Toshiya_Reita Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Yeah, i know its a mess. but i want to know what you guys think about my own custom card. and actually it was my first time ever on editing picture so the quality isn't so good. but anyways enjoy. [img]http://i1264.photobucket.com/albums/jj483/Toshiya_Reita/AzureFlameKite-2.jpg[/img] [spoiler Lore]1 Fiend-Type monster + 2 DARK monster You can Log-in this card to your side of the field if the total Level of the required monster is matched with this card Network Level. Once per turn, you can have this card lose 3 Network Level to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard. Your opponent's monster must attack this card during his/her Battle Phase. If you control another Fiend-Type monster, any attack targeted to this card is changed to 1 of your face-up Fiend-Type monster instead. Return this card to your Extra Deck if it lose all its Network Level.[/spoiler] what i fixed and keep : - still based on mixing of synchro and xyz summoning condition. - now i calll this summon as Log-in to make it sound better (i think). - the requirment of this kind of card now will always 1 type + 1 or more attribute monster (according to card's requirment). - to log in this card still need the required monster face up on the field. the total level of them must equal to the network level (this card level name) of the Data Monster you want to summon. - still, mainly this card will always need to decrease its Network Level to activate effect. it returned to extra Deck if it lose all the Network Level. well, that's a lil bit about this card. i don't know if this card is good enough or just confusing. please rate and tell me what you think. any sugestion or correction will be appreciated. and tell me if i should continue with this card or just forget it. (Note : Sorry for my bad english and warn me if im not allowed to post this kind of card in this forum.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gαr Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 its an OK concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Thanks. but i think i should make some suport card for this. to make it more easier to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='Toshiya_Reita' timestamp='1329968573' post='5835242'] Thanks. but i think i should make some suport card for this. to make it more easier to summon. [/quote] I'm also unsure how much warriors and fiends mix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1329968671' post='5835247'] I'm also unsure how much warriors and fiends mix [/quote] now that you mention it, i wasn't expected that. maybe i should check any possibility of the mixed type first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 mix types aren't rare, I just don't know about those two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 guess i was just trying to make the mixing kinda related with the picture , and yeah its my first card of this kind. if i feel want to continue this card, the next card will be more easier for mixing type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 fine, we'll wait for the next card then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 I like the concept. The card template needs some work, though. Also, could stand to adjust your OCG. I would recommend losing the network Level part for now. That will definitely make putting this together alot easier. It's your choice, of course. That's just my opinion. I'm thinking about throwing a blank template for you, though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 [quote name='Radiant F.U.R.Y.™' timestamp='1330070116' post='5837341'] I like the concept. The card template needs some work, though. Also, could stand to adjust your OCG. I would recommend losing the network Level part for now. That will definitely make putting this together alot easier. It's your choice, of course. That's just my opinion. I'm thinking about throwing a blank template for you, though [/quote] yeah i thought so, i just looking for some random wallpaper then put it with the edge of a real card to create this. but did you mean the edge or the wallpaper part should be fixed? or both? and i'm using Gimp. mm...i'm kinda couldn't get your point about fixing the "losing Network Level" part. what is exactly it should say to make it better? And if you willing to share me some good template, i will really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 2, 2012 Report Share Posted March 2, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] You can Network Summon this card by Tributing Monsters you control whose total levels equal the level of this card. Once per turn, you can lower the Level of this card by 3 to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard. All monsters your opponent controls must attack this card, if able. If you control another Fiend-Type monster, when this card is selected an attack target, you can select another face-up Fiend-Type monster you control as the Attack target instead. Return this card to the Extra Deck if its level is less than 3. I changed the bounce effect to the level being less than 3 because you can't have a level 0 monster. I also recommend you use normal levels rather than network levels Still a very good card! [/size][/font][/color]Here's a template with correct font for monster type. You'll probably need to add new level stars The one here is dim, but it's just a placeholder. Also would recommend using the font from the card maker instead of what you're using for the monster's name. [IMG]http://i44.tinypic.com/dhe2cx.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted March 2, 2012 Report Share Posted March 2, 2012 oh and here's your monster on that template... a little sloppy compared to my usual work, but I hope you like it [IMG]http://i42.tinypic.com/29ghni1.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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