stonehardy123 Posted January 23, 2012 Report Share Posted January 23, 2012 still working on these give me feed back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted January 23, 2012 Report Share Posted January 23, 2012 ... Learn your types kid, Cat = Beast Raccoon = Beast Turtle = Reptile Grammar is bad, No MAIN characters (Naruto, Sasuke, ect.) kinda ruined it, 2/10. Work at it and you'll get there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nulk Posted January 23, 2012 Report Share Posted January 23, 2012 He pretty muched summed it up. The turtle card is a bit op. Summon it and it goes straight to def then it's the only atk target with 2500 def. I have to say this again grammer is bad. Nice try though. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted January 23, 2012 Report Share Posted January 23, 2012 [quote name='nulk' timestamp='1327340565' post='5777236'] He pretty muched summed it up. The turtle card is a bit op. Summon it and it goes straight to def then it's the only atk target with 2500 def. I have to say this again grammer is bad. Nice try though. 2/10 [/quote] read it carefully, the way it is worded makes it say that it is the only card "you" can attack, meaning that it stops you from attacking your opponent. That is extremely Up'ed. The cat is kind of useless as its effect is lackluster while the one tailed beast is Op'ed as it is basically a stronger fortress warrior with an effect stealing ability. Poorly done: 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nulk Posted January 23, 2012 Report Share Posted January 23, 2012 [quote name='Admiral Tim' timestamp='1327348970' post='5777399'] read it carefully, the way it is worded makes it say that it is the only card "you" can attack, meaning that it stops you from attacking your opponent. That is extremely Up'ed. The cat is kind of useless as its effect is lackluster while the one tailed beast is Op'ed as it is basically a stronger fortress warrior with an effect stealing ability. Poorly done: 2/10 [/quote] LMAO i didnt even catch that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted January 24, 2012 Report Share Posted January 24, 2012 [quote name='Admiral Tim' timestamp='1327348970' post='5777399'] read it carefully, the way it is worded makes it say that it is the only card "you" can attack, meaning that it stops you from attacking your opponent. That is extremely Up'ed. The cat is kind of useless as its effect is lackluster while the one tailed beast is Op'ed as it is basically a stronger fortress warrior with an effect stealing ability. Poorly done: 2/10 [/quote] My freind used to use Fortress Warrior alot, but then he took a Xyz to the knee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-3 Posted January 24, 2012 Report Share Posted January 24, 2012 I thought the Tailed Beasts were supposed to be really powerful, so I do not know how their attacks are so low. If given the choice, I would omit these cards from any deck I made. Maybe redesigning them as part of a functional deck would work as a guide for how powerful they should be. Please come back after you have tried doing so, stonehardy. You may be pleased with the results -- and you will get rid of the complaint regarding the lack of characters. The text definately could use some refining. Run it by one of us before you Generate the card, and we'll help you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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