Night Crawlers Set (My first official set)

[mark24kid]

So this is my first set on yugiohcardmaker, I hope you guys like and I will accept any critisism you guys want to give me I accept

Okay so here's the set.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-001TheDarkVampire.jpg[/img]
LORE: A vampire also consumed by the darkness. It has amazing strength and speed, buy is useless when captured.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-002RockerChick.jpg[/img]
LORE: A girl that's amazing on the guitar and bass. Her guitar is used to destroy her opponents.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-003TheVampiresFlute.jpg[/img]
LORE: Special Summon 1 Vampire Type Monster from your hand, deck or graveyard.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-004GlowoftheVampire.jpg[/img]
LORE: Increase the ATK of a Vampire Type Monster on your side of the field by 1000 points. Destroy the selected monster at the End Phase of the turn.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-005NightWingVampire.jpg[/img]
LORE: Once per turn, select one Warrior Type, Male Type or Female Type Monster on the field and destroy it, increase the ATK of this card by the original ATK of the destroyed card.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-006DayBreakAngel.jpg[/img]
LORE: Negate the effect of "Night Wing Vampire" while this card is face-up on the field.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-007RedEyeofDeceit.jpg[/img]
LORE: Activate this card when an opponents Warrior Type, Male Type or Female Type Monster declares an attack on a Vampire Type Monster. Negate the attack and the attacking monster cannot attack as long as this card remains face up on the field.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-008PrincessoftheHunters.jpg[/img]
LORE: While this card is face-up on the field, all Vampire Type Monsters on the field cannot attack and their effects are negated. Once per turn, during your End Phase, destroy one Vampire Type Monster your opponent controls.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-009HuntingGround.jpg[/img]
LORE: When a Warrior Type, Male Type or Female Type Monster is Special Summoned while Vampire Type Monsters are face-up on either players side of the field, destroy them immediately and increase the ATK of all Vampire Type Monsters on the field by the destroyed monsters ATK. Vampire Type Monsters cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect.
[img]http://i1166.photobucket.com/albums/q607/eikkin56/NCR-010VampirePrincess.jpg[/img]
LORE: This card cannot be destroyed while "Vampire King" is face-up on the field. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, Special Summon "Vampire King" from your deck.

This set is not complete, but I wanted to get a feel for how I am doing. Hope everyone enjoys

[ragnarok1945]

for Vampire's Flute, Vampire isn't a real type, you mean zombie

that goes for Night Wing Vampire for you to change the type

male and female types aren't real types either

your Glow of the Vampire is meh. Other atk boosting cards can do the same and you don't lose the monster

[101100111000]

Uh-huh, make up three monster types, and post it in RC... *tear*

Vampire's Flute is insane. SS any Vampire (Zombie, according to rag)-Type, from anywhere? That's just too easy.

Aside from that, some of these monster effects are really, bleh. Some of them depend on your opponent running a Warrior deck, which would mean a guaranteed loss if I use anything else, like Dragunities.

Yeah, these cards need some serious revisions. Especially the made-up Types. Those things are throwing my fung-shway off.

[mark24kid]

[quote name='101100111000' timestamp='1328771879' post='5805864']
Uh-huh, make up three monster types, and post it in RC... *tear*

Vampire's Flute is insane. SS any Vampire (Zombie, according to rag)-Type, from anywhere? That's just too easy.

Aside from that, some of these monster effects are really, bleh. Some of them depend on your opponent running a Warrior deck, which would mean a guaranteed loss if I use anything else, like Dragunities.

Yeah, these cards need some serious revisions. Especially the made-up Types. Those things are throwing my fung-shway off.
[/quote]

Sorry about the made up types, besides that I thought they were realistic. I just wasn't sure where to post them with the fictional types. Sorry about that. Could you direct me to where they should be?