DEUS EX MACHINA (the original one which the wannabe mod thought she could steal)

[Valkyrus]

[img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/dem3.jpg[/img]


My first card in a long time.
Not sure if broken or not, gonna leave that to the people who comment.


And before anyone asks, no, it does not need to be a Machine-Type even though its name translates to God out of the Machine since here I'm using the meaning of the phrase itself, not the literal translation.


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[color=#ff0000][size=6]Btw, I never gave permission to Proffesor Kokonoe to use/steal my card, so everyone, feel free to bash her and her horrible card making skills in the other similarly titled thread.[/size][/color]

[.Rai]

Yeah, it's broken. Although, you pretty much automatically balance it if you give it like 1900 or 2000 ATK.

[Valkyrus]

[quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1326329657' post='5760320']
Yeah, it's broken. Although, you pretty much automatically balance it if you give it like 1900 or 2000 ATK.
[/quote]

hmmmm, okay, I'll make it 2000 ATK/ 2900 DEF, but I'll leave it as level 8....or 7....hmmmm..

[.Rai]

Doesn't really matter what Level, since it's mostly irrelevant. Level 7 does make it a little more abusable though.

[Valkyrus]

[quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1326330549' post='5760341']
Doesn't really matter what Level, since it's mostly irrelevant. Level 7 does make it a little more abusable though.
[/quote]

It was because I was thinking of how it would work in a Fairy Deck, and about the Xyz that could come out of it.
And since there are more level 8 fairies than level 7 ones I thought maybe 8 is better (for future rank 8's)
But 7 makes big eye, and matches the stats better so...eh, 7 it is then.

Fixed.

[ragnarok1945]

it has a nice way to negate card effects and everything

personally given the returning to your hand effect, you should have made it a little bit easier to kill

in this case 2900 def is a bit high, maybe drop it to like 2600ish

[Valkyrus]

bump

[Just Crouton]

You aren't sure if a Stardust that hits the field instead of the Graveyard, stops Mirror Force and gives you a 2000 beater i.e. another monster to attack with that turn, then recycles itself during Main Phase 2 is broken?

/okiedokie

Card should be more like Battle Fader to make it less dead. That is, make it Level 1 with 0 ATK/DEF, leave everything but the last sentence of it's effect in, and make it banish itself when it leaves the field after being SS'd by it's effect.

[Valkyrus]

[quote name='~King Crouton~' timestamp='1326350806' post='5760823']
You aren't sure if a Stardust that hits the field instead of the Graveyard, stops Mirror Force and gives you a 2000 beater i.e. another monster to attack with that turn, then recycles itself during Main Phase 2 is broken?

/okiedokie

Card should be more like Battle Fader to make it less dead. That is, make it Level 1 with 0 ATK/DEF, leave everything but the last sentence of it's effect in, and make it banish itself when it leaves the field after being SS'd by it's effect.
[/quote]

> implying stardust does not stop mirror force, is not a 2500 atk monster and does not recycle itself. /seriously?

yeah.
card should be whatever it is now. If you want to make a completely different card, feel free to make your own.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

My Body as a Shield is crying and screaming.

Right now this card doesn't have a single negative. At least cut out the last eff.

[Valkyrus]

[quote name='Darkplant - VENOM' timestamp='1326356600' post='5760844']
My Body as a Shield is crying and screaming.

Right now this card doesn't have a single negative. At least cut out the last eff.
[/quote]

that would make it just mneh, while I want it to be good :/
The most I can do is make the cost 2000 or lower the attack further.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

Add a -2000 cost to the first eff and neg the cost on the Bouncing.

[Valkyrus]

[quote name='Darkplant - VENOM' timestamp='1326361328' post='5760858']
Add a -2000 cost to the first eff and neg the cost on the Bouncing.
[/quote]

hmmm, alright, it's not much different than having the bouncing cost be 2000 instead, but
I guess it sort of prevents abuse with Birdman for example.

Gonna fix it.

[Valkyrus]

Fixed.
And bump.