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[center][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/31783.jpg[/img][/center]

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[center][i][font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]2 or more level 6 monsters.
Must first be Xyz Summoned with the above Xyz Material Monsters. Detach 2 or more Xyz Material Monsters from this card and target the same number of face-up monsters your opponent controls; Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to 100 x the combined Levels of the target(s) and increase this cards ATK/DEF by the difference of the inflicted damage. Both players may only activate this effect of "(Number 76: Everlight)" thrice per Duel. When this card is destroyed: For every 1000 damage inflicted to your opponent by this card's effect, inflict 800 damage to your Life Points.[/color][/size][/font][/i][/center]

[center][color=#FFD700][b][i]Me and Evil Fusion worked out on the effect fix....Thanks Evil Fusion[/i][/b][/color][/center]

[center][color=#0000FF][size=4][u][b][i]I Take Flight; Acess Data Intermission; Beyond Time; Rectify Light, Impaired Repair! Bring Forth!! Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Starlight[/i][/b][/u][/size][/color][/center]

[center][i][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/31839.jpg[/img][/i][/center]

[center][i][b]Lore[/b][/i][/center]

[center][i][i][i]During your Main Phase, you can activate this card's effect in your Extra Deck: Target 1 "Number 76: Everlight" you control, and detach 1 Xyz Material; Place that detached Xyz Material face-up on your side of the field, and attach this card to that target as an Xyz Material. When this card is detached after this effect was activated: Xyz Summon this card from your Graveyard. Once per turn: Detach 1 Card and Target 1 card your opponent controls; Inflict 700 damage to your opponent equal to its level.[/i][/i][/i][/center]

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[color=#0000CD][b]Max Darkenss helped me with this cards effect fix: Thanks Max Darkness[/b][/color][/center]

[center][i][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/32168.jpg[/img][/i][/center]

[center][color=#000080][size=4][i][u][b]Dawn before Time; Light of Unwavering Feats, Flew High; Gave Birth. To Wrung the old, Wring the New, Shall All be lost!!! Refactify! Temporal Rectification: Icicularasuarus!!![/b][/u][/i][/size][/color][/center]

[center][i][b]Lore:[/b][/i][/center]

[center][i]During your Main Phase, you can activate this card's effect in your Extra Deck: Target 1 "Number 19: Freezerdon" you control, and detach 1 Xyz Material; Place that detached Xyz Material face-up on your side of the field, and attach this card to that target as an Xyz Material. When this card is detached after this effect was activated: Xyz Summon this card from your Graveyard. Twice per turn, if you would activate an effect by detaching Xyz Materials, you can attach it to this card instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Twice per turn: You can Detach 1 Card; Attach this card to any Xyz monster you control.[/i][/center]


[center][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/32196.jpg[/img][/center]

[center][i][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/32205.jpg[/img][/i][/center]

[center][i]Notice: Cards Added: Keep checking back to see more cards added....[/i][/center]

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looks like some possessed fairy or something, pretty good for a pic, though it almost seems better to be suited for DARK

the 1st burn effect is good, though I don't understand why detach 2 xyz materials

the burn to yourself I guess would balance it, though it's a bit too easy because all you have to do is remove it from the field...

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No idea why the "2 or MORE" was added. The effect works if you use 2 or 4 level 6 monsters....and I doubt anyone would summon it with 4 monsters.

And this will do at most around 2000 damage with its own effect, so it's like a very situational and underpowered Gustaph Max that would do (usually) less damage for the price of all of its materials, and also burns you too (although I assume it would be immediately overlayed by Gaia Dragoon, so... )

All I see is a mediocre card for speeding up OTK's, doesn't really fit within the Numbers cards imo...

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@Gandorator: Meh, I forgot to add something....My fault....BIG :(

[u][i][b]Anyhow, Fixed the written lore, I'll update the actual card tomorrow...[/b][/i][/u]


And also; If I need to change it to a regular card, i will, I just had another Xyz for it in particular that suited numbers, but it can change. I just need to find a pic...


@Rag: Well, Meh; true, maybe just graveyard & field? And picture is most suited for Dark, but Dark would not be sutied for its name, Everlight, I wouldn't think...Its hard to find good pics to the names.


@Both: Meh, even thought its been updated, i still feel that maybe I should do the burn to in mulitples of 500 instead to your life points thing?

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[center]@WWCENA: Well, then I'll have t change the names, simple as pie really......I'd just cut the number off....But they have not Summon 76 yet....It'd be funny if they did and it was exact duplicate of this card; I'd be peod...[/center]
[center]@Rag: Alright; I think I'm good enough to find my 2nd picture...[/center]
[center]@Anyone else please comment?[/center]

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Rag: If no one else comments, none...If more people comment, then more will be added....

