Zyzzyzus Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 Inspired by Lightforce Sword. [img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091111115221/yugioh/images/thumb/5/5b/LightforceSwordRP02-EN-C-UE.jpg/300px-LightforceSwordRP02-EN-C-UE.jpg[/img] All monsters are even-leveled LIGHT Spellcaster/Warrior. All Xyz monsters are Fairy Type and have "Divine Seal" in their name. You'll notice that there are no tuners, that is because the energies used by Lightforce monsters to perform their temporal-spacial manipulation is inherently dissonant in nature, and thus will not work properly with Synchronization (and despite being of the LIGHT attribute, it is primarily derived from the Yin of magic, rather than the Yang, so it is less powerful when used by males.) That said, there will be Synchro Monsters, just that they won't be summoned using Tuner monsters. Mostly involves banishing cards face-down, and returning them to the field during a specific phase of a specific turn. Some effects also allow monsters to be placed in face-down Attack Position. Swords of Concealing/Revealing Light are key cards, since many of the effects depend on Swords of Concealing Light, while Swords of Revealing Light is to protect the weaker monsters, and it also factors into the Synchro monsters. [spoiler="Monsters"] [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/2jcbir.jpg[/img] FLIP: Activate only when you control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light". Banish 1 Level 4 or lower "Lightforce" monster from your Graveyard face-down. During your next Standby Phase, Special Summon it. [img]http://i39.tinypic.com/hsqplf.jpg[/img] Face-up "Swords of Revealing Light" and "Swords of Concealing Light" you control cannot be destroyed by an opponent's card effect. Shuffle this card into your Deck to select 1 "Swords of Revealing Light" or 1 "Swords of Concealing Light" in your Graveyard and Banish it face-down, and it returns to your hand during your 3rd Standby Phase after the activation of this effect. [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/ke7u3s.jpg[/img] FLIP: Activate only when you control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light". Until your opponent's next End Phase, Banish any face-down Spell or Trap cards your opponent controls face-down. Cards banished by this effect are returned to the field during your opponent's next Standby Phase. [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/rwj8yh.jpg[/img] This card's effects can only be activated when you control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light". If this card is face-down, when your opponent Special Summons a monster, you can flip this card into face-up Attack Position to negate its effect and Banish that monster face-down. Monsters banished by this effect are returned to the field during your opponent's next Standby Phase. [img]http://i41.tinypic.com/155glfs.jpg[/img] FLIP: Special Summon 1 "Lightforce" monster from your hand or Deck in face-down Attack Position. That monster cannot activate its effects or be Flip Summoned until your next Standby Phase. Banish the top 3 cards of your Deck face-down when this card's effect resolves. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/2wdbkf9.jpg[/img] If this card is face-down, and a face-down card is flipped face-up (including activation), you can flip this card face-up to negate its effect(s) and Banish that card face-down. Cards banished by this effect are returned to the field during the 2nd Standby Phase after the activation of this effect. [img]http://i39.tinypic.com/23wn1na.jpg[/img] If you do not control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light" or "Swords of Revealing Light", destroy this card. You can Banish the top card of your Deck face-down to negate the activation of an Effect monster's effect, and Banish it face-down. During the End Phase, that monster is returned to the field. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack during the same turn. [img]http://i39.tinypic.com/zipxfb.jpg[/img] Once per turn, you can select 1 "Lightforce" monster from your hand and Banish it face-down. During your 2nd Standby Phase after the activation of this effect, Special Summon that monster in face-down Attack Position. This card gains 200 ATK for each face-down card in either player's Banished Zone, and 600 ATK while you control a face-up "Swords of Revealing Light". [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/359merm.jpg[/img] If you do not control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light" or "Swords of Revealing Light", destroy this card. You can activate each of the following effects once per turn: · Pay 1000 Life Points, and Special Summon 1 monster from your Banished Zone in face-down Attack Position. · Negate the effects of all monsters you control (even if face-down), and draw 2 cards. · Banish the top 2 cards of your Deck face-down, and select 1 face-down Spell or Trap card. That card cannot be activated this turn (including as a response to this effect). [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/34oy55l.jpg[/img] FLIP: Activate only when you control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light". Check all face-down cards in your opponent's Banished Zone, select and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster to your side of the field. That monster cannot be Tributed or used as a Synchro Material Monster. