Gods

[Mistery Hunter]

[spoiler=Twins]
[img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/apollo-1.jpg[/img][img]https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/535128_416879468326483_100000133018910_1807217_2069857891_n.jpg[/img]
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[spoiler=Great three gods]
[img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/hades-1.jpg[/img][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/poseidon-1.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/zeus-1.jpg[/img]
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[spoiler=Betrayal gods]
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[spoiler=rest of the gods]
[img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/hermes2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/hera2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/dyonisus2.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/athenathebrains.jpg[/img] [/spoiler]
[spoiler=minor gods]
[img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/janus.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/morpheus.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/hecate.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/pan.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=demi-gods] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/thaliaalsboom.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/thaliz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/sonofposeidon.jpg[/img]

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[spoiler=monsters from tartarus]
[img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/alecto.jpg[/img][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/laestrygon.jpg[/img][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/medusa.jpg[/img][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/hellhon.jpg[/img] [/spoiler]
[spoiler=titans][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/atlas.jpg[/img][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/uranus.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/hyperion2.jpg[/img][img]http://i1183.photobucket.com/albums/x470/Mistery_Hunter/gaia.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/calypso.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/oceanus.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/krios.jpg[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/KRONOS.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[spoiler=spell cards] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/gio.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[spoiler=roman gods] [img]http://oi45.tinypic.com/33vdie0.jpg[/img] [img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/6616/bf369db786ba4b1fbfc5553.png[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/5426/db0eda3d1119444791b5218.png[/img][img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1516/54066c9e4c3a4a109e8a48a.png[/img] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/990/0875af8f1508463f98bff16.png[/img][img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9603/bb5e7fab9bab4b5a9fd9f90.png[/img] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/mars.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/diana.jpg[/img] [/spoiler]
[spoiler=titans of rome] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/3480/a4577743bb9f4fd9b0adbd2.png[/img][img]http://i1067.photobucket.com/albums/u422/Yannick_van_Leeuwen/krios.jpg[/img] [/spoiler]
edit this might not work with chrome...
edit edit: I've made some roman gods.
edit edit edit: Roman titans
edit edit edit edit: yes krios is a greek and roman titan... (he's mentioned to be defeated by jacon but he is a greek titan so yeah....)
edit*5: ùinerva lore: when this card is summoned pick an effect: this card gains 2000ATK and become fire attribute. or 2000DEF and become water attribute. once per turn destroy a monster and become dark attribute. switch every monster to attack mode and become earth attribute or defence mode and become light attribute

[Rest in Piss YCMaker]

No. Post an image of the card. I can't link it from my phone but go to Tutorials and read Tormented's thing about manual uploading.

[M30WZ1K4]

Well, personally I have a few issues with the cards.

1) Fake types. I know others don't mind it as much, but I do.

2) About Zeus and Poseidon, the effects just get to me. What you could probably do is rename the cards "The Great Three - God of Thunder, Zeus" and "The Great Three - God of the Sea, Poseidon." (Although, put the appropriate names for them, I couldn't remember your card's exact titles).

3) With Artemis' effect, it just seems lazy. What if someone doesn't have Apollo in their Deck? How will they know the effect?

Overall: good cards, good images, and, good everything else. I'm hoping to see some more gods come out of this.

6/10

[Mistery Hunter]

I'll see what i can do

i think i adapted them all

[quote name='M30WZ1K4' timestamp='1332712164' post='5888443']
Well, personally I have a few issues with the cards.

1) Fake types. I know others don't mind it as much, but I do.

2) About Zeus and Poseidon, the effects just get to me. What you could probably do is rename the cards "The Great Three - God of Thunder, Zeus" and "The Great Three - God of the Sea, Poseidon." (Although, put the appropriate names for them, I couldn't remember your card's exact titles).

3) With Artemis' effect, it just seems lazy. What if someone doesn't have Apollo in their Deck? How will they know the effect?

Overall: good cards, good images, and, good everything else. I'm hoping to see some more gods come out of this.

6/10
[/quote]fake type is allowed in pop culture

[Miror B]

First off, don't do direct links. Click on the cardmaker that you want to post, then copy/paste the text that appears under it to get your image here.

If that doesn't work, save the image to your desktop, upload it to photobucket/tinypic/imageshack/whatever and use the image code they give you there.

Second, as of now I can only see Apollo and Ares, so I'll talk about them.

Greek God as a type, while understandable, is lazy. Not only that, it means you either plan on supporting them or they're going to go on being supportless. Get a bit Creative. Apollo could be Pyro. Ares could be a Warrior or Beast-Warrior. C'mon man!

