FateTheSeer Posted January 29, 2012 Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 Here's my new card, let me know what you think and give me ideas to improve it, if it needs it, oh and please correct my grammar. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/970/20042q.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 29, 2012 Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 for the most part it should be fine the only thing that you might want to change is the 2nd attack part where if it attacks a second time, it can only do half the battle damage, or something like that (in case it's a direct attack) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 29, 2012 Report Share Posted January 29, 2012 non-Tuner monsters. Capitalize the "t." "This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type Monster." Overused picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 30, 2012 Report Share Posted January 30, 2012 what's so wrong about an overused pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted January 30, 2012 Report Share Posted January 30, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1327886783' post='5788672'] what's so wrong about an overused pic? [/quote] Nothing really, it's just unoriginal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 30, 2012 Report Share Posted January 30, 2012 eh, you'll overlook that in time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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