Ampshiftiness Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 [img]http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/6734/552734.jpg[/img] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/6734/552734.jpg[/img][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/6734/552734.jpg[/img][img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/6734/552734.jpg[/img] Tell me what you think of them thank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toshiya_Reita Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 i think you should fix the OCG first. to make it easier to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Metal Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 I really suggest that you post the lore (effect) on each car so we can see better. There are also OCG (official card grammar) errors such as commas and possibly spelling. If you ever do have trouble with OCG, try writing the effects first in Microsoft Word and then copy and paste the effect. I did that to most of my cards. But try to avoid semi-colons though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ampshiftiness Posted February 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 Well mr. grammer nazi im very dyslexic so sorry if i mess up on some stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Metal Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 It's a suggestion bro, I'm not trying or be rude or anything But I really suggest you do post the lore because you'll get bashed by a few or a lot of people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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