Based on what I see, I'm guessing all your Gods are going to be 2 tribute monsters. Once I've established that, I can safely say that they are going to suck unless you either:
A: Give them inherent summoning conditions (like Cyber Dragon or Master Hyperion have in the actual TCG) or
B: Give them f*cking amazing effects that make up for losing 2 monsters (like Light and Darkness Dragon or Caius the Shadow Monarch).

Of the 2 I see, neither of them do that. Apollo would be cool, but suddenly it needs another monster on the field. And it's a Greek God, so I'm assuming it's another 2 tribute monster, which means you have to essentially give up 4 monsters to do so. Not worth it my friend.

Ares is bad period. 500 extra attack isn't going to offer much, and it's even worse since I need to give up 2 monsters for it.

Just put a bit of thought into your cards when you're making them, don't think up a random effect. If you have to don't even make them an archtype, make Poseidon do something for WATERs, or Apollo do something for FIRES. Iirc the Greek Gods have a history for hating each other anyway.

[M30WZ1K4]

And another thing. Upload your cards correctly!

-Go to tinypic.com
-Click on the URL bubble, and paste your link.
-Upload
-Use some common sense and find the one that is surrounded by . Copy and paste.

EDIT. It appears I've been ninja'd. Agreed with above.

[Mistery Hunter]

I've tried anything that everybody says of pasting right it's just that if i do that i get a picture of a card name dragolvl5
Not all gods are level 8 they are just the olympics

[Miror B]

Well if you're getting the wrong card image you should look at my second paragraph.

[Zepa]

there all quite high level so maybe you should make some like minions such as Bob Minion of Hades (bob is just a filler)

[Miror B]

Yea still not exactly seeing it. Now you're having to lose 3 monsters for Apollo to do anything besides stand there and look menacing. The attack boost is good don't get me wrong, but the cost seems inappropriate.

Ares at least had a good attack boost for it's cost. But you really haven't given much of a way to bring it out besides conventional methods so I'm iffy, plus it only works with these high powered guys that you probably want on the field.

Artemis needs to state the stats/level/attribute of the Toekn. Then I'll give a better rating.

Zeus is indeed Godly, but it's still giving up a monster that takes 2 monsters to get on the field, and it's a Normal Summon so without Reborn you aren't getting it out very quickly. Basically it's a case of running a good card that relies on a not-so-good card. Although there is a real card called Photon Sanctuary that could make this quite the lucksacky card.

Poseidon's in the same boat as Zeus, except it's effect isn't much outside a WATER deck. And with Artemis being the only God that meets its summon requirements and is WATER, I don't see much here.

Hades...well that's a case of an OP'd effect in a bad monster. It's in the same boat as Zeus, but freely adding a monster to your hand, even if it's just one, makes it an amazing effect so making it easier to summon could easily break it.

Hephaistos is...okay yea he's decent except for the Equip effect. Give him something a bit better than dealing with equips maybe, then give him 1500 ATK for the soul reason of Giant Rat. (Yes I know you're making a god deck but I still compare stuff with real cards).

Hera's bad for the soul reason that Life Gain is bad as a whole.

Hermes is a decent recycler I guess, but the level is what makes it pretty meh imo. Just that 2 tributes for a card that doesn't do much isn't that amazing.

Wisdom and War is a no. Relying on the opponent is never a good strategy. Plus some of those effects are worthless without other effects. I mean a double attacker isn't much to fear if it has 0 attack.

Aphrodite has no point at all. It just stands there begging your opponent to draw Dark Hole or some destruction card.

Demeter is actually an ok Life Gain card, but everything outside the effect makes it hard to run and use.

For Hestia, Solar Flare Dragon does the exact same thing only it's searchable by Sangan and UFO turtle.

And now my eyes hurt from 0 sleep so I'm done here

[Mistery Hunter]

[quote name='Tsukasa Hiiragi' timestamp='1332762188' post='5889169']
Yea still not exactly seeing it. Now you're having to lose 3 monsters for Apollo to do anything besides stand there and look menacing. The attack boost is good don't get me wrong, but the cost seems inappropriate.

Ares at least had a good attack boost for it's cost. But you really haven't given much of a way to bring it out besides conventional methods so I'm iffy, plus it only works with these high powered guys that you probably want on the field.

Artemis needs to state the stats/level/attribute of the Toekn. Then I'll give a better rating.

Zeus is indeed Godly, but it's still giving up a monster that takes 2 monsters to get on the field, and it's a Normal Summon so without Reborn you aren't getting it out very quickly. Basically it's a case of running a good card that relies on a not-so-good card. Although there is a real card called Photon Sanctuary that could make this quite the lucksacky card.

