit off. I wrote them out so they would be easier to understand overall, not so they could be correct. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Long Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 your knowledge seams to be higher than im so i think your more than likely to be right hence the change. this must be a good idea as it was posed only 2 hours ago and already some one is trying to rip off the idea!! lol not bad for a noob like me lol info on nyx - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nyx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 for Nyx all 3 effects should be fine for the monster burn seems a bit small though, but whatever Revenge is the same though it seems wrong to have virtually identical effects, I was thinking you should deviate that a bit more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Long Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 with the burn the last thought i had was - what id he had a 600 monster in attack mode for example he takes 2000 points of damage then discards a monster card ad takes another 500 damage = 2500 for one attack did not want to op it to much. spell card will be dropped to 300 damage to be different. thanks for the comments guys. sadly this is the last card idea i am posting here. dont like my ideas to be bumped 3 posts away from my post. i dont mind if some says "saw this in RP by longster and liked it so tryed my own version" like i would. but to go "ow i never saw your card" is just bs and lies. i will find another card forum thank you for your help with the cards. [img]http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5413/535963.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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