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/24xifxe.jpg[/img] Negate this card's effect if you do not control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light" or "Swords of Revealing Light". "Lightforce" monsters you control in Attack Position cannot be destroyed or targeted by your opponent's card effects (even if face-down). [img]http://i41.tinypic.com/zujn0m.jpg[/img] You can Special Summon this card from your hand by selecting 2 "Lightforce" monsters in your Banished Zone, and shuffling them into your Deck. When this card would be removed from the field by a Spell/Trap Card, you can Banish 1 "Lightforce" card in your hand face-down to negate the effect and destroy that card. When a card is destroyed by this effect, you can add 1 "Swords of Revealing Light" or "Swords of Concealing Light" to your hand from your Deck. [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/nq1v2q.jpg[/img] When this card is banished (even if face-down), Special Summon it. If this card inflicts destroys a Level 4 or higher monster by battle, select 1 face-down card on the field, and Banish it face-down. During your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after the activation of this effect, return that card to the owner's hand. [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/5sit5.jpg[/img] When this card is banished (even if face-down), Special Summon it. You can shuffle 3 cards from your hand or field into your Deck, then Banish the top 2 cards of your Deck face-down OR Banish 1 "Swords of Revealing Light" or 1 "Swords of Concealing Light" from your Deck. During your 3rd Standby Phase after the activation of this effect, return the card(s) banished by this effect to your hand. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/55i53l.jpg[/img] When this card is banished (even if face-down), Special Summon it. If there are 4 or more face-down cards in your Banished Zone, this card gains the following effects: · While you control a face-up "Swords of Revealing Light", monsters Set from the hand are changed to face-up Attack Position. · While you control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light", monsters that are Summoned are Set instead (without changing its battle position), and cannot be flipped up during the same turn. [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/29aryja.jpg[/img] This card gains the following effects, based on the number of face-down cards in both players' Banished Zone: · 1-10: Banish the bottom 2 cards of your Deck face-down. Select 2 cards on the field or in either player's hand, and roll a die. If the result is even, Banish those cards, they return to their owner's hand(s) during the 3rd Standby Phase after this effect is activated. · 10+: Pay 3000 Life Points, and Banish this card. Special Summon as many "Lightforce" monsters from your Banished Zone as possible, they are banished during the End Phase. [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/av8y8.jpg[/img] Cannot be Special Summoned, except by banishing 2 "Lightforce" monsters from your field or hand face-down. Once per turn, you can flip all "Lightforce" monsters you control face-down, but do not change their battle positions. If you control a face-up "Swords of Concealing Light", when a card effect is activated, you can pay 800 Life Points to negate the effect and destroy that card. [/spoiler] [spoiler="Spells & Traps"] [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/21mrzpw.jpg[/img] While you control 2 or more face-up "Lightforce" monsters, OR a face-up "Swords of Revealing Light": When a card would be sent to your opponent's Graveyard, except cards that are destroyed, that card is banished face-down instead. When this card is destroyed, select 1 face-down card from both players' Banished Zones. Those cards are returned to the owner's hand during the 2nd End Phase after the activation of this effect. [img]http://i41.tinypic.com/d5xz7.jpg[/img] When a card is removed from your side of the field, you can pay 500 Life Points to Banish that card face-down. While you control 2 or more face-up "Lightforce" monsters, OR a face-up "Swords of Revealing Light", once per turn, you can select 1 face-down card in your Banished Zone, that card is returned to your hand during your next Standby Phase. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/261f2g2.jpg[/img] Banish 1 monster on the field face-down, and during the next Standby Phase, that monster is Special Summoned in either face-down Attack Position or face-up Defense Position. After this card is activated, you can Banish 1 card from your hand face-down to shuffle this card into your Deck. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/207w9s9.jpg[/img] Target 1 face-up "Lightforce" monster you control, and equip it with a "Lightforce" monster from your Banished Zone (even if face-down). When the targeted monster is destroyed by battle, Banish it face-down, and Special Summon the monster equipped to it. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/2wd6qkh.jpg[/img] When a monster your opponent controls is changed to face-down Defense Position, select 1 face-up "Lightforce" monster you control and flip it face-down, but do not change its battle position. When a "Lightforce" monster you control is flipped face-down, except by the effect of this card, select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls, and change it to face-down Defense Position. Monsters flipped face-down by this effect cannot be flipped up or change their battle positions until the end of their controller's next End Phase. [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/13yl1dy.jpg[/img] Activate only during the End Phase. Destroy cards on the field equal to the number of cards banished this turn by the effects of "Lightforce" cards you control. [/spoiler] [spoiler="Extra Deck"] [img]http://i39.tinypic.com/34zekk0.jpg[/img] "Swords of Revealing Light" + 1 or more "Lightforce" monsters When "Swords of Revealing Light" is used as a Tuner, its Level is equal to the number of your opponent's turns that have passed since its activation. When this card is Synchro