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[img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Yugi&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=4&magictraptype=None&rarity=Common&picture=http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/1/16/Yugis_bunkoban_vol1.jpg&set1=yugi&set2=en001&inset=true&type=Warrior&description=All%20normal%20monsters%20gain%20700%20atk.&circulation=&atk=1900&def=1900&creator=7swords&year=2012&serial=43741923[/img][img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Jaden&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=4&magictraptype=None&rarity=Common&picture=http://images4.fanpop.com/image/photos/20100000/Jaden-Yuki-jaden-yuki-20160159-378-375.gif&set1=yugi&set2=en002&inset=true&type=Warrior&description=All%20fusion%20monsters%20gain%20700%20atk.&circulation=&atk=1900&def=1900&creator=7swords&year=2012&serial=43741923[/img][img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Yusei&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=4&magictraptype=None&rarity=Common&picture=http://sp270.fotolog.com/photo/17/33/32/yusei_stardust/1257528994820_f.jpg&set1=yugi&set2=en003&inset=true&type=Warrior&description=All%20synchro%20monsters%20gain%20700%20atk.&circulation=&atk=1900&def=1900&creator=7swords&year=2012&serial=43741923[/img]

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First, upload your image correctly. Take that big link, go to tinypic, copy and paste, find the link with [IMG] at the beginning, copy and paste to here.

Secondly, the card itself seems lazy, and more fitted to be a spell card. Rephrase the effect to "As long as this card remains on the field, all Synchro monsters gain 700 ATK."

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First of all I think you made a nice concept using Yugi's most used cards, Jaden's and yusei's but I do have a question.
When you say normal monster does that include the effect monsters because yugi uses those a lot aswel. Ifyou want you could add Yuma and the Xyz boost but that's up to you. Overal rating 7/10

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I still only see the URLs, so I have to copy and paste them to see the cards. Here are my comments anyway:

In general they seem to all have the same attributes and stats. Because they're human and unarmed, don't you think that 1900 ATK and DEF is more than just a bit much? On their own, they have not demonstrated much ability to attack or defend at all so their own stats ought to be lower. I have also never seen a monster with its ATK and DEF both set at 1900 -- I know this is a bit strange since my Celestial Being set has some monsters with high stats. I will adjust them later. I see these 'monsters' as being their primary personalities, where they have more than one in any case. You could create a Yami no Yugi / Atem card to support Yugi with magic, and a Yubel card for Judai.

On the contrary, these monsters' abilities seem far from sufficient: 700 is not a lot to boost unless you're boosting a lot from other cards as well. I was thinking, for example, that they should be able to use monsters as Equip Spells to boost their own power, and even use normal Equip Spells without having to worry about the use restrictions, or something like that, considering Yugi, Judai, and Yusei are like the Egyptian Sorcerers, summoning monsters. Yusei could even use his power as a Signer, or something similar -- so my issue with the cards as they currently stand is that they do not, in my opinion, reflect their characters enough. I ask that you take the opportunity to think how you could improve this. If you do not come up with anything, that is also fine: these are your cards, so what you do with them is up to you. This is only my opinion, and ought to be taken as such.

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