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^^ Thanks everyone, and Soul Immortal-I'm really honored you hold my work in such high esteem. You've always been one of the members I've always looked up to and tried to impress-ever since I joined, I've admired your work and great attitude towards everyone on this Forum. You have no clue how rare a quality that is-keep it.

 

And SirBeanAlot, thanks, I don't like 10/10's much either. :3

 

Halfway through Tragic Romance!!! Thanks for all your support everyone.

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Hmm.

 

Well, I have already applauded you for your sheer talent on many an occasion. Since this is an Archive, I won't make any indepth reviews here, instead resorting to a few general comments.

 

I really liked the intro picture. Lose the "..." after the Archive, since it's unneccessary, and ask someone skilled in Photoshop to blend in the border better, and maybe create some sort of border around the different images, and it will be nigh-perfect.

 

The way you arranged your Sets - is the order chronological? My preference is always a counter-chronological order, with Singles placed first, Incomplete Sets second, and Complete Sets third, with each individual Set also in counter-chronological order (most recent first). But that's mostly my preference.

 

Use colors to decorate your Set / card names. Use a variety of fonts / sizes to make them more appealing to the eye. Use double- and triple-spacing. Use center alignment. All these will help give off a better overall image.

 

Scrap the differently-numbered asterisks in front of each card / Set. It is pointless, and after a short while it will unneccessarily and annoyingly push the names to the middle of the text. Use a better symbol (a colored one too), and just one for each Set. Maybe color it differently each time for a better effect.

 

Onto the Sets themselves... my favorite Set, as a whole, would be your Valkyries - I've already grown fond of them ever since I used them in Chronicles. Next would be the Tragic Romance set that we had come up with so long ago, since I view it as something we worked together to accomplish. Your Dragonness Set is pretty high up too. I found the Samurai one generally... well, just not as interesting as the rest of them. Still a good work, overall.

 

Overall, the Singles aren't quite as mind-boggling. Doll of Silence is a decent card, although nothing really special compared to most of the Sets. As I've said in your Dragonness thread, Vanesse is a decent card, but again, could be better. Aisse didn't catch my eye either. You might want to create a few new ones for that section, but that's just one man's opinion.

 

Whatever you decide to do, good luck. You are already a top-notch card maker, keep up the excellent work.

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Thanks for the great suggestions, Ixigo-your help is always appreciated, of course. I'll take some of these into mind....and singles aren't really my thing, so I take that as a compliment! :3 Thanks for taking the time to type all of that-I really appreciate it.

 

P.S. The Archive Banner was just something I threw together using Paint and GIMP-I've no clue on how to do anything but Image Editing Effects, really.

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