Thats how I do it now on....

People won't post unless somewhat interested.....And if only guys comment, then only you all will be interested, and thats not usually even enough people for 1 card, let alone 2....

5 different people comments for card, in this case, I felt like being generous....

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[quote name='Skylie' timestamp='1330659084' post='5851193']
Meh, @ Rag; Just for you, I do 2 tomorrow, because Im appreciating someone even remotely paying attention to my posts anymore.....One look, gone.....For instance: Gandorator; WWECNA or whatever his/her name is; and Finding the Everlight.....
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Usually you should be happy if people comment in your thread even once.
And now that I'm doing it a second time, I don't see much improvement. It's still bad because it relies on your opponent far too much. The burn will hardly ever be anything significant/consistent (as is the case with Gustaph Max), so you don't even need that drawback which burns you back. It's a rank 6 with poor stats, you don't need more drawbacks than that.

Although if it burns your opponent AND decreases their monsters' ATK by that same amount, then we might be getting somewhere. (although in that case you might have to lower the atk to around 1000 and keep the drawback. )
Actually, that would make it a really interesting card.

@ 2nd card....fix the OCG, it's kind of hard to understand what it does. Does it special summon one of Everlight's Xyz Materials and then attach itself to Everlight?
I'll give you extra points for originality there, that's what I value most.

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@Gandorator:
[spoiler Gandorator's 1st comment]
Yea, i do appreciate people coming in; but whne peope say, then fix it, and no one comes in but one or 2 people, and say its okay, its kind of heartbreaking...Especially when trols get 10 to 15 people in their threads before they even answer with usually bad replies.....That usually ticks me off....Or you usually get 5 to 10 people come into your posts and yet then more come. I always ever wanted is to have 5 pages of people commenting. And then I'd be happy....Becuase if you have more comments of general saying of good, more people come in to look and more people like or help you improve it, which makes me happy to know someone actually does like the cards....If I get 10 measily comments, fix the cards, and no one comes anymore, its like they found a new card they like and yours is outdated, garbage. It really ticks me off...
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[spoiler Gandorators 2nd comment]
And are you saying Xyz's need op'd? I already thought the first one was overpowered....Meh, maybe not....I'l update it later...Proly reduce its burn on you and update the burn on the opponent which should suffice.
[/spoiler]

[spoiler Lasly, Thus answer to question about the 2nd card]
And 2nd card; Yes, its my branch there of originality..., I love to be creating new idea's...

Basically, you do not Special Summon 1 Everlight's attachment, you use it. Hence like an effect on the Xyz to detach a card to gain effect; well, the Temporal Rectification Uses its effect to Detach 1 card on Everlight to attach itself as an overlay unit.

So, basically, I use Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Star's effect; Detach 1 card from Number 76: Everlight (which detachments go to the graveyard like normal) and Attach Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Star as a card. Then when Number 76: Everlight is being detached, its goes to the graveyard, and ends up being Special Summoned as it was detched by its effect. And you still gain Number 76: Everlight's effect; But Temporal Rectification will need to find an way to gain an attachment to use its 2nd effect.

So, Any Xyz I make with these words, "Temporal Rectification" will be using the above effect; But these cards will only be made on Numbers. So, its like upgrading numbers; Maybe the next few I make will upgrade exisitng numbers...
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Now, before I update the cards, any other people's opinions? Will update later as I have other things to do....

@Rag: Yea, I know, hence why I like you more then I used to, you might have some iffs and problems, but everyone does, its the nature of human minds....

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[quote name='Skylie' timestamp='1330702043' post='5851895']
@Gandorator:
[spoiler Gandorator's 1st comment]
Yea, i do appreciate people coming in; but whne peope say, then fix it, and no one comes in but one or 2 people, and say its okay, its kind of heartbreaking...Especially when trols get 10 to 15 people in their threads before they even answer with usually bad replies.....That usually ticks me off....Or you usually get 5 to 10 people come into your posts and yet then more come. I always ever wanted is to have 5 pages of people commenting. And then I'd be happy....Becuase if you have more comments of general saying of good, more people come in to look and more people like or help you improve it, which makes me happy to know someone actually does like the cards....If I get 10 measily comments, fix the cards, and no one comes anymore, its like they found a new card they like and yours is outdated, garbage. It really ticks me off...
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[spoiler Gandorators 2nd comment]
And are you saying Xyz's need op'd? I already thought the first one was overpowered....Meh, maybe not....I'l update it later...Proly reduce its burn on you and update the burn on the opponent which should suffice.
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[spoiler Lasly, Thus answer to question about the 2nd card]
And 2nd card; Yes, its my branch there of originality..., I love to be creating new idea's...

