Valkyrus Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 This is the main card in this archetype: THE FIELD SPELL. [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/gm-1.jpg[/img] now the monsters: [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoarch4.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoarmo.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoarms.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordochan2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoguard.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoconf.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordorai.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoatelua.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordosting.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordostra.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordobar.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordoener.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordopull.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordotwinzenith.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ordomegalamia3.jpg[/img] comment/rate/love/hate/suggest/fix. EDIT: fixed Ordo Archlord's effect, I think it's better now. EDIT 2: added 2 new monsters: Ordo Atelua and Ordo Twin Zenith. EDIT 3: added 2 more cards: Ordo Confury and Ordo Megalamia EDIT 4: finished adding cards to the set, it's all done.( However I might add some more spell/trap support later on) Kinda proud with how it came out and I believe it could fair quite well as a deck. so yeah.. NEED. FEEDBACK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 Can I please have the artwork for Stinger? Holy s*** that looks amazing. I only generally skimmed over the cards honestly, but I can tell you that Ordo Ener could easily become overpowered seeing as how it's a Pot of Greed that also acts as a Starlight Road and cannot be stopped by Solemn Warning. The overall mechanic of burn could work in this case if you keep it as (hopefully) balanced as it is now. Oh and by the way, I love the design of Arms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 [quote name='Professor Kokonoe' timestamp='1329442741' post='5821608'] Can I please have the artwork for Stinger? Holy s*** that looks amazing. I only generally skimmed over the cards honestly, but I can tell you that Ordo Ener could easily become overpowered seeing as how it's a Pot of Greed that also acts as a Starlight Road and cannot be stopped by Solemn Warning. The overall mechanic of burn could work in this case if you keep it as (hopefully) balanced as it is now. Oh and by the way, I love the design of Arms. [/quote] There you go: [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/Termite_White_for_Gatchagrey_by_jaypao.jpg[/img] So did you check out Archlord? That is the one I have my doubts on whether it's OP'd Ordo Ener wouldn't really be activated more than once per duel though since once your opponent activates it the first time they'd try to get rid of it as soon as they can, also, during a duel people don't drop nukes more than 2/3 times.This wouldn't really be able to counter Heavy Storm either. Archlord's effect can't protect it while it's face-down too. EDIT: Yeah, Archlord's OP'd.. I will make the burn it does per level 200 or 100, since right now, it's burning waaay too fast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 Chance Knight seems a bit boring for just summoning and buring, 1000 isn't really that huge for a turn anyways same with Guardian, it's better, though I wished you gave it slightly higher stats Stinger too seems a bit meh for its low atk power, and the burn probably isn't all that great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1329446815' post='5821806'] Chance Knight seems a bit boring for just summoning and buring, 1000 isn't really that huge for a turn anyways same with Guardian, it's better, though I wished you gave it slightly higher stats Stinger too seems a bit meh for its low atk power, and the burn probably isn't all that great [/quote] You need to think of them working together, then you'd realize how the burn is actually not little at all. For Example, Normal Summon Ordo Armoria (her level becomes 12 by her effect) > tribute for Ordo Stinger > burn for 1100. Guardian is a searcher, it can't get much more interesting than that. Chance Knight doesn't only burn for 1000, it also helps Ordo Raider get summoned faster since he's a very important card in the set too.EDIT: fixed Ordo Archlord's effect and added 2 new monsters: Ordo Atelua and Ordo Twin Zenith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 for Zenith in the level increase effect, it's good, but why make the level change a PERMANENT one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1329452990' post='5822052'] for Zenith in the level increase effect, it's good, but why make the level change a PERMANENT one? [/quote] because it further messes up your opponent's strategy (since most of the Ordo monsters can't have their levels modified anyways) and feeds Archlord with counters. So then your opponent will have some unusable level 8 tuners for example. Making it not permanent won't make the card better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 right, synchro screw ups, all right I'll accept that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 EDIT 3: added 2 more cards: Ordo Confury and Ordo Megalamia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 that is some REALLY high def for a mere lv1 monster in Confury, but whatever Megalamia looks nothing like a warrior, looks like some hydra beast for attacking all your opponent's monsters, that's fine. But I would also say if you use this effect, then none of the OTHER monsters you control can attack your opponent directly or it'd be easy OTK set up this reminds me SLIGHTLY of Berserk Dragon's attacking all your opponent's monsters effect, but it's better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1329458897' post='5822191'] that is some REALLY high def for a mere lv1 monster in Confury, but whatever Megalamia looks nothing like a warrior, looks like some hydra beast for attacking all your opponent's monsters, that's fine. But I would also say if you use this effect, then none of the OTHER monsters you control can attack your opponent directly or it'd be easy OTK set up this reminds me SLIGHTLY of Berserk Dragon's attacking all your opponent's monsters effect, but it's better [/quote] oh wow forgot to change the type of megalamia, gonna fix that. And about Confury, check out a card called Bunilla EDIT: Changed Archlord's wording a bit and changed Chance Knight from level 3 to 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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FF Fan Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 These look pretty cool. Have you thought about playing with them online? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon Trainer Red Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 *drools at gamble mayhem* wish id seen these earlier the art for gamble mayhem can i have oh like synch screwup Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 [quote name='FF Fan' timestamp='1329756944' post='5829038'] These look pretty cool. Have you thought about playing with them online? [/quote] Thanks. Yeah, actually, I play them on Duel Portal ^^ [quote name='Yurik the Red Mage' timestamp='1329763335' post='5829307'] *drools at gamble mayhem* wish id seen these earlier the art for gamble mayhem can i have oh like synch screwup [/quote] Glad you like it ^^ Well, the card's pretty big, you can crop it and you'll have the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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