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i like the over all effects of the cards. :P for high levels i can see them being used in different theme decks for their respective effects id give them a 7.5/10 :) umm... about my prior questions though o.o id still like to know what point of counters as well as type and attribute of tokens

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Please correct your spelling and grammar on the new cards.

On 'Zeus' you use 'isn't thunder,' which should is 'is not a THUNDER-type.'
For 'Aphrodite' you have numerous spelling mistakes. Please correct them. Also, her effect becomes useless if your opponent does not have cards that include an indication of female archetypes. Is there a way you can cover this? I am not certain making her immune from attacks from females makes sense anyway: shouldn't she be able to ward off attacks from males, and even make them defend her?
For 'Ares,' 1000 per God in the Graveyard may be a bit much. Please keep this in mind.
For 'Hera' you might consider lowering her starting ATK. I compare her to Buster Blade or Dark Paladin.
For 'Percy,' I understand that he was able to control water slightly, and it boosted his abilities and even healed him. I do not understand why he can change others to WATER-types. You should probably change this effect.
For 'Athena...' Brains, is it? You want the Zombies chasing her (they're always after brains)? The word you are looking for may be 'Intelligence' or 'Wisdom.' I recommend changing this word before... oh, too late: I see Zombies.
For 'Dionysus' you have once again made spelling errors. Please fix them. Also, saying 'any number' of Tokens could be dangerous. There is the drawback that they do not have any ATK or DEF so if they're attacked by a monster that does Piercing Damage you're pretty well sunk -- but at the same time if you were to Tribute Summon Dionysus and he was the only one on the field as a result you could use his effect to Special Summon 4 Tokens, and whatever survived could be used as tributes on the next turn. You might say that's cheating, in some manner.
For 'Annabeth,' watch your spelling again. Also, what are 'Metal Statues?' You have not created any yet, or are they a type of Token? As the teacher would say, 'please show your work.'

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ok... seriously, what is the point of the counters on apollo... they are pointless might as well just take that whole part out if you arent even going to have a use for them cause they certainly dont do crud for the rest of his effect. and artemis still has that mistake that the tokens she summons dont have an attribute or type. all tokens have an attribute and type; they are monsters after all.

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You could always ask someone for help on your grammar and spelling so you can avoid posting embarrassing mistakes. Your computer's spellcheck can even help a bit, although it cannot tell if you meant a different word. I see, though, that you have incorporated many suggestions into your cards, including some of my own.

EDIT: I do not think 'Poseidon' and 'Athena' are people who can have 'Demigods.' This is more of a type or subtype, in my opinion. You mean 'Son of Poseidon' and 'Daughter of Athena,' respectively. 'Demigod' could be used as a subtype under the DIVINE-types. There really does not seem to be a functional difference, though.

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First, you can use the 'edit' button so you don't break the rules by double-posting.
Second, if you want to add cards please do feel free to go ahead as long as you feel they belong in the set. The most important thing, in my opinion, is that they accurately reflect the characters' abilities, as well as being reasonable for gaming purposes, if your intention is for them to be used in duels.

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I have not read the books, so I cannot give you any ideas specific to the movies. I am familiar with some of the Greek myths, however that would mean moving away from [i]Percy Jackson[/i]. What I can do, if you ask me to, is to edit your spelling and grammar to be more correct. I cannot promise you it will be official grammar, but at least that way your nephew can understand and use the cards more easily.

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Zeus: 'thunder' should be all-caps, so 'THUNDER-type.'
Aphrodite: This monster cannot be attacked as long as you control another monster. She can only be destroyed by a monster with a female subtype.
Hermes: 'itin' should be 'it in.'
Percy: As long as you control this monster treat all other monsters as WATER-types. If 'Seawater' is on the field Percy gains 100 ATK for every other monster on the field, and 1000 ATK from Poseidon.
Dionysus: These tokens can only be used to Tribute Summon Greek Gods.
Annabeth: 'equipped' and 'destroyed' are the correct spellings.
Janus: Capitalize your names (in the description, too).
Morpheus: 'Defense Mode,' or 'Defense Position.' I forget which is new OCG.
Hecate, Mistress of Night: 'Blue Flame Token,' 'Token,' and 'PYRO-type.'
Pan: 'EARTH-type,' '1000 ATK', 'attacks,' and you only need 1 question mark.
Gods' Converter: When you activate this card, transfer all Counters from monsters with 'God' in the name that you control. Each monster gains 500 ATK per counter. When this card is destroyed the effect is negated.
Kronos, Father of the Greek Gods (Archfiend, Level-12, DIVINE): This card is Ritual Summoned through 'Ritual Glue.' When this card attacks its target's Battle Position is changed. When this card is attacked its Battle Position changes.

And as has been mentioned before, Apollo's Counters do not have a purpose on their own. They now have a purpose relative to 'Gods' Converter.'

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Shouldn't you be capitalizing names of people and places, like 'Tartarus?' I didn't realize Medusa had ever been there.

Medusa: Once per turn tribute a monster with 'Tartarus' in its name. Target 1 monster. It cannot attack, activate its effect, or be tributed.
Hellhound: 'This...'
Since it's a normal monster you could even boost its stats a little if you really wanted to. For now they seem fine, though. He should be a FIEND-type, in my opinion. You may also consider 'Cerberus' as another possibility.
Liastrygonan: 'Defense Position.'
That's generally what Piercing Damage means, isn't it? But Capitalization Is Important, my friend. The picture kind of looks like Logan having a bad day, if you don't mind me saying.
Alecto: Ah yes, and where are her sisters, Megaera and Tisiphone? I'd include them too, before they get ticked off at you for not doing so. Fury's wrath is... not a good thing to incur. In the meantime, though, immunity to all cards' effects is a bit much for any one monster, especially if you insist on making Necessity's protectors and administrators four-star monsters. Or are they just that much more powerful in the [i]Cybermancy[/i] series? What I would do is create all three Furies, and assign one immunity type to each. That would be more fair. I'd also give them some defense, since they're tougher than they've been credited as being in recent movies.

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hmmm one detail, i'm basing this on themovie and books and they are not all to powerfull there,also i've granted her immumity becausse in the books monsters don't die they just go away and reborn but to make it better i've decided that immumity is better + she doesn't have defence becausse in the books she getsdestroyed by one slice attack and since its based on that, thats how it is. To top it off she doesn't have full immumity, only when she attacks wich is an effect many monsters have.

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yes thats kinda the reason, oh i forgot the stas sorry i'll update...
EDIT: it says counters not tokens...
EDIT OF EDIT: I've added Calypso but her ATK are exremly high or the reason that she can't attack most monsters (once I've done Ogigaya this will change and all so wait for that)
EDIT OF EDIT OF EDIT: I'll update this set with most field spells if anybody responses.

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