Basically, you do not Special Summon 1 Everlight's attachment, you use it. Hence like an effect on the Xyz to detach a card to gain effect; well, the Temporal Rectification Uses its effect to Detach 1 card on Everlight to attach itself as an overlay unit.

So, basically, I use Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Star's effect; Detach 1 card from Number 76: Everlight (which detachments go to the graveyard like normal) and Attach Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Star as a card. Then when Number 76: Everlight is being detached, its goes to the graveyard, and ends up being Special Summoned as it was detched by its effect. And you still gain Number 76: Everlight's effect; But Temporal Rectification will need to find an way to gain an attachment to use its 2nd effect.

So, Any Xyz I make with these words, "Temporal Rectification" will be using the above effect; But these cards will only be made on Numbers. So, its like upgrading numbers; Maybe the next few I make will upgrade exisitng numbers...
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Actually I have tons of threads I've made that haven't had the fraction of the attention yours has had. I've also been very disappointed as I've thought my cards were actually good enough to get attention but what I usually get is a a couple of 5-10 word comments by new members which don't help me one bit and 2 pages of me bumping the thread until I lose hope. I have only 1 5+ page thread on here anyways, and it's in my sig.

The only way to get more comments is when you make a good card and that you're [i]confident[/i] and [i]sure[/i] it's good. (it also helps when your thread title attracts the attention.)

And this is mediocre right now. If you do the fix I suggested it will become better (borderline OP'd perhaps but it's better to be op'd than up'd)).
Of course it's your decision in the end.

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@Gandorator: Hmm, I thought people hated op'd cards, but meh, good points and I understand; I wasn't just referring my older comment just about you, but about all the other half-dozen people that do not post on yours, mine, or other people's cards that are relevantly actually good, that usually just need tweaked a bit...And I try to make fantastic titles, I could say wierd stuff and no one would draw attention, and besides the point, there was/still is a law from people sayng you can't make titles that are not appropiate to the topic at hand. So, if I were to say, "The most op'd card in the history of all history cards" it'd be lying and can't do that....Blame the mods for that rule because it was getting overwhelming out of hand, trolls started doing it....:(

Well, I'll update it, it'd be better this way here shortly, not your idea, but similiar...:)

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[quote name='Skylie' timestamp='1330702043' post='5851895']
@Gandorator:
[spoiler Gandorator's 1st comment]
Yea, i do appreciate people coming in; but whne peope say, then fix it, and no one comes in but one or 2 people, and say its okay, its kind of heartbreaking...Especially when trols get 10 to 15 people in their threads before they even answer with usually bad replies.....That usually ticks me off....Or you usually get 5 to 10 people come into your posts and yet then more come. I always ever wanted is to have 5 pages of people commenting. And then I'd be happy....Becuase if you have more comments of general saying of good, more people come in to look and more people like or help you improve it, which makes me happy to know someone actually does like the cards....If I get 10 measily comments, fix the cards, and no one comes anymore, its like they found a new card they like and yours is outdated, garbage. It really ticks me off...
[/spoiler]

[spoiler Gandorators 2nd comment]
And are you saying Xyz's need op'd? I already thought the first one was overpowered....Meh, maybe not....I'l update it later...Proly reduce its burn on you and update the burn on the opponent which should suffice.
[/spoiler]

[spoiler Lasly, Thus answer to question about the 2nd card]
And 2nd card; Yes, its my branch there of originality..., I love to be creating new idea's...

Basically, you do not Special Summon 1 Everlight's attachment, you use it. Hence like an effect on the Xyz to detach a card to gain effect; well, the Temporal Rectification Uses its effect to Detach 1 card on Everlight to attach itself as an overlay unit.

So, basically, I use Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Star's effect; Detach 1 card from Number 76: Everlight (which detachments go to the graveyard like normal) and Attach Temporal Rectification: Everlasting Star as a card. Then when Number 76: Everlight is being detached, its goes to the graveyard, and ends up being Special Summoned as it was detched by its effect. And you still gain Number 76: Everlight's effect; But Temporal Rectification will need to find an way to gain an attachment to use its 2nd effect.

So, Any Xyz I make with these words, "Temporal Rectification" will be using the above effect; But these cards will only be made on Numbers. So, its like upgrading numbers; Maybe the next few I make will upgrade exisitng numbers...
[/spoiler]

Now, before I update the cards, any other people's opinions? Will update later as I have other things to do....

@Rag: Yea, I know, hence why I like you more then I used to, you might have some iffs and problems, but everyone does, its the nature of human minds....
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look once you have the next update, just let us know, k?

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