My First ever Card - Phantom Satoria

[Rewind God]

Hello. This is my first card and i thought it would be awesome to post it here. I like realistic cards so i decided to make one and post it in this section. Im a Big Fan of DARK/Fiend-Type/Zombie-Type/Warrior-type monsters so i made one DARK Zombie-Type. Hopefully ill get some great feedback and your ideas would be accepted and appreciated. Peace.

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This card can also be Special Summoned (from the hand or graveyard) by banishing 2 DARK monsters whose level is equal to or greater than this card. This card cannot be targeted by your opponent while in the graveyard or banished zone. If you successfully Summoned this card target 1 face-up monster; Reduce its level by 1. This card is unnaffected by your opponents Trap Cards. If you or your opponent successfully Special Summoned a monster while this card is face-up on the field, target that monster and activate 1 of the following effects.
-Reduce its level by 1
-Increase its level by 1
-Treat that monster as a DARK or Zombie-Type monster while its face-up on the field.

[Pokemon Trainer Red]

slightly oped and bad ocg grammer(a little i mean)

[Rewind God]

I probably should have changed the last effect to "If you [i]or your [/i]opponent successfully Special Summoned a monster" so the card could be a bit more useful in situations where the opponent might want to Xyz summon or disrupt the opponent's strategy by making his monster a DARK instead of (insert attribute here) so its immune to its own support or whatever.

[lukem]

nice for a newbie your next cards probaly going to be better