Dark Armor Master

[Gαr]

Yo, this my first on these forums. I've used the website a lot, but not the forums. So I would like to show off one of my cards from my little archtype, Dark

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1 'Dark" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card is unaffected by the opponents Spells or Traps during the Battle Phase. Your opponent takes damage equal to the original ATK of one Level 4 or lower "Dark" monster on your side of the field. If there is a "Dark" monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be destoyed or take battle damage.

Its not the greatest thing in the world, but this card was one of my first cards. So, hope you like.

[yingyangchild]

When you say "Your opponent takes damage equal to the original ATK of one Level 4 or lower 'Dark' monster on your side of the field.", are you sacrificing that Level 4 or lower "Dark" type monster?

I like the picture, btw. It looks good with the silvery card

[Gαr]

never thought that effect. i just added it for more power behind the card.

[A.Prime]

You added it, but it's blind! anyway..this is your 1st card, I think, so it's not so bad! You need to learn some things about OCG, (Official Card Grammar). Also... you must use pictures with backgrouds!

Now... about your lore (effect).. lets see..

Your lore:
1 'Dark" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card is unaffected by the opponents Spells or Traps during the Battle Phase. Your opponent takes damage equal to the original ATK of one Level 4 or lower "Dark" monster on your side of the field. If there is a "Dark" monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be destoyed or take battle damage.

My lore corrected:
1 [b]DARK [/b]Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card is unaffected by [b]your [/b]opponent [b]Spell [/b]or [b]Trap Cards [/b]during the Battle Phase. [b]Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster you control. If you do, y[/b]our opponent takes damage equal to [b]its[/b] original ATK. [b]While you control[/b] a [b]DARK[/b] monster, this card cannot be destoyed[b] in battle and battle damage become's 0[/b].

I hope I helped.. if you need more tips PM me!

[Gαr]

thanks for the tips. the reason dark is in quotes is because this a part of my archtype, Dark.

[A.Prime]

Why you didn't say so in the 1st place mate?? Anyway... I think that is good to change it in "Dark Armor" Archtype! This is my opinion always! Do as you please!

To correct my lore with the archtype:
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]1 "Dark"[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]This card is unaffected by [/size][/font][/color][b]your [/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]opponent [/size][/font][/color][b]Spell [/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]or [/size][/font][/color][b]Trap Cards [/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]during the Battle Phase. [/size][/font][/color][b]Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower "Dark" monster you control. If you do, y[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]our opponent takes damage equal to [/size][/font][/color][b]its[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] original ATK. [/size][/font][/color][b]While you control[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] a "Dark"[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] monster, this card cannot be destoyed[/size][/font][/color][b] in battle and battle damage become's 0[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3].[/size][/font][/color]