Poseidon's in the same boat as Zeus, except it's effect isn't much outside a WATER deck. And with Artemis being the only God that meets its summon requirements and is WATER, I don't see much here.

Hades...well that's a case of an OP'd effect in a bad monster. It's in the same boat as Zeus, but freely adding a monster to your hand, even if it's just one, makes it an amazing effect so making it easier to summon could easily break it.

Hephaistos is...okay yea he's decent except for the Equip effect. Give him something a bit better than dealing with equips maybe, then give him 1500 ATK for the soul reason of Giant Rat. (Yes I know you're making a god deck but I still compare stuff with real cards).

Hera's bad for the soul reason that Life Gain is bad as a whole.

Hermes is a decent recycler I guess, but the level is what makes it pretty meh imo. Just that 2 tributes for a card that doesn't do much isn't that amazing.

Wisdom and War is a no. Relying on the opponent is never a good strategy. Plus some of those effects are worthless without other effects. I mean a double attacker isn't much to fear if it has 0 attack.

Aphrodite has no point at all. It just stands there begging your opponent to draw Dark Hole or some destruction card.

Demeter is actually an ok Life Gain card, but everything outside the effect makes it hard to run and use.

For Hestia, Solar Flare Dragon does the exact same thing only it's searchable by Sangan and UFO turtle.

And now my eyes hurt from 0 sleep so I'm done here
[/quote]for aphrodite if skill drain is out...
this decl isn't done you know there are boosters and all i just start with monsters

[Miror B]

If skill Drain is out Barbaros is just as good.

And I'm just judging on what I see. Add stuff and I'll keep judging.

[Mistery Hunter]

well i respect your judgement but if i change everything you say it just wouldn't feel mine you get what i meen

[Miror B]

I don't say that.

I gave suggestions on what you can do, it's up to you whether you take them or do your own thing. Either way it's yours to do with.

[Mistery Hunter]

Okay what do you think of the new one?

[M30WZ1K4]

You misspelled Virginity.

Aphrodite's effect should just make her a level 1 with 0 ATK and 0 DEF. That's all she's good for. She can't attack but can't be attacked? it's just a stupid (and lazy) effect, in my own opinion.

And with the nameless God of Wisdom and War (I'm guessing Athena), what if an opponent has a DARK and EARTH card on their side of the field? Would it's own effect cancel it's own effect out?

A few minor things about grammar: Capitalize the beginning of all sentences. It's just lazy if you don't. Capitalize the words Deck, Graveyard, Hand, Summon (Include Special, Normal, and Set). Some of the effects could be rephrased. And for the only spell card, it could be rephrased to: "Mount Olympus: Home of the Gods." Sounds more regal that way.

[Xi-3]

Please, please please correct your grammar. It is currently very hard to understand what the cards are supposed to do. You could simplify them as well. Good picturs, though.

Apollo, God of the Sun: Each turn you can tribute a monster to place 1 Counter on this monster (max 2). When this monster attacks, all other PYRO-types you control gain 1000 ATK for as long as this card is on the field.

Ares, God of War: When this card attacks all other monsters you control gain 1000 ATK for every monster in your Graveyard that has 'God' in its name.
And by the way, you used Marvel's Ares for the picture, didn't you?

Artemis, Goddess of the Hunt (Earth): During your Main Phase Special Summon 1 Token (500/500/3) on the field. These Tokens can be used as tributes.
Zeus, God of Thunder: This card can only be summoned by tributing 1 monster with 'God' in its name of Level-8 or higher. Once per turn you can destroy 1 card as long as it is not a LIGHT-type monster.

Poseidon, God of the Seas: This card can only be summoned by tributing 1 monster with 'God' in its name of Level-8 or higher. When a WATER-type you control is destroyed in battle you can return it to the field by tributing 500 ATK from Poseidon.

Hades, God of the Underworld (Fiend): This card can only be summoned by tributing 1 monster with 'God' in its name of Level-8 or higher. During your Standby Phase roll a die and banish a monster whose level is equal to the roll. During your End Phase, select a banished monster and send it to your Deck. Shuffle your Deck.

Hephaestus, God of the Forge: Once per turn you can search the top or bottom 5 cards in your Deck and add any Equip Spells to your hand. As long as this card is on the field, all Equip Spells increase their monsters' ATK another 500.

