stone golem lv

[cam1234]

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[EliminateHRN]

Use IMG Codes and bad OCG and pics 1/10

[aragorn14]

since your new here im going to give you a break. go to anyone tell them you want to see an example of there work. then you will see what your cards are missing.

 

anyways pretty good cards

 

4/10

[Lucas Maximus]

Bad OCG, bad pictures and please use IMG codes. =/

Private message me if you have any questions.

[Killey]

You made Golem LVL 3 a Normal Monster yet you gave it an effect. Also, you need to determine where the next LVL monster is being summoned from, such as your Deck, Hand, or Graveyard. Most LVL monsters don't allow you special summon the next level from the grave so keep that in mind. Also, in TCG it's not called sacrifice but Tribute so change everything that says sacrifice to Tribute. You made Golem LVL 10 a 1 Star effect monster so if he's a LVL monster his stars need to reflect his level. Finally, this is a heavily broken LVL set because the conditions for special summoning the next level is not really clear. Based on what you have you can summon LVL 3 golem then tribute it to special summon LVL5, which you can then tribute to special summon LVL8. You can then tribute LVL8 to get LVL10, which destroys all monsters on the field. So once you have LVL3 on the field you can go through the LVL chain in the same turn that LVL3 was summoned. You need to completely rethink the summoning conditions for this monster because as it is right now it's far too overpowered and would never be made into a real card. Look at how other LVL monsters are structured to get a better idea of what to do with your own LVL monsters. Finally, you need to use spell check because there are far too many spelling errors. I'll cut you some slack if english is a second language for you.

[Yaden Yuki]

really bad pictures and some OCG problems but 6/10 for the effort