The "Scarred Moonlight" Fusion Monsters

[Confederacy]

Hi

I want to show you guys some of my favorite cards, the effect of each card is kinda unique, so i need some honest opinions from you guys about my cards, and please don't forget to rate each of 'em and rate 'em generally.
It's not much, but please take a look.



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"Sorcerer of the Scarred Moonlight"
[i]You can activate this card's effect once per turn during your Main Phase. By removing from play one Spell card in your hand, you can add one Spell card from your Deck to your hand and show it to your opponent.[/i]


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"Avenger of the Scarred Moonlight"
[i]When this card is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard, this card will be Special Summoned to your side of the field on the next turn. If you pay 700 Life Points, this card can attack twice in this turn.[/i]


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"Demon of the Scarred Moonlight"
[i]Once per turn, by removing from play three cards in your hand, you can negate an activation of a Spell / Trap Card / Normal Summon / Flip Summon / Special Summon and remove from play the Spell Card, Trap Card, or Summoned monster.[/i]


*[color=#0000ff][b]Fusion Summon Monster[/b][/color]
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"Cursed Daemon of the Scarred Moonlight"
"Sorcerer of the Scarred Moonlight" + "Avenger of the Scarred Moonlight" + "Demon of the Scarred Moonlight"
[i]Once per turn during your Main Phase, by removing from play 2 cards in your hand, you can select one face-up monster card on your opponent's side of the field and take control the monster, after your turn ends, remove from play that monster.[/i]

[MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN]

Sorcerer and Avenger have decent and balanced effects.
Demon's effect is OK, but I would personally make it 1000-2000 LP. Oh, and 1800 ATK is kinda low for a lvl 5.
Cursed Daemon's effect is kinda meh, and again I would make the cost in LP.

NICE PICS THOUGH!

[ragnarok1945]

Sorcerer look fine, though you need to change remove from play to banished

Avenger should also be ok, 700 LP pay does seem a bit cheap for attacking twice though

Demon's cost is too high though. I would have just banished two cards. Or you can make it one, but then make it a more SPECIFIC card. You should also up the atk power to 2100 or something, right now it's on the weak end

[Confederacy]

[quote name='My mom' timestamp='1330737097' post='5852834']
Sorcerer and Avenger have decent and balanced effects.
Demon's effect is OK, but I would personally make it 1000-2000 LP. Oh, and 1800 ATK is kinda low for a lvl 5.
Cursed Daemon's effect is kinda meh, and again I would make the cost in LP.

NICE PICS THOUGH!
[/quote]

Yeah you're right, there's something wrong about Demon's ATK points, i've changed it tho

I can use Cursed Daemon's effect as part of a Combo, and it's very useful.

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330739667' post='5852932']
Sorcerer look fine, though you need to change remove from play to banished

Avenger should also be ok, 700 LP pay does seem a bit cheap for attacking twice though

Demon's cost is too high though. I would have just banished two cards. Or you can make it one, but then make it a more SPECIFIC card. You should also up the atk power to 2100 or something, right now it's on the weak end
[/quote]

So what's the difference between "remove from play" and "banish"? i don't see any difference

About Avenger, i'll raise the price, 'cause i think you're right

You've got some points about the effect of Demon, but i copied its effect from "Solemn Judgment", the price is the same, yet that Trap card can only be used once while this monster can use its effect every turn by paying. It's not too much i think

[Agro]

The second two cards are fine, but Sorcerer... you'll find that no effect in the TCG allows the user to add a Spell card from the deck without any restrictions whatsoever. This card's effect basically means: get rid of one less useful spell to get a game changing spell like Dark Hole, Monster Reborn, or Gateway of the Six. Basic summary: It's too powerful of a card.

[quote name='Confederacy' timestamp='1330847903' post='5855634']
So what's the difference between "remove from play" and "banish"? i don't see any difference
[/quote]Terminology. Banish is more up-to-date.

[Confederacy]

[quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1330848089' post='5855635']
The second two cards are fine, but Sorcerer... you'll find that no effect in the TCG allows the user to add a Spell card from the deck without any restrictions whatsoever. This card's effect basically means: get rid of one less useful spell to get a game changing spell like Dark Hole, Monster Reborn, or Gateway of the Six. Basic summary: It's too powerful of a card.[/quote]
I don't think it's not that menacing since there isn't really any single Spell card that can end the game fast by itself (like OTK), if it's a Combo, it's another story. If what you've been talking about is about Forbidden cards, this card can adapt to such situation (doesn't have to become Forbidden).



[quote name='Aggro' timestamp='1330848089' post='5855635']Terminology. Banish is more up-to-date.
[/quote]
Haha so that's all. I like "remove from play" better, sounds more classic.

[REvan342]

WTF is a daemon?