Summoned, equip this card to 1 monster you control. Banish card(s) from your opponent's hand face-down equal to the number of "Lightforce" monster(s) used as Synchro Material for this card when the equipped monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent. [img]http://i41.tinypic.com/sobi8i.jpg[/img] "Swords of Revealing Light" + 1 or more "Lightforce" monsters When "Swords of Revealing Light" is used as a Tuner, its Level is equal to the number of your opponent's turns that have passed since its activation. When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can Banish monsters on the field face-down equal to the number of "Lightforce" Synchro Material Monsters used for this card. This card's ATK is equal to Level(s) of monsters banished by this effect x 400. [img]http://i39.tinypic.com/6pqald.jpg[/img] "Swords of Revealing Light" + 1 or more "Lightforce" monsters When "Swords of Revealing Light" is used as a Tuner, its Level is equal to the number of your opponent's turns that have passed since its activation. This card cannot attack during the turn it is Summoned. Your opponent cannot negate the Synchro Summon of this card. Pay 1500 Life Points to Banish cards on the field face-down up to the number of "Lightforce" monsters used as Synchro Material Monsters for this card, and this effect cannot be negated by those cards. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/18jj82.jpg[/img] 2 or more Level 2 LIGHT monsters Once per turn: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and send 2 cards from your Banished Zone to the Graveyard; until your opponent's next End Phase, Spell and Trap Cards you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/1rf18j.jpg[/img] 2 or more Level 2 LIGHT monsters Once per turn: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and send 2 cards from your Banished Zone to the Graveyard; Banish up to 2 random cards from your opponent's Extra Deck face-down. Monsters banished by this effect return to the Extra Deck when this card is removed from the field. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/1zcpv9w.jpg[/img] 2 or more Level 4 LIGHT monsters When a monster would be Summoned, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target it, and send 1 monster of the same Level as the targeted monster from your Banished Zone to the Graveyard. Negate the Summon of that monster and Banish it face-down. Monsters banished by this effect are returned to the field when this card is removed from the field. [img]http://i39.tinypic.com/106j1qv.jpg[/img] 2 or more Level 4 LIGHT monsters Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. This turn, when this card attacks a monster that did not declare an attack during the previous Battle Phase, Banish it face-down with this card's effect without damage calculation. Monsters banished by this effect are returned to the field when this card is removed from the field. [img]http://i40.tinypic.com/6t2106.jpg[/img] 2 or more Level 6 LIGHT monsters Once per turn, this card can move to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone. Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Banish all other cards in the same column face-down, and this card cannot attack during the same turn. Cards banished by this effect are returned to the field when this card is removed from the field. [/spoiler] More to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REvan342 Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 I didnt see any OCG errors =). The concept is great. and i have no qualms with the balence of these monsters. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zyzzyzus Posted March 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 So I added more cards. Comments and critiques? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REvan342 Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 the Deity cards wording makes it so it can be normal summoned. ( not a complaint but is that what you meant?) The stats are low for a level 8 monster. Suggested stats---> ATK: 2000 DEF:3000 or ATK:2500 DEF:2500 or maybe lowering the level to 6 or 7. (this would make it a better support monster) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zyzzyzus Posted March 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 [quote name='REvan342' timestamp='1331497603' post='5866344'] the Deity cards wording makes it so it can be normal summoned. ( not a complaint but is that what you meant?) The stats are low for a level 8 monster. Suggested stats---> ATK: 2000 DEF:3000 or ATK:2500 DEF:2500 or maybe lowering the level to 6 or 7. (this would make it a better support monster) [/quote] It's able to be Normal Summoned or Set, yes. I'm consciously trying to make them have lower stats than would be expected, particularly because of the necessity of using Swords of Revealing Light, which will be important for the planned Xyz and Synchros that I'll add. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REvan342 Posted March 11, 2012 Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 [quote name='Zyzzyzus' timestamp='1331500270' post='5866442'] It's able to be Normal Summoned or Set, yes. I'm consciously trying to make them have lower stats than would be expected, particularly because of the necessity of using Swords of Revealing Light, which will be important for the planned Xyz and Synchros that I'll add. [/quote] Thnx for getting that straight. It being able to be normal summoned, mixed with the low stats, make it balenced. i like the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zyzzyzus Posted March 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Added a Synchro monster, with a new tuning method. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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