Gluttony cards

[leonardo21101996]

Some time ago, even before know this site, I created in my mind a monster card called "Corpse Eater". The card was unbalanced even after a lot of balance, until it got to a point that it gone from "unbalanced" to "confusing", but after some time I had some ideas for balancing and at the same time for other "Eater" monsters. That way the Gluttony cards were born.

Now that you know the idea origin, I'll finally post the cards that a have made far now. Feel free to comment on they with useful things like improvements, balancing and OCG corrections.

[spoiler='Soul Eater']
Lore: Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. This Card cannot be Summoned or removed from field. In the third End Phase after this card is summoned, banish this card (this is called "timeout"). When this Card is Removed from Field, Banish it. Only non-LIGHT, non-Machine and non-Zombie monsters (all conditions have to be met) can be affected by this card. An affected card is also treated as a Zombie-type and DARK monster and is added to your hand(they can just be summoned by tribute summon and paying one more monster as tribute than it is needed). If this card is banished, except by timeout, return all monsters affected by this card to theirs owners decks. After that the monsters are no longer affected. If this card is banished, it cannot return. You can only control one "Gluttony" monster.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Ghost Banquet']
Lore: Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. When this card is activated, select monster(s) in your side of the field whose total levels are equal or higher than 8, and affect them with the effect from a "Gluttony - Soul Eater" in your hand. When this card resolves, special summon the "Gluttony - Soul Eater" selected. When this card is activated it is considered a ritual spell until after it resolves. After that, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Soul-Eating Zombification']
Lore: Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. Select a face up "Gluttony - Soul Eater" in your side of the field. Throw a coin and call Head or Tails. If called right, affect a monster on your opponent side of the field, if called wrong, affect a monster on your side of the field with the selected "Gluttony - Soul Eater" (the Activation and the Effect of this card is considered made by the selected "Gluttony - Soul Eater" and considered a Monster Effect). After that, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Gluttonous Damage Absorbing Fat']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. Equip this card to an "Gluttony" monster. When the equipped card is attacked, you can tribute a face up monster on your side of the field to increase the equipped monster ATK and DEF by the same ATK and DEF points of the tributed monster, respectively, until the end of the damage step. When this effect is activated, the equipped monster cannot destroy a monster by battle or inflict Battle Damage until the end of the damage step and can be destroyed by any effect until the end of this turn. When this card is removed from the field, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Corpse Eater']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. This Card cannot be Summoned or removed from field. In the fifth End Phase after this card is summoned, banish this card (this is called "timeout"). When this Card is Removed from Field, this Card is Banished. This card can't inflict Battle Damage. This card original ATK and DEF are equal to the total ATK and DEF of the affected monsters, respectively. Only monster cards in the graveyards can be affected by this card. An affected card is removed from play and cannot return. If this card is banished, except by timeout, return the affected cards to the owners graveyards. After that the monsters are no longer affected. If this card is banished, it cannot return. You can only control one "Gluttony" monster.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Squeleton Banquet']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. When this card is activated, select monster(s) in your graveyard whose total levels are equal or higher than 12, and affect them with the effect from a "Gluttony - Corpse Eater" in your hand. When this card resolves, special summon the "Gluttony - Corpse Eater" selected. When this card is activated it is considered a ritual spell until after it resolves. After that, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Corpse Eating Chain']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. Equip it to a face up "Gluttony - Corpse Eater" in your side of the field. When the equipped monster destroy a card by battle and send to graveyard, affect the card with the equipped monster (the Effect of this card is considered made by the equipped monster and a Monster Effect). If this card is removed from field banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Anti-Gluttonous mystical attack']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards. Activate this card if at least 1 card was affected by a face up "Gluttony - Corpse Eater" in your side of the field, select the affected card to inflict damage in your opponent life points equal to the selected monster ATK and recover life points equal to the it's DEF. After that the monster is no longer affected and this card is affected by the face up "Gluttony - Corpse Eater" (Ignore the affection condition rules and consider this card ATK and DEF equal to 0). If the monster affecting this card is banished (even by timeout), you can return this card to your deck and shuffle.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Double Eating']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. Select a face up "Gluttony" monster in your side of the field. Select a card on your Hand, Field or Graveyard and affect it with the selected "Gluttony" card. Your opponent do the same with one of his/her cards. (the Activation and the Effect of this card is considered made by the selected monster and considered a Monster Effect). After that banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Glutonous Dimension Travel']
Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. While this card is face up in the field, both players "Gluttony" cards aren't banished when removed from field/used and can be recovered from banishment and all Field Spell cards Effects are negated. This card effects cannot be negated. When this card is removed from field banish this card and any Gluttony card recovered by this card effect. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Sin Eater']

Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. This Card cannot be Summoned or removed from field. In the 3rd End Phase after this card is summoned, banish this card (this is called a "timeout"). When this Card is Removed from Field, this Card is Banished. Only Fiend-type or DARK monsters can be affected by this card. An affected card have it's attribute changed to LIGHT and it's type to Fairy.Also, if "Gluttony - Gluttonous Holy Portal" is on the field, when it is send from field to the graveyard, a Converted Soul Token is summoned in it's place.The token has the same Level, Attribute, Type, ATK, DEF and effect(s) of the that monster, cannot attack and when is attacked by a monster that have a lower ATK than the card while it is in attack position, the card's controller can negate the attack and destroy the card to gain life points equal to the token ATK. If this card is banished, except by timeout, destroy all Converted Soul Tokens on the field. After that the monsters are no longer affected. If this card is banished, it cannot return. You can only control one "Gluttony" monster.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Conversion Banquet']

Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. When this card is activated, select monster(s) in your opponent's side of the field whose total levels are equal or higher than 5, and affect them with the effect from a "Gluttony - Sin Eater" in your hand. When this card resolves, special summon the "Gluttony - Sin Eater" selected. When this card is activated it is considered a ritual spell until after it resolves. After that, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Sin Eating Staff']

Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. Equip it to a face up "Gluttony - Sin Eater" in your side of the field. When the equipped monster would destroy a card by battle, you can instead affect the card with the equipped monster effect. If you do this, add 1 Gluttony counter to this card. Remove two gluttony counters from this card to affect a monster on your side of the field with the equipped monster effect. (the Effect of this card is considered made by the equipped monster and considered a Monster Effect). If this card is removed from field banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Gluttonous Holy Portal']

Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards. Tribute 1 LIGHT monster on your side of the field to activate this card. You need to pay 200 life points in each of your standby phase. If you don't, return this card to you hand. When this card is removed from field except to your hand and by a "Gluttony" Card, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Gluttonous Holy Dimension']

Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. You can only activate this card if "Gluttony - Gluttonous Holy Portal" is on the field. When this card is activated, return all "Gluttony - Gluttonous Holy Portal" cards on the field to the owner(s) hands. While this card is face up in the field, it's name is alse considered "Gluttony - Gluttonous Holy Portal". Also, all Fairy-Type or LIGHT "Eater" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF and Converted Soul Tokens can attack. When this card is removed from field banish this card. In the end phase that this card is banished, if you have a Gluttonous Holy Portal on your hand, you can show it to your opponent to return this card to your hand. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler='Non-Gluttonous Holy Reflex']

Lore:Any of this card effects can be ignored by yours "Gluttony" cards Effects. You can only activate this card if "Gluttony - Gluttonous Holy Portal" is on the field. Select a face up "Gluttony - Sin Eater" in your side of the field and a Fiend-Type or DARK monster on the your opponent side of the field. Special Summon a Holy Doppel Token (Fairy-Type/LIGHT) the token has the same ATK, DEF and Level as the selected opponent card and cannot attack. Also, that monster can only attack this token. After that, banish this card. If this card is banished, it cannot return.[/spoiler]

I know that the Soul Eater Eater monsters effects are VERY long and that some of you will just say "tl;dr" (and i can't blame you, they are really long) but believe if you want, I tried to make the effects shorter. If you have some suggestion on making them smaller while using the OCG and, preferentially, keeping all effects in one way or another, please tell me.

[spoiler='Images credits']Gluttonous Damage Absorbing Fat - made using Kuroda Kaito's resource pack, that can be found on [topic='250881']this topic[/topic].
All others images were found in Jazin Kay's gallery (http://s825.photobuc...rofile/JazinKay) and SwordSmoner's gallery (http://s1091.beta.photobucket.com/user/Sword-Summoner/library/)[/spoiler]

[Anonymous]

Just to start. WTF is "timeout"?

[leonardo21101996]

[quote name='Anonymous' timestamp='1328909116' post='5808926']
Just to start. WTF is "timeout"?
[/quote]

Timeout was the term that I created to define when a Eater card reach to the "final end turn" and is removed from play/banished:

[quote name='leonardo21101996'] In the third End Phase after this card is summoned, banish this card (this is considered a "timeout").[/quote]

This would significantly reduce the text needed in some cards, as I can, for example, say of the "In a Soul Eater timeout" instead of "When a Soul Eater is banished after 3 end phases", like in the example below:

[quote name='leonardo21101996'] If this card is banished, except by [u]timeout[/u], return all monsters affected by this card to theirs owners decks and shuffle.[/quote]

Maybe the "[b]consider [/b]this a timeout" part made you think that it's actually a real yu-gi-oh! term. If that is the case, consider this part as "this is [b]called [/b]timeout". Also if you think that the text should be altered according, please tell it.

[Sparks!]

>timeout

>wat.

[leonardo21101996]

After almost one year after the last update I decided to continue this.
 
Remade some things like "Gluttony" being an archetype and not a sub-type (that was a very dumb idea) and some fixes to make the cards lores easier to understand. Also added some new cards.

>timeout
>wat.

 
Well...

 
Timeout was the term that I created to define when a Eater card reach to the "final end turn" and is removed from play/banished:
 
 

In the third End Phase after this card is summoned, banish this card (this is considered called a "timeout").

 

 
The quote already says everything: Timeout is just a made-up term to save typing and the time of the reader and at the same time it lets the lores easier to read.