Toshiya_Reita Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 i don't know if reposting my post from other forum is allowed. but i need more comment and rate. so here it is.. this is my first attempt using monster hunter themes. im trying not to overpowering and keep the originality. please rate and tell me if something should be corrected. (Note : sorry for my bad english and i don't own monster hunter nor the artwork ) [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2728/553346.jpg[/img] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/2728/553346.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can special summon it from your hand by tributing 1 face up "Velociprey" you control. When this card is successfully special summoned, special summon up to 2 "Velociprey" from your hand or deck in face up attack position. This card can attack twice during the same battle phase. [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2728/553346.jpg[/img] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/2728/553346.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by removing from play 1 "Cephalos" in your graveyard. This card can attack your opponent life points directly. If it does, this card ATK is decreased by 200 permanently. [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/2728/553346.jpg[/img] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2728/553346.jpg[/img] [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2728/553346.jpg[/img] When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Khezu Whelp Token" (Thunder-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your opponent's side of the field in Defense Position. These tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. When this token is removed from the field, its controller takes 1000 damage. [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2033/553346s.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned if there is a face up "Umi" on the field. Your opponent cannot select it as an attack target. This card is unaffected by the effects of spells, traps, and effect monsters card. When "Umi" is removed from the field, destroy this card. [img]http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/2728/553346.jpg[/img] [img]http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/2728/553346.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + "Unseen Peril Basarios" This card cannot be destroyed by battle. While this card is in face-up Defense Position, this card can attack your opponent directly. If it does, this card's ATK is halved during damage calculation only. [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/2033/553346s.jpg[/img] This card can attack all monster your opponent controls once each. Once per turn during your Standby Phase if a "One Horned Monoblos" exists in your graveyard, you can Special Summon the "One Horned Monoblos" in face up Attack Position. If it does, all your face up "One Horned Monoblos" ATK is halved. [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/2728/553346.jpg[/img] "Monoblos" + "Monoblos" A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters. This card can attack twice during the same batle phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, special summon 1 "One Horned Monoblos" from your graveyard. my other post here : [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/276622-mh-card-rathalos-rathian/"]http://forum.yugiohc...thalos-rathian/[/url] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/276734-mh-card-blangonga-rajang-and-some-elder/"]http://forum.yugiohc...and-some-elder/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 for Velocidrome, given the summoning effect in getting another two Velociprey onto the field, this reminds me a little bit of the card Gilsasuraus given that it should have some sort of drawback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 hmm...never thought it got kinda same effect like gilasaurus. but i was trying to make it can do some decent damaged quick attack when the opponent is undefended. but aside, even yor opponent is well defended, it can still be used for tribute summon or synchro. i think it'll come in handy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted February 21, 2012 Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon it from your hand by tributing 1 face up "Velociprey" you control. When this card is Special Summoned: Special Summon up to 2 "Velociprey" from your hand or Deck in face-up attack position. This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. [/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]You do the rest OCG fix yourself. [/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]As for the effect, its pretty nice You summon this card gets 2 free Xyz Fodder. 85/100 i say, and it might be good someway.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Plesioth maybe little bit overpowered, easy too summon and unaffected. the only way is too has another field or MST or heavy for your opponent. Take the Effect monster eff i suggest[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 velociprey and velocidrome is my first created card so the OCG still a bit missed. will fix it. And its good to hear if the effectt is already good enough. yeah i think plesioth is a but OP'ed too, maybe i should remove the unaffected part. will fix it also. thanks for the corrections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 21, 2012 Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 for Khezu, you should have said if the tokens are DESTROYED, your opponent takes 1000 damage because otherwise burning your opponent would be way too easy. He/she could use the token as synchro material and still will get burned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 yeah i was took a lots of time considering the effect when making that card. how if i reduce the damage to 500? if still too easy to burn LP, i think making it "if its destroyed" is the best choice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 21, 2012 Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 well 500 isn't too huge a burn, depends on the number of tokens then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 well, i'll think about it first, cause there'll be a next form of khezu. its better not to make it too powerfull now. thanks for the corrections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 21, 2012 Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 all right, if you make changes, let us know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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