Deep Sea Skull Serpent

[Transcendant Pro]

I am somewhat knew to this stuff and would like your opinion so i'll just give this a shot.

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Can also be Special Summoned [u][b][size=4](from your hand[/size])[/b][/u] by banishing 1 Sea Serpent-type monster in your graveyard. This card is also treated as a WATER monster. Your opponent cannot activate card effects during the turn this card was Special Summoned by its own effect. If a monster was banished from your field or graveyard increase the ATK of this card by 200. Once per turn, you can banish 1 monster from your hand to target 1 monster your opponent controls; Banish that target.

Idea: The focus of this card is to give Sea Serpents a lil more support. I made sure it was treated as a WATER monster for normal WