Wolf Den Set Part 1

[Bman master]

Okay so this is my first set so please try to be constructive when critisising instead of being bashful. Also don't forget to rate.
Tried to make them as realistic as possible so tell me if you find any too strong. Enjoy.

All image credits go to [url="http://yuumei.deviantart.com/"]http://yuumei.deviantart.com/[/url]

[color=#a52a2a][size=7]Monsters[/size][/color]

[size=6]Aqua Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
[url="http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg845/scaled.php?server=845&filename=67912844.jpg&res=medium"][img]http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab235/burakyilan/aq.jpg[/img][/url]
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[size=6]Fire Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
[url="http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg545/scaled.php?server=545&filename=67389403.jpg&res=medium"][img]http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab235/burakyilan/fi.jpg[/img][/url]
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[size=6]Forest Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
[url="http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg831/scaled.php?server=831&filename=29208848.jpg&res=medium"][img]http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab235/burakyilan/fo.jpg[/img][/url]
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[size=6]Ice Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
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[size=6]Thunder Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
[img]http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab235/burakyilan/Th.jpg[/img]
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[size=6]Wind Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
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[size=6]Space Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
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[size=6]Time Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
[url="http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg843/scaled.php?server=843&filename=40728293.jpg&res=medium"][img]http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab235/burakyilan/ti.jpg[/img][/url]
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[size=6]Sun and Moon Wolf Den[/size][Spoiler=]
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[size=5]Effect:[/size]
This monster cannot be normal summoned or set unless there is a "Wolf Den Arena" face-up on the field. This monster can attack twice per turn. One per turn during your Standby Phase select and activate 1 of the following effects:
●This monster cannot be targeted by Spell Cards and Spell Cards cannot be activated when this monster attacks.
●This monster cannot be targeted by Trap Cards and Trap Cards cannot be activated when this monster attacks.

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[color=#008080][size=7]Spell[/size][/color]

[size=6]Wolf Den Arena[/size][Spoiler=]
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So what do you think?

[Bman master]

bump

[LordEcchi]

I like the concept, but I'd like to point out some balance issues.

[b]Aqua Wold Den[/b]
If Aqua's effect works to summon "Space Wolf Den" then it's a little bit OP because you'd be able to get it out second turn, granting you two additional cards early in the game and potentially destroying your opponent's entire defense in a single turn if you draw two wolf den cards, not to mention it's high attack level.

The same goes for using it's effect to get "Sun and Moon Wolf Den", you could get it out second turn and render opponents counter-traps and/or quickplay spells useless, while at the same time putting a monster on the field that hits as hard as Dark Magician.

Now, there are some official cards that can do the same sort of thing (Elemental Hero Deck, fusions on first turn, etc) so it's not too much of a problem if you're dead-set against changing it, but for a truly balanced card I'd reword Aqua to have an attack or level limitation on it's effect

[b]Fire Wolf Den[/b]
2300 ATK is ungodly high for a 4-star with no additional summon conditions. Even taking the attack restrictions into account, this would make an almost impenetrable wall for the first few turns.

I suggest taking it's attack to 2000, which is still a little high for a 4 star, but the attack condition helps to equalize that.

[b]Ice Wolf Den [/b]

Not too bad, I think it might be a bit more balanced if it destroyed only traps or only spells (flip it over, if it's [chose type] destroy it, if not return it to it original position)

This way it's a bit less powerful, but also lets you spy on your opponent's face downs.

[b]Wind Wolf Den[/b]

I think the effect would be more balanced if you switched the values, give 1000 LP to increase the synchro by 500, or at least equal it out, 1000 for 1000.

[i]Are you going to be expanding this set and adding Synchros, etc? That would be something I'd be interested in seeing.[/i]

[b]Space Wolf Den[/b]

The effect should be re-worded so that it only triggers when it's Normal (tribute) summoned, becasue it's too OP to be able to draw two cards and destroy up to two cards no matter how you get it on the field (Special Summoning it from the graveyard, etc)

[b]Sun and Moon Wolf Den[/b]

This card should need "Wolf Den Area" to be summoned at all, not just Normal Summoned or Set, or else the summon condition becomes almost useless because it'd be too easy to Special Summon. I also think it should be destroyed if "Wolf Den Area" leaves the field.




[b]Other comments, typos etc.[/b]

On "Space Wold Den" you have "0000 DEF" there should only be one zero to represent 0 DEF
On "Wind Wolf Den" 'another' is one word, you have a space, like so: 'an other'
On "Wolf Den Arena" it says "Pay 300 Points" It needs to say "Pay 300[b] Life[/b] Points"
On "Space Wolf Den" you have the text "Tribute summoned", while this might be okay, most cards refer to tribute summoning as "Normal Summoning", since it's the 'normal' way to get lvl 6+ monsters

[b]Rating 8/10 -[/b]
I love the concept behind these cards, and I also like how they interact with one another, but there are some balance issues. If these are suitably rectified, I'd definitely give a 10/10