My First Card - The Man With No Name

[Fsrkfb]

This is the first card I have created, I haven't played Yugioh in about 5 years so please give me some suggestions and constructive critisism.

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I am planning to make more based on Westerns. Also, if this didn't show up, can someone help me with that? Thanks.

[Alice Moonflowyr]

Attachments arent allowed, sorry. You should go over to Written Cards.

[dragon619]

hmm good for a start, even i had trouble starting my first post XD.

[EpicDrago]

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[Xi-3]

Is this from the old game, [i]Outlaw[/i]? Otherwise I don't get the reference or why it's in the Pop Culture section.

Not sure about the dice roll effect since it doesn't seem to have a drawback. I mean, it allows the guy to attack up to six times if you're lucky. That'd be a pain for anyone using Tokens. I'm also wondering if you're using Union monsters for the other effect.

[Fsrkfb]

I messes up on that, I actually meant to put you can attck as many monsters as the number you roll, I'll fix it.

I messed up on that, I actually meant to put you can attck as many monsters as the number you roll, I'll fix it.

[Xi-3]

That still amounts to the same thing, Fsrkfb Two-Two. You should try to include a drawback effect on a dice roll effect so there's more of an element of chance. After all, your chances of even getting the 1 for a single attack is only 1 in 6. You're more likely to roll higher, at 5 in 6 -- and since a person can only field 5 monsters at once the only way you can attack six of them would be in a tag-team or team duel.

[poinl]

WAY OP, the roll of the dice can make it attack up to 6 times for an instant otk. maby 1 - 3 is attacks whilwe 4-6 have negative effects.

WAY OP, the roll of the dice can make it attack up to 6 times for an instant otk. maby 1 - 3 is attacks while 4-6 have negative effects.

[Hermit Purple]

if you get a 1(cannot attack),2-3 gains 300 , 4-5,attack twice, 6 lose 200 and attack directly

i wouldn't know how to go with it, but that's just an idea

[Xi-3]

A good idea, being the sort of thing I was talking about.

[Hermit Purple]

i would like to see other cards though, it seems like it could be useful if it had support for this guy

[Dragovian]

What if instead of getting negative effects, it could attack half as many times as shown on the dice (decimals rounded down)? This would mean that it could attack 0-3 times, with 1 occurring 1/3 of the time, 2 occurring another 1/3, 3 only 1/6, and 0 1/6 as well. I think this would even things up, and wouldn't overpower it, as it needs an element of chance.