Redgrave Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 so ya im working on a new set, main focuse is Removing monsters to gain thier effects. i have mixed feelings on this card, so i figured id toss it out and see what different people have to say about it. This card is still in testing phases, so any and all wording is probably off a bit, and i do apologize for that. [IMG]http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x415/Redvahan/Relm/JannaDarkKnightofRelm.png[/IMG] When this Face-up card is Removed from your sie of the Field: Discard up to 2 cards from you or your opponent's Hand. You can Destroy Face-up monsters on the Field equal to the cards Discarded from your Hand. For each Face-up monster destroyed, the owner Draws 1 card. so ya feedback and suggestions are as alwase appreciated. Thank You ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dennis Bekker Posted March 27, 2012 Report Share Posted March 27, 2012 omfg, i had quite the same idea and belive it or not almost the same name for my set (The Realms), just got finished with them today. im quite shocked right now o.0 well i would suggest to make it cost, not discard, because you know. dark worlds. and your "oppoents hand" seems kinda op´d to me. but anyway very interesting card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN Posted March 28, 2012 Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 [quote name='Dennis Bekker' timestamp='1332892066' post='5891697'] well i would suggest to make it cost, not discard, because you know. dark worlds. and your "oppoents hand" seems kinda op´d to me. but anyway very interesting card. [/quote] I dont see how its OP'ed, you discard then redraw two cards in your opponents hand or yours, and destroy two cards on the field. And since they themself said that it was to remove cards for their effect. because you know. dark worlds. Then I dont see why you would take the effect away. I personally would make it when the card is destroyed the effect is activated, so it would limit the how easily the effect could be used. If you use the discard up to two effect on your opponent, they lose two cards, which is good, but they gain two more cards, which isnt neccesarily good or bad, but THEN you can destroy up to two cards on the field, which would probably be good for you, otherwise you wouldnt activate the effect. I say its a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redgrave Posted March 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 well, i made it Remove so no matter if you banish it, send it to the deck or hand, no matter what, you get the discard effect as long as this card was face up... and to counter that, i made it to were you can only destroy cards when you discard cards from your hand, and to counter that counter, i made it to like a Kuraz effect. the main point i was concernd about was no matter what(as long as you were able to summon her succesfully), you can discard 2 cards from either player's hand and shes only a lvl 4 monster... so ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN Posted March 28, 2012 Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 Well it was my personal preference, Im not saying you should change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redgrave Posted March 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 yes and thats what i was asking for, so thank you ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN Posted March 28, 2012 Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 Your welcome . Is this part of a whole new set or just something on its own? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redgrave Posted March 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 its a set im designing, its kind of a 2 part set. I dunno if im gonna make this part of the banish or graveyard portion yet... i might just keep her for both, dunno tho yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ekko1990 Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Looks good, but I'd change the discarding part to either that your opponent discards 2 cards (since up to would make the opponent choose how many) or "discard up to 2 random cards from your opponent's hand". Since it would be too powerful if you could choose which cards were discarded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redgrave Posted March 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 i was toying with a random aspect, but i also like the fact you pointed out with giving my opponent the choice to "Pick thier Poison" as it were, but you also have to figure sumthing out as well, if you discard from THIER hand, you dont get to destroy cards on the field... so its got it's ups and downs, and different tactics you can use for it. Thank you for the feedback, this is what i wanted, different views and ideas for this card ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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