Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 first of all: I AM NOT IN ANY WAY GOOD AT YU-GI-HO. I JUST MADE THIS FOR FUN. IF SOMEONE FEEL THIS DECK HAVE PONTENTIAL, FELL FREE TO COMMENT. A deck that kinda focuses on bringing out strong creatures and buffing them, aswell as countering you opponent. I need help with the art tho :/ (More cards coming soon) [img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/3341/363148.jpg[/img] HEX / SUPPORT CARDS: [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/3341/363148.jpg[/img] Lore: When you get this card in your hand, instantly speacial summon it. If there is no room for it, tribute the lowest level monster. This card cannot be targeted by spell or trapcards. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, searh your deck for a spellcard and play it. Then shuffel your deck. [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/5222/363148e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/3341/363148.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by the effect of "De-Hex". This card cannot be targeted by spell or trap cards. Once per turn, you must destroy one spell or trap card from ANY side of the field. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for every card destroyed by this effect. If there are no spell or trap cards on the field, this card gains 500 ATK and DEF. If this monster reaches 5000 ATK and DEF, destroy it at the end if your turn. [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/3341/363148.jpg[/img] BEAST-RITUAL MONSTERS: [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/926/363148x.jpg[/img] Lore: this card cannot be normal summoned. This card can only be special summoned by tributing one "101 bear" and another "101" monster by the effect of "Monster Forest". This card cannot be targeted by spell or trap cards. When this card is succesfully Ritual summoned, deal 200 times the number of cards in your opponents hand in damge to their lifepoints. SPELLS/TRAPS: [img]http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/3341/363148.jpg[/img] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3341/363148.jpg[/img] Hope they work and stuff.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 with the art, you can use photobucket or imageshack to help you, they have really good ones now before I rate, please write out the lore for 101 Dark Mage (too small to read) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [indent=1]Done. I also renamed it to "Hex Dark Mage". The reason is for the support cards. Coming soon TM.[/indent] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 ok now another to point one before I rate, for your fusion monster, you shouldn't have put beast AND warrior in the type you should have selected just one of them, then said in the card lore itself that it's also treated as the other Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 New cards submitted, Hex-supports and more spells/traps aswell as the Beast ritual thingy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [quote name='Nerfd Roadkill' timestamp='1330852285' post='5855681'] New cards submitted, Hex-supports and more spells/traps aswell as the Beast ritual thingy. [/quote] hang on, are you having any luck with the pictures yet? for example in the case with 101 Hawk, it's too weak. A 100 atk gain is virtually nothing, you need to make it like 300 atk or something, even if it is a permanent gain on the other hand with 101 Archer, attacking twice is ok, but not for the price of just 500 LP. You need to make that cost a higher one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 I have some friends that can make them (i think), i just have to ask them when weekend over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [quote name='Nerfd Roadkill' timestamp='1330852713' post='5855686'] I have some friends that can make them (i think), i just have to ask them when weekend over. [/quote] right, well I gave you ratings for two of your cards, let's start with those for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 also in the case with 101 Militia, the adding a 101 card to your hand is ok, but I would have said that the 101 card you add to your hand cannot be ANOTHER 101 Militia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 i uptadet the archer and hawk. For the archer, i made it to burn your hand aswell. I'm planning to remake the bear and War bear to realy benefit from having many cards in your hand, so the archers effect will cost alot. For the hawk, dosent its low atk make it hard to kill stuff? Anyway, i remade it to lvl 4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 yeah I know that for Hawk, but 1500 atk is a bit TOO weak for lv4 unless it has a reasonable effect in your case, it isn't. That's why I had suggested maybe a higher boosting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [sup][size=5]As for the milita, i wanted to make it like the base of the deck. Making it able to quikly get out material for tributes. That would include stacking Militas.[/size][/sup] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 that's fine too with regards to Soldier, it's just plain piercing damage while that's not a bad thing, just that alone seems a bit meh. Remember a lot of monsters have low def, so 2500 atk is more than enough (personally though I think since it has 2500 atk, you should have made it lv6 instead) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Why is piercing alone just meh? By staking militas to summon soldiers to quikly inflict ALOT of damage is meh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 I just find it plain for piercing alone, that's all. It's your call on that one Army Officer is also boring because yes it has the atk gain part, but once it's on the field it has no effects The same is true for the LP gain of Assassin. 200 LP is virtually nothing, you need to make that higher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 As for officer, just a damgage dealer. Not really any specific he should do any other than being there and attacking. Togheter with the fort, they are supporters really. And yes, the Lp is very low, but i wanted it to be more focused on getting the milita out and punishing for not having it. as said, number of cards i hand will make a difference. BTW any idea on new effect for War bear that involves number of cards? Like burning your opponents hand?[quote name='Nerfd Roadkill' timestamp='1330855142' post='5855718'] As for officer, just a damgage dealer. Not really any specific he should do any other than being there and attacking. Togheter with the fort, they are supporters really. And yes, the Lp is very low, but i wanted it to be more focused on getting the milita out and punishing for not having it. as said, number of cards i hand will make a difference. BTW any idea on new effect for War bear that involves number of cards? Like burning your opponents hand? [/quote] Oh and sorry, i thought about the captain xD. But yeah, its all about the number of cards in hand. Pump him, hit, win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 you mean the ritual War Bear? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Yeah, i want it to follow the them as the original bear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Well the no targeting via spells is good so to that regards, I'd say for War Bear you should keep the burn a little bit smaller, like maybe 200 burn per card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 I have updated the war bear as i think you meant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 all right then now, are you having any luck in finding pictures? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerfd Roadkill Posted March 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2012 Well, forgot to ask today xd. Mayby i should post theese in no pic forum... Fell like i need. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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