FateTheSeer Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 I haven't created a card for quite some time, so I decided to make a new one to go with an old archtype I was working on, please correct grammer and let me know what you think [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/7476/20042n.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 i think there is already a card with that effect... maybe you should add more unique effect.. provided it is a lvl 8synchro monster,, i would rather synchro summon archfiend or stardust.. (as archriend and stardust can be more usefull)... but im not saying that the effect is useless ,, its just that... it needs more "power" i suggest you describe the card more... like why is it named eternal sorrow dragon?.. thats what i think... ^^nice artwork anyway.. i think it suites the dragon in someway.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted January 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 Its named Eternal Sorrow Dragon as it is tied in with my Sorrowful Archtype, and what other effect would you reccomend? changing it to 500 damage per level? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 hmmm 200x level is enough., you can leave his effect like that,, i wont recommend any effect because it is your card its your ideas.^^, since it is tied in an archetype i think you should add more that supports the archetype or give more emphasis on its name like being sadist since its about sorrow.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted January 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 Most of the Sorrowful cards involve damaging both players but this is one of the few cards that dont cause its owner sorrow by draining thier life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 my suggestions might sound awful (you can just really ignore them) *as long as he's face up, you wont take any effect damage from a sorrow card or *as long as he's face up each time you will burn your opponent's LP a bonus of like 200+ follows.(there is a magic card similar to this effect i cant remember it's name) or *or you can pay an like 500 life points then your opponent's life points burn for like 1000? honestly if you dont like these you can just ignore them xD since its your cards xD (i said i wont recommend .... i FAILED ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes493 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 I don't think you need to capitalize "your". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 it has a very good burn, more than likely up to 1600ish since 3000 can handle most lv8 or lower monsters looks relatively easy to summon, so that's a plus too don't change it to 500 per level though, that'll be too easy OTK set up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FateTheSeer Posted January 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 Thats what I thought, how about you gain the same amount of life points that your opponent loses due to this cards effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 25, 2012 Report Share Posted January 25, 2012 well that'll still have to depend unless the gain to you + the amount your opponent loses is at like 1500 or more, it's still not THAT practical Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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