4 New Cards

[Kitsumonogatari]

Images from JazinKay Archive

[b]DNA Distortion Zone[/b]
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Lore:[i]Once per turn you can Select 1 Face up Monster you Control, If you do, Change that Monster Attribute, Banish a Monster Selected by this Effect during your Next End Phase.[/i]

[b]Escarlata - Armored Centaur[/b]
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Lore:[i]If This card is Used for a Fusion Summon, Special Summon it During your Next Standby Phase, This card can Attack Your Opponent Life Points Directly.[/i]

[b]Scarlet Armor Fairy[/b]
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Lore:[i]If this Monster is used as a Material for a Fairy Fusion or Synchro Monster, During your Next Standby Phases Put 1 `Scarlet Counter` in All the Fairy monsters you Control, When a Monster with a `Scarlet Counter` you Control is Removed from your Field, Deal 400 Damage to your Opponent[/i]
[i]Life Points.[/i]

[b]Mokushiroku - Scarlet Justice [/b]
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Lore:[i]`Escarlata - Armored Centaur` + `Scarlet Armor Fairy` + Any DARK Monster[/i]
[i]This card can Attack Twice per Turn, if you Activate this Effect, Banish This card during your End Phase.[/i]
[i]When a Normal Spell card is Activated, you can do 1 Of the Nexts effects:[/i]
[i]●:Draw 1 card.[/i]
[i]●.Put 1 `Scarlet Counter` on this card.[/i]
[i]When this card is Removed from your Field Activate 1 of the next Effects according to how many Counter this card had[/i]
[i]●1:Discard 1 Random card from your Opponent's Hand[/i]
[i]●2:Destroy 2 Spell or Trap cards your Opponent controls then Banish this card.[/i]
[i]●3:Inflict 2000 Damage to your Opponent Life Points[/i]
[i]●4:Destroy all the card Your Opponents Control and Inflict 400x damage to your Opponent Life Points for Every cardDestroyed by this Effect[/i]


I know my OCG Is Rusty as hell, please help X.x.

[MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN]

er dont think I can help your OCG, but the effects are pretty nice and go well together.
You should make more of these cards, since they werent aimed at a certain deck(were they?).

[ragnarok1945]

for the fusion, you were supposed to say it can attack twice per TURN. Otherwise it'll just mean twice in a duel and that's it

now yes, you did say it gets banished, but who's to say you can't get out of the banished pile?

the 2 counters on the card effect isn't too good because you have banishing the card afterwards. Moebius can do the same and it doesn't banish itself

[Kitsumonogatari]

Doing some Fixes of effects, keep coming with the comments pls ^^

[ragnarok1945]

I see no modifications, what'd you change?

[Kitsumonogatari]

Nothing really notticeable.

[Kitsumonogatari]

Bump

[Cray-Crow]

i think the banishment after destroying two cards is fine since its being destroyed before that effects activated. whereas mobius is just tribute summoned.

for four scarlet counters. i think it should be: Destroy all cards your opponent controls, and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed x400.

when it gets destroyed, u should probly specify scarlet counters so itll be "according to the number of Scarlet Counters on this card"

and change Next to following. those are some of the bigger ocg errors. i can go all out if you like. just dont think i'm perfect on it or anything.