TOM 3.5 Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 [center][spoiler='Ghast'][img]http://i40.tinypic.com/ama443.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Creeper'][img]http://i41.tinypic.com/2hnp6r6.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Ghast's Fireball'][img]http://i44.tinypic.com/4qrgw2.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler='Zombie'][img]http://i40.tinypic.com/2hrpb2h.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler='Wooden Sword'][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7624/woodensword.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Steve'][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5863/steveyg.png[/img][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler='Full Set of Armor'][img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1996/fullsetofarmor.png[/img][/spoiler][/center] [center]The human character of Minecraft. He fights for to survive and to build amazing structures. He gathers supplies by venturing deep into the wilderness and uses his supplies to create weapons and tools to aid his effort of survival. He has to also fight off many enemies from zombies to spiders to creepers.His true goal is to venture to The End and vanquish the mighty enderdragon.[/spoiler] Please rate and tell me how to improve. Please also tell me OCG fixes.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 Creeper is interesting, because of the fact that playing it in defense in hopes it will be destroyed is the only method to use it effectivly. Makes sense based on creepers in game, but your ghast is desperatly under powered based on how Ghasts are in Minecraft. Id recommend changing your Ghast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wave_Sine Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 Ghast: 2.5/10. Your image is 'squished', the title font is wrong, and its a Normal Monster, and thus rather boring for what is one of the more unsettling enemies in the game. Give it an effect. Creeper: The image is decent, and the effect is flavorful. Your OCG needs work, though you didn't ask for fixes so I can't. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 [quote name='Alex_S.' timestamp='1331176972' post='5861621'] Ghast: 2.5/10. Your image is 'squished', the title font is wrong, and its a Normal Monster, and thus rather boring for what is one of the more unsettling enemies in the game. Give it an effect. Creeper: The image is decent, and the effect is flavorful. Your OCG needs work, though you didn't ask for fixes so I can't. 6.5/10 [/quote] I said tell me how to improve so yes fixes are allowed and I would apreciate themAlex@ Thanks for the suggestion and your are right about ghast I will Buff it and please tellme fixes for creeper[quote name='No. 34 Terror-Byte' timestamp='1331176893' post='5861619'] Creeper is interesting, because of the fact that playing it in defense in hopes it will be destroyed is the only method to use it effectivly. Makes sense based on creepers in game, but your ghast is desperatly under powered based on how Ghasts are in Minecraft. Id recommend changing your Ghast. [/quote] Doing that right now hopefully the buff will make it more to how it should be in game but It will be more powerful once I get to some of the equips for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wave_Sine Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 [quote=Creeper]When this card is destroyed[b]: Inflict 1000 damage to both players. If this card is destroyed by battle with a monster that has 1500 or less ATK: Banish the monster that battled this card, then inflict damage equal to half its ATK to your opponent.[/b][/quote] Fixes are bold, and (probably) are correct with the 'Problem-Solving Card Text' on the newer cards. Also, I'm guessing that you used Magic Set Editor with the Yugioh templates for these? Try to find the correct font for the card titles. If you look around this or the MSE forums you should be able to find it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 Alex@ I have and have had no luck so I simply stick to the one with the template. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 If you want my honest opinion, don't make their effects bland. Possibly idea for zombie: Keep his attack at like 700 and make it so he cannot be destroyed by battle, and every monster he attacks is changed to Zombie Type. So you can mess up decks that are Type based. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 [quote name='No. 34 Terror-Byte' timestamp='1331244580' post='5862271'] If you want my honest opinion, don't make their effects bland. Possibly idea for zombie: Keep his attack at like 700 and make it so he cannot be destroyed by battle, and every monster he attacks is changed to Zombie Type. So you can mess up decks that are Type based. [/quote] Its an okay effect but I was planning to make some support against type based decks later on but I might change zombie if I need to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted March 8, 2012 Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 I just find Vanillas to be too plain and useless, unless you actually plan on supporting Vanilla monsters with your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2012 [quote name='No. 34 Terror-Byte' timestamp='1331245940' post='5862318'] I just find Vanillas to be too plain and useless, unless you actually plan on supporting Vanilla monsters with your cards. [/quote] I am planning to use Zombie for some stuff later.Plus Zombie is really boring and plain mob anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 Planning on adding a card or two tonight. Hopefully I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Some new cards are now up to look at. Please rate and tell me how to improve. Also I want to know does anyone want to have Herobrine in the card set? I know some people don't like when fan created stuff is added in the set. So I will take a poll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted March 13, 2012 Report Share Posted March 13, 2012 Steve's flavour text is missing the C from Create. I havent seen Gold Sword yet, so good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2012 [quote name='No. 34 Terror-Byte' timestamp='1331605665' post='5868496'] Steve's flavour text is missing the C from Create. I havent seen Gold Sword yet, so good so far. [/quote] Please tell me exactly about the Flavor text missing a C from create.Also Sorry to anyone about the number on the card. That is the order in the set number which I can't change.Never mind I found the error and fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 Well I hope to get some more ratings soon. I have been working on some cards lately so I will update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToFuJosH Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 Nice. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted March 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 [quote name='ToFuJosH' timestamp='1332120908' post='5877696'] Nice. 10/10 [/quote] ThanksNew card is out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted April 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2012 Well I amstaring to work on the Herobrine card so I should get it done soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted April 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2012 Can anyone help me with the text problem with MSE? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 do you mean the font? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted May 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2012 Well I have been having updating do to posting issues so new cards will have to wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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