BCTElite Posted March 28, 2012 Report Share Posted March 28, 2012 So here is my new Deck ! tell me what u all think if you want an effect comment which one and i will post it. [spoiler='Monsters '][img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/29.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/28.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/27.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/26.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/25.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/24.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/23.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/22.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/21.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/20.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/19.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/18.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/17.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/16.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/15.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/14.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/13.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/12.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/11.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/10.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/8.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/7.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/6.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/5.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/4.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/3.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/1.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spell and Trap'][img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/30.jpg[/img][img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/31.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/47.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/43.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/42.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/41.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/40.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/39.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/38.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/37.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/36.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/35.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/34.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/33.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/32.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Fusion Monsters'][img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/50.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/49.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/48.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/46.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/45.jpg[/img] [img]http://i1241.photobucket.com/albums/gg517/BCTElite1/Deck%202/44.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon Trainer Red Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mimis patrinos Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [attachment=34352:Gods.gif][attachment=34352:Gods.gif] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCTElite Posted March 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 [quote name='mimis patrinos' timestamp='1333031981' post='5893542'] [attachment=34352:Gods.gif][attachment=34352:Gods.gif] [/quote] yugi owns them all at the end also its the Pharo... not sure if it helps but yeah[quote name='Pokemon Trainer Red' timestamp='1333027250' post='5893510'] Interesting... [/quote] well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragovian Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Any particular reason why Reptielian Blade has a picture of Stardust from the Anime on it? Just Curious. Confused by Last Hit. WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO? Also, sorry to break it to you but Special Swipe has already been done officially in the form of Special Hurricane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7swords Posted March 29, 2012 Report Share Posted March 29, 2012 Cool deck but like dragovian said Reptielian Blade has a picture of Stardust and lexcius's pic is Earthbound Revival. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCTElite Posted March 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 [quote name='Dragovian' timestamp='1333057912' post='5893941'] Any particular reason why Reptielian Blade has a picture of Stardust from the Anime on it? Just Curious. Confused by Last Hit. WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO? Also, sorry to break it to you but Special Swipe has already been done officially in the form of Special Hurricane. [/quote] ok and for last hit dunno y but you might want to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zepa Posted April 7, 2012 Report Share Posted April 7, 2012 There good but none of the effects really link together to make combined deck so most people would just use one or two of these cards to help certain decks but there good very useful cards. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasder47 Posted April 9, 2012 Report Share Posted April 9, 2012 dont understand the sludges effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zepa Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 I think you need to re-think the sludges effect the wording dosn`t really make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wynchester Posted April 14, 2012 Report Share Posted April 14, 2012 Ok... I can't say much for these cards. Yeah, they are decent, but they need fixed: Zelosus should say "While" as Konami doesn't use "Whilst". Also, "face-up" and "field" are lowercase. Field is only capitalized when refering to a Field Spell. Zecro-Oxade should read "This card is also treated as a Machine-Type...". If Konami wanted it to be treated as only a Machine, they would have printed it as a Machine. If it's meant to be both you have to say so. Also, treated is lowercase. Super Insecto should say "Tributed" and not "Tribute". Also "Destroyed" should be lowercase. Also you need to add ", Special " between "destroyed" and Summon. Because of Grammar rules for the "," and you need to specify what type of Summon. Storm Blade should search for a different "Blade" just like the Gadgets. Otherwise, it would be abused in decks like an "Ultimate Offering" deck. Also "You" should be lowercase. Sludge #3: I need an Advil for this one...[list=1] [*]"If there is a Fusion Monster that requires "Sludge #3" as a Material Monster you can tribute this Monster and the other needed Material Monsters to Special Summon it in Face-Down Defense Mode." ---> First the wording is all wrong. It should read "You can tribute this card and other Monsters you control that are listed as materials". This is because "Sludge #3" knows it's name and the way you worded the other bits there confused multiple people already. You want to also say this: "for a Fusion Monster that requires this card to Special Summon that Fusion Monster to your side of the field in face-down Defence Position". There is formally no "Defense Mode". This one edit makes your card seem more realistic. Also the wording changes are helpful as well. [*]"this counts as a Fusion Summon." ---> Not too far off: "This Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon." That is the proper wording and adds proffessionality to your card. Also, you failed to make the "t" in "this" capitalized. It should be "This" not "this". [*]"When this Monster is Sent from the Graveyard" ---> Advil needs to kick in here... Did you even proofread your card? Where is the monster being Sent to from the Grave? What I think you want is this: "When this card is Sent to the Graveyard," and yes, you do need the "," at the end. [*]"you can pay 1000 Life-Points and Special Summon 1 "Sludge #1" and "Sludge #2" ---> "you can" sounds like you can choose to pay but don't have to in order for the Special Summon of the "Sludge"s to work. Try this: "you can pay 1000 Life-Points to Special Summon 1 "Sludge #1" and 1 "Sludge #2"". This is saying that if you want the Summon, you must pay up. Also, it's best to specify the number of each individual card to prevent noob duelists from messing up. [*]"from your Deck, Hand or Graveyard" ---> THis may be the Advil speaking, but this is really, really close. Just lowercase the "Hand" to read as "hand". [*]"and Trigger their effects." ---> This is pointless to have. TCG still has priority so they would be able to anyways. Just remove this part altogether. [/list] Sledge #2 and #1 are exactly the same.... There has always been slight difference between cards with "#" in all of Yu-Gi-Oh! history. What you need to do is give one of them (Probably "#2") an extra effect or a restriction. Here are the words you have: "If there is a Fusion Monster that requires "Sludge #X" as a Material Monster you can tribute this Monster and the other needed Material Monster to Special Summon it in Face-Down Defense Mode, this counts as a Fusion Summon." Here is what you need: "You can tribute this card and other cards listed as materials on a Fusion monster that requires "Sludge #X" as a Material to Special Summon it in face-down Defense Position. This Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon." Much better. I can't say perfect because I don't know all the capitalization rules, but better. Scorchick needs to say "is also treated". "Treated" and "Destroyed" should be lowercase. And you also need a "," after "destroyed". Finally specify that it's a Special Summon. I suggest making the Summon be for the deck. For Draconov, "Opponent's" and "Destroyed" are lowercase. Rock Reverence has no real issue outside of wording which is the trickiest part. "This Monster cannot be destroyed while it is in face-up Attack Position. (Damage calculation is applied as normal.)" is closer to official. Reptillian Blade is a terrible card to be honest. But here is the fix. "Summoned, flip a coin and apply the following effect...." Quebee needs to lowercase "opponent's" and add the appostrophe. Also, "place" should be "Special Summon" as they have stopped using "place" a while back. Mega Blade has the same effect issue that Storm Blade had with me. Make it search out a different "Blade". Also "Tern" is spelled with a "u" and not an "e" and it should be lowercase. Love the can't attack when summoned effect. Mecha-Sphere should start with this instead of what it does. "If this card is in face-up Attack Position, flip it into Defese Position." Also, "tern" is "turn". Finally, leave the last clause out. Konami never states that with ATK decreases or increases because of the fact that game mechanics make that impossible. For Mecha Storm, "Destroyed" is "destroyed", "chose" should be "target", "chosen" is "targeted", "tern" is "turn", "You and Your Opponent" is "both players", "Draw an extra Card during your Draw Phase" should read "draw an extra card during each respective Draw Phase." I give up... I'm just going to give you the bloody answers... Mammoth Moth: "When this card is destroyed, draw 2 cards." "destroyed" "turns" "activate" "hand" Magma Turtle: "as a Pyro-Type." "either player's Battle Phase" "discard" ["is now" should be "becomes"] Light Blade: "destroyed", don't allow it to add another Light Blade, "be destroyed by battle" Jack-O-Lantern: "also treated", "Once per turn,", "face-up", "destroy", "destroyed was", 2000 needs to be either 500 or his ATK cannot be greater than 1800. Vanillas: I don't care about them enough to bother with them. Horse Warrior - Tiko: "card", remove "Monsters" from ""Horse Warrior" Monsters", "field" Horse Warrior - Marix: "attack", "turn", "attacks", "foe Directly Gain" is "opponent directly, Gain", "Monster attacks directly, destroy it and Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower", "hand", and "face-up" Gem Soldier: "also treated", "a monster with", "field", "attack" Flame Frog: "field" Emberchic: "is attacked, it's DEF becomes 2500" Blaze Lizard: "Monster, you can reveal it to draw another card.", "If the second card you draw is a Monster, Special Summon it in face-up Defence Position unless it is a 4 or higher Monster." The remainder is unneccessary. 6 Armed: "Once per turn", during either player's Standby Phase you can roll a die. Increase this monster's ATK by the number rolled x250." I edited the effect itself so that people will actually use it. Also the ATK is just ? not ????. THANK GOD I AM DONE WITH THE MONSTER CARDS! Now for the spells and traps Card Knockout: "When either players Discards a card, destroy one face-up monster on the field." Cocoon: "Special Summon" Tiko's Revenge: "Activate this card during your opponent's Battle Phase. During your Standby Phase, Gain 200 Life-Points if there is a "Horse Warrior - Tiko" in the Graveyard." Special Swipe: To prevent your effect from being a duplicate of a real card, I'm going to alter it. "Destroy 2 Special Summoned Monsters on the field." Rainbow Fortress: "Increase the ATK of all WIND and EARTH Monsters on the field by 500 and Decrease the ATK and DEF of all DARK Monsters on the field by 1000." Lexcius: Make this effect like this ---> "Once per turn, during either player's turn, Negate the effect of one Monster your opponent controls and destroy it at the End Phase." Level Up!: This needs renamed. Level Up! is taken. Try "Level Booster". Effect should read: Equip this card only to a Level 5 or higher Monster. Increase its Level 4." Last Hit: I would totally use this card to mess with my opponent. One issue though, it must be a Quickplay Spell or a Trap. "Only activate this card when your opponent's Life-Points would reach 0. Your opponent's Life-Points become 1000, but they must send all of the cards in their hand to the Graveyard and Tribute one Monster. During your Standby Phase, Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field." Illusion Wall: "Select 1 face-up Monster on the field. Increase it's DEF by 500 and it is treated as a Rock-Type." Fusion Portal: "Reveal one Fusion Monster in your Extra Deck. Banish from the field the Materials listed on that card. Special Summon that Monster to your side of the field. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.) When the Monster Summoned by this card's effect is removed from the field, Banish it and Increase your opponent's Life-Points by 1000." Final Blow: "You can only avtivate this card when your Life-Points would become 0. Tribute 1 Monster and send your hand to the Graveyard. Your Life-Points become equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. During the next Standby Phase, increase your opponent's Life Points by the same amount as the Tributed monster's ATK." Elemental Orbs: "When a FIRE, WATER, EARTH or WIND Monster is sent to the Graveyard, increase the controller of that card's Life-Points by 250." Destruction Program 2.0: Wicked awesome card. I like this one. "face-up" and "field." Also "(Monster card effects cannot be chained in response to this card's activation.)" Destruction Program: "Destroy all face-down Monsters on the field. (Monster card effects cannot be chained in response to this card's activation.)" Finally, just the Fusions! Blazing Beast: "When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon all cards that were used to summon this Monster." Omega: "also treated", "is destroyed, add 2 Warrior...", and "hand". Red Reverence: If "Blue Reverence" and "Green Reverence" are both in the Graveyard or Banished, Discard 2 cards from your hand and Tribute 2 Monsters on your side of the field to Special Summon them to your side of the field." I had to add a little to the cost. Z.A.D.E.: "This card must be Fusion Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned any other ways. If this card is Fusion Summoned while your opponent has at least 3,000 Life-Points more than you, draw 3 cards. When this card destroys a Monster by battle, Decrease its ATK and DEF by 400." I like a lot of these cards once they are fixed and love all of the art. I give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snow_wolfyII Posted April 23, 2012 Report Share Posted April 23, 2012 Zekro-Oxade is seriously underpowered. Destiny Hero defender had 2.7k def and its only your opponent draw suring their standby phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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