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[Alcander's Single "Knock-Out Spark Shark"]


▼AlcaNdeR▼

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me being me, ill help on OCG if you dont mind ;)

[b][u]If this card is targeted for an attack[/u]: The attacking monster cannot declare an attack during your opponent's next turn. If this card is destroyed by battle while you control 1 (or no) other monsters: Special Summon this card [u]in face-up Attack Position[/u]; your opponent can only target this card for an attack until the [u]end of their next Battle Phase[/u].[/b]

1st underline = It can be possible for it to be targeted by effects to... but the wording here is nothing to be really worried about, but you can decide on putting in "by an opponent's monster" just before the colon... but again, not really needed...
2nd underline = usually SS's are in face-up attack position, im just letting you know that it may be ok to remove that part... but again, not really necessary to do that either
3rd underline = was my addition, your plan was for your opponent to attack that card until their next battle phase starts, but you could have activated this effect during the last part of the previous battle phase... i didnt want your plan to fall back on you ;) ... but it's alright if you dont want to have it...

I say really good card; though its stats may not be currently up to par with Lv4's of today... it's still really good IMO, 9/10

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[quote name='▼AlcaNdeR▼' timestamp='1326945405' post='5770957']
Wow thanks BFGS D: you take time and effort to comment, thanks a million :) now I realize my OCG needs work, like most of the time x)
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no problem ^_^ tbh it doesnt take a lot of time at all... plus i like doing it... and your OCG is fine, i was giving mostly suggestions... but thanks anyway :D

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