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[center][size=7][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][b]Valox World[/b][/font][/size][/center]

[center][size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][b]First of all, this Set's pics are all from Valox Photobucket archive (unless stated otherwise).[/b][/font][/size][/center]

[center][size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][b]The name Valox is just a name I chosed for this Set because I think it's a good Archetype name. But I would'nt have come up with the name if it wasn't for the member Valox, so I thank him for the fine name.[/b][/font][/size][/center]

[center][size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][b]This Set will be updated every Saturday or Sunday (Swedish Time) and maybe Wednesdays/Thursdays.[/b][/font][/size][/center]



[center][b][size=4]Cards:[/size][/b][/center]



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[i]Once per turn: You can banish 1 "Valox" monster you control to destroy 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on the field. Each time a "Valox" monster is destroyed: Banish it. Once per turn: If a "Valox" monster would be destroyed; it is not. If there are 5 or more banished "Valox" monsters: You can pay 500 Life Points to add 1 banished "Valox" monster to the top of your Deck.[/i]

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[left][i]Once per turn: banish 1 Level 3 or lower "Valox" monster from your Deck. This card gain 400 ATK and DEF for each card banished by this effect.[/i][/left]

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[left][i]Once per turn: if a "Valox" monster is banished; increase the Level of 1 "Valox" monster you control by 1 or 2, until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed: banish 1 monster your opponent controls.[/i][/left]

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[left][i]When this card destroys a monster: banish this card and 1 "Valox" monster from your hand. Then Special Summon 1 banished Level 4 or lower "Valox" monster. This card cannot be Special Summoned while it is banished.[/i][/left]

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[left][i]Each time a "Valox" monster is banished: increase the ATK of all "Valox" monsters by 400. Instead of your normal Draw Phase: you can add 1 banished "Valox" monster to your hand instead. During each of your End Phases: draw 1 card; then banish 1 card in your Graveyard.[/i][/left]

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[left][i]3 Level 6 "Valox" monsters[/i][/left]
[left][i]This card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects. You can detatch 1 Xyz Material from this card to increase this cards ATK and DEF by 800. When this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards. Once per turn: you can banish 1 "Valox" monster you control to have this card attack 1 extra time this turn.[/i][/left]

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[img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9488/133082p.jpg[/img]
[i]You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card attacks a Level 5 or higher monster: Banish the attacked monster and this card. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each banished "Valox" monster. You can banish 2 "Valox" monster in your Graveyard to add this card to the Graveyard.[/i]

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[i]Activate only when a "Valox" monster is attacked. Negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. Then add 1 banished Level 2 or lower "Valox" monster to your Deck. After this card is activated: Set it face-down on the field. This card can only be activated once per turn.[/i]

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[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1472/133082u.jpg[/img]
[i]Once per turn: You can skip you Battle Phase to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of banished "Valox" monsters x 100. If this card would be destroyed: Special Summon 1 banished Level 4 or lower "Valox" monster. The Special Summoned monster gains 500 ATK and it's Level is increased by 1.[/i]

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[left][i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by banish 1 "Valox" monster you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Banish the destroyed monster; then banish 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's field. When this card is destroyed: Banish it; then banish the top card of your opponent's Deck.[/i][/left]

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[left][i]Activate only when a Level 5 or lower "Valox" monster would be destroyed by your opponent's monster card effect. Negate the activation of that card and banish it. Then Banish "Valox" monsters from your Deck equal to half the Level of the banished monster.[/i][/left]

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[left][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/824/133082a.jpg[/img][/left]
[left][i]Once per turn, you can banish 1 Level 4 or lower "Valox" monster you control to have this card attack twice during the same Battle Phase. You can banish this card to increase the ATK of 1 "Valox" monster you control equal to the number of banished "Valox" monsters x 100. When this card is destroyed, banish it. Then draw 1 card.[/i][/left]

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[left]Other users Photobucket archive/Yugioh Custom images.[/left]

[left]Here I will write which cards images are not from Valox Photobucket Archive.[/left]

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[center]Thank you for taking time to checke these out.[/center]

[center]CnC and OCG fix help wanted.[/center]

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Haha, these Valix monsters turn the banished zone into a second Graveyard, and the combinations make dead draws/hands less likely. These cards so far seem to work well together, but the only card I'm not THAT fond of is Valox World. The whole mechanic is that when 1 Field Spell is activated, the previous one is destroyed; this one will stay on the field because card effects can't destroy, and activating other Field Spells can't either (unless I'm misinterpreting the effect). All in all, these aren't too bad; just some more refinement after you get your card ideas done, and they'll go on well.

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for Dark Ruler, 800 atk/def gain is too much, if you're going to do that, you need to lower its base atk. That along with the extra atk and high atk rate, you should have said this card can't attack directly

Fishing Bear's banshing effect is like Dark Magician of Chaos but better since yours can't be destroyed in battle. Still, it does work out since your opponent gets the banished monster back really quickly

Electric Shield is meh. If you're going to make it that kind of a recycling effect you might as well have just made it a continuous trap, but still only allow the effect to be used only once per turn

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since I haven't looked through all of these yet, and just saw the Field Spell, I must say it's horrible.
Not for its effect, but for the fact it's indestructible. This is bad for the game. Everything needs to be able to be stopped/negated/destroyed so the game is actually fair.

also, Dragon bug should be able to work only with itself and Cosmos Dragon. I don't see how Cosmos Dragon makes you benefit from being banished this way though (except that you instantly get a 3-5 monsters in your banished zone). I feel there needs to be a connection. Maybe make an effect for Cosmos Dragon that triggers once it's banished from the Deck?

The Dark Ruler Xyz is bad. 3 level 6 monsters while there's actually not even 1 spammable level 6 in the archetype? And you only have 1 card (well, that one spell too) that can change card levels. Also, "this card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects", that is just ridiculous. Even Quasar seems more vulnerable and easy stop than this. In fact, face to face with Quasar, this wins, which should tell you something. It's also a 5400 ATK double attacker..
I suggest you nerf it down a lot and make it 2x level 6 monsters.

Fishing Bear seems OP'd to me. It can banish practically any monster and usually that'd be a Xyz/Synchro, so returning it to the top of the deck will completely get rid of it. It's as threatening, if not more, than Catastor, and for a level 4 effect non-nomi or semi-nomi monster that's too much.

Electric shield seems fine, so does Plasma Cannon and all cards I didn't mention.

I suggest you play-test these to see what to fix, since archetypes' consistency is hard to judge on paper only.

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ok Mech Worm is better than Dark Magician of Chaos's effect since you also get to destroy the spell/trap in the effect

plus Dark Magician of Chaos doesn't get to banish the monster that destroyed this card

Personally I think it's almost too much in that aspect. You should have said if Mech worm is destroyed in ANY WAY, you have to banish it

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