Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted January 13, 2012 Report Share Posted January 13, 2012 [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/7021/332516.jpg[/img] [s]LORE: this card cannot be summoned except by its own effect. if there are exactly 5 dark attribute monsters on your graveyard, you can special summon this card. you can discard a number of cards from your hand; until the end phase of this turn, the number pf dark monsters on your grave yard is treated as the number of cards you discarded.[/s] actual lore: [center][b]This card can only be special summoned while there are 5 or more DARK monsters in your graveyard. You can pay 1000 life points; draw 1 card. Only once: you can discard a number of cards from your hand; until the end phase of this turn, the number of DARK monsters in your graveyard is treated as the number of cards you discarded. If this card leaves the field, banish this card.[/b][/center] comments? i can already feel she's OP'ed but still i tried to give it a shot.. anyway... thankss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 change dark attribute to DARK the same with the last sentence, change dark to DARK also you misspelled "of", for a second I got confused now, as for the effect, I'm unsure what you're trying to use this with. Give an example Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 look really nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted January 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1326499944' post='5763039'] change dark attribute to DARK the same with the last sentence, change dark to DARK also you misspelled "of", for a second I got confused now, as for the effect, I'm unsure what you're trying to use this with. Give an example [/quote] gosh.. i did so many errors... ill update that now... i even posted a different lore gotta update that... (you can notice that the lore written in the card and the lore posted in the topic is different from each other >.<) the actual lore is this: [center][b] this card cannot be summoned except by its own effect. if there are 5 or more DARK attribute monsters on your graveyard, you can special summon this card. you can pay 1000 life points; draw 1 card. only once: you can discard a number of cards from your hand; until the end phase of this turn, the number of DARK monsters on your grave yard is treated as the number of cards you discarded. if this card leaves the field, banish this card.[/b][/center] her main focus is to help summon those monsters that requires exact number of dark attribute monsters on the grave like the dark counter parts.. "dark nephtys" requires exactly 4(? im not sure) , "dark armed dragon" requires exactly 3 and "rainbow dark dragon" which requires 7.. i also added the drawing effect (1000 points per card) so that she can increase the number of cards on the hand which can also be used for her effect. [quote name='ShinyBlade' timestamp='1326505836' post='5763217'] look really nice [/quote] thankss.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 you still got the OCG part wrong you only need to say DARK, not DARK attribute (the attribute part isn't needed because we know DARK is an attribute anyway) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3ath79 Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 [b]Lore Fix: This card can only be special summoned while there are 5 or more DARK monsters in your graveyard. You can pay 1000 life points; draw 1 card. Only once: you can discard a number of cards from your hand; until the end phase of this turn, the number of DARK monsters in your graveyard is treated as the number of cards you discarded. If this card leaves the field, banish this card.[/b] [left]I don't get the part where your DARK monsters are treated as discarded. Maybe if the DARK monsters in your graveyard were treated as if they were discard [b]this[/b] turn. Anyway, pretty dumb effect.[/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted January 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1326519645' post='5763631'] you still got the OCG part wrong you only need to say DARK, not DARK attribute (the attribute part isn't needed because we know DARK is an attribute anyway) [/quote] sorry bout the ocg.. gotta fix that... [quote name='d3ath79' timestamp='1326540619' post='5763749'] [b]Lore Fix: This card can only be special summoned while there are 5 or more DARK monsters in your graveyard. You can pay 1000 life points; draw 1 card. Only once: you can discard a number of cards from your hand; until the end phase of this turn, the number of DARK monsters in your graveyard is treated as the number of cards you discarded. If this card leaves the field, banish this card.[/b] [left]I don't get the part where your DARK monsters are treated as discarded. Maybe if the DARK monsters in your graveyard were treated as if they were discard [b]this[/b] turn. Anyway, pretty dumb effect.[/left] [/quote] [b]"you can discard a number of cards from your hand; until the end phase of this turn, the number of DARK monsters in your graveyard is treated as the number of cards you discarded. If this card leaves the field, banish this card."[/b] [b]discard this 7 cards. number of dark monsters on your graveyard will be treated as 7.. thus you can summon 1 dark rainbow dragon .. very simple.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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