Hera, Goddess of Fidelity (by the way, I think your picture is of Eris judging by the apple): This monster can only be Special Summoned if Zeus is on the field by sending a monster with 'God' in its name from your Hand to the Graveyard. Increase both monsters' ATK by 500 as long as they are both on the field. Each turn gain 500 LPs.

Hermes, Swift God of Messengers: Once per turn you may return a card from your Graveyard to your Deck. Shuffle your Deck.
Artemis, Goddess of Wisdom: If your opponent controls more monsters than you do, increase this card's ATK by 1x the difference. If you control more monsters, you may look at the top 5 cards in your Deck or in your opponent's Deck and rearrange them.

Aphrodite, Goddess of Love: This monster cannot be attacked by a male monster. If you control another monster and your opponent declares an attack on this monster, change the target to the other monster. Its ATK increases by 1000 until the End Phase.

Demeter, Goddess of Harvest: Each turn place 1 Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed, increase your Lifepoints by 1000x the number of Counters on the card.

Hestia, Goddess of Fire: During your Battle Phase you can deal 500 LPs direct damage to your opponent.
Mount Olympus: As long as this card is on the field, reduce the summoning requirements for all monsters with 'God' in the name by 1, other than 'Hades, God of the Underworld.'

Eris, Goddess of Disorder: Each turn roll a die and activate the corresponding effect: 1. Change an attack's target to another monster on either side of the field. 2. Change a Trap's target to another monster on either side of the field. 3. Delay a Spell or monster effect's activation until the same phase on the following turn. 4. Roll again and destroy 1 monster with the same Level. 5. Gain 2000 LPs. 6. Lose 2000 LPs.

These are my suggestions. They do not contain correct OCG for certain. Take or leave them as you would.

[Mistery Hunter]

Thank you for putting correct grammar i'll update them as soon as I have time.
One detail though, You did change everything athena stood for, she was the god to be used against you opponents by their own cards, Like in yugioh GX with clear world

[quote name='M30WZ1K4' timestamp='1332792409' post='5889668']
You misspelled Virginity.

Aphrodite's effect should just make her a level 1 with 0 ATK and 0 DEF. That's all she's good for. She can't attack but can't be attacked? it's just a stupid (and lazy) effect, in my own opinion.

And with the nameless God of Wisdom and War (I'm guessing Athena), what if an opponent has a DARK and EARTH card on their side of the field? Would it's own effect cancel it's own effect out?

A few minor things about grammar: Capitalize the beginning of all sentences. It's just lazy if you don't. Capitalize the words Deck, Graveyard, Hand, Summon (Include Special, Normal, and Set). Some of the effects could be rephrased. And for the only spell card, it could be rephrased to: "Mount Olympus: Home of the Gods." Sounds more regal that way.
[/quote] Earth let's her attack twice what's the problem with that, Dark: none means dark monsters don't give her an additional effect.

[Rest in Piss YCMaker]

I just realised..why in God's name did you put these in Pop Culture

[Mistery Hunter]

Since they come from the movie and books of percy jackson.

[M30WZ1K4]

Then they would be PERCY JACKSON AND THE OLYMPIANS POP CULTURE!

Sigh...and you still need some of the components from the book, like Percy, Annabelle, Grover, and Tyson, and whoever else is in the books and movie. But, since I see you don't have those, this would still be gods.

Besides, I don't remember many of these gods being in the book I read.

[Rest in Piss YCMaker]

But Greek Gods are real things in history, they're not made up for the book....

[Wave_Sine]

I'd still accept these as Pop Culture...

Greek mythology is a thing that existed before the book series, as stated by above posts.

Also, there really isn't much to say about these that hasn't been said, but I'll reiterate: [b]Card Names are in Title Case, with words that are not articles or prepositions capitalized.[/b]

[Xi-3]

The Olympian Pantheon is an often-used group for fictional works. They could be said to be from anything, including [i]Percy Jackson[/i] and [i]Clash of the Titans[/i]. The determining factor is whether or not their effects reflect what they did in the source work. If they reflect generally on what the gods did according to the original Greek or Roman beliefs, then they're really not reflective of a Popular Culture source. Then again, some people might even consider [i]The Odyssey[/i] and [i]the Iliad[/i] as popular culture sources. It depends on the form (both have been adapted by Marvel), and who you ask.

You should also make sure the effects make sense, and that they can be used easily by anyone picking up the card the first time. That is, unless the cards were never intended to be played.

[skyshadow]

question: what's the point of apollo's counters? i can see you need to tribute a monster to gain 1 and i can see that it can hold a maximum of 2 but the atk increase effect doesnt show that it even needs the counters so what is the point? just wondering o.o

oh also what are the attribute and type of the tokens artemis summons?