Astolfo Posted January 27, 2012 Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Well, decided to make a new card, currently love Xyz cards right now, and here's a few more![/b][/color] [spoiler='Cards'][spoiler='Tsunami Leviathan'][img]http://i42.tinypic.com/nbp7gg.png[/img][/spoiler] [color=#000066][b]Just in case the lore's too small:[/b][/color] [spoiler='Lore'][color=#000066][b]3 Level 4 monsters[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]If this card is Xyz Summoned: Your opponent cannot activate any effects until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material; Change all monsters your opponent controls to Defense Position and your monsters inflict Piercing Battle Damage until the End Phase. If this effect is used: Your opponent cannot change the battle position of the monsters, use them for a Synchro Summon, use them for a Xyz Summon, or tribute them until their next End Phase. During the End Phase you activate this effect: Destroy all other monsters you control. [/b][/color][/spoiler] [spoiler='Bedeviled Witch'][img]http://i41.tinypic.com/1zgdrgn.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Fell Prince'][img]http://i44.tinypic.com/ednqw.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='King of Malice'][img]http://i41.tinypic.com/331nek7.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Devil Thunder'][img]http://i43.tinypic.com/1z3vx9c.png[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler] [color=#000066][b]Currently dunno how to make the text for the name look like the silver foil emboss, so until I get it from someone who knows, that's my best imitation.[/b][/color] [right][color=#000066][b]~Nemesis[/b][/color][/right] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted January 28, 2012 Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 Very nice Mini-Set, like the concept it is very well thought out. No grammatical/OCG errors as far as I can see and I really like Leviathan's effect. Good Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Guise, comments pweaze ;~;[/b][/color] [right][color=#000066][b]~Nemesis[/b][/color][/right] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 28, 2012 Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 Leviathan should be fine the way it is given the last drawback of you losing all your other monsters for Witch it might be too much, you can burn 2500 to your opponent, and that's not even saying there aren't any additional spell counters on the field, seems too easy OTK for Prince the taking control part is still on the OPed end, just like Change of Heart. Battle damage would just add to that, personally I'd have dropped battle damage to 0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Are the others fine? Also, will edit Witch/Prince now.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 28, 2012 Report Share Posted January 28, 2012 the others looked reasonable enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Bumparoo~[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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