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ITT: King Crouton makes a BEWD card [Sacred Dragon - White Legend]

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[color=#ff8c00][b]Sacred Dragon - White Legend[/b][/color]
You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 2 Normal Monsters from your hand, field, or Graveyard. You can shuffle this card from your Graveyard into the Deck to target 1 Normal Monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. This card must be in the Graveyard to activate and to resolve this effect. Once per turn: You can activate 1 of these effects:
● Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Normal Monster (from your Deck). It cannot attack or be used as a Synchro Material Monster this turn.
● Tribute 1 Normal Monster you control to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; until the End Phase, its effects are negated, and it loses ATK equal to the Tributed monster's ATK.

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330302274' post='5843006']
so this is easy to get onto the field since you didn't make it any SPECIFIC vanillas

the negating your opponent's monster's effect is good, but OPed. For the effect negation AND atk loss, only ONE of them should be permanent, not both

also, for the 1st effect, why make it EXACTLY at lv4 normal monster?
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Some Level 1-3 vanilla's are Tuners.

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The final affect cannot be in the bullet list and the second sentence is redundant. However, I would (personally) focus it more around BEWD instead of vanillas in general. Instead, you seem to have almost made it all level 4 or lower vanillas, so that seems to if anything separate it from BEWD. Here is what I would have done:

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" from your hand, field, or Graveyard. This card's name is treated as "Blue Eyes White Dragon" while it is on the field or in the Graveyard. You can return [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]this card in your Graveyard to the Deck to target 1 Banished Normal Monster ; Special Summon that target. [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn: You can activate 1 of these effects:[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]● Special Summon 1 Level Dragon-Type Normal Monster (from your Deck). It cannot attack this turn.[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]● Tribute 1 Normal Monster you control to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; its effects are negated, and it loses ATK equal to the Tributed monster's ATK.[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]I made it a bit more powerful, but focused it more around BEWD. It is up to you, but I just like BEWD more than vanillas in general <3[/size][/font][/color]

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[quote name='thekazu4u' timestamp='1330309849' post='5843379']
The final affect cannot be in the bullet list and the second sentence is redundant. However, I would (personally) focus it more around BEWD instead of vanillas in general. Instead, you seem to have almost made it all level 4 or lower vanillas, so that seems to if anything separate it from BEWD. Here is what I would have done:

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" from your hand, field, or Graveyard. This card's name is treated as "Blue Eyes White Dragon" while it is on the field or in the Graveyard. You can return [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]this card in your Graveyard to the Deck to target 1 Banished Normal Monster ; Special Summon that target. [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn: You can activate 1 of these effects:[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]● Special Summon 1 Level Dragon-Type Normal Monster (from your Deck). It cannot attack this turn.[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]● Tribute 1 Normal Monster you control to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; its effects are negated, and it loses ATK equal to the Tributed monster's ATK.[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]I made it a bit more powerful, but focused it more around BEWD. It is up to you, but I just like BEWD more than vanillas in general <3[/size][/font][/color]
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Card was meant to work with vanillas (mainly Level 4s in mind,) not just BEWD.

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"[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]This card must be in the Graveyard to activate and to resolve this effect." this is not needed.[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Also, I know, I was just trying to give a new spin on the card :) I like BEWD more than your average vanilla. We got crappy cards like Rescue Rabbit for normal vanillas. [/size][/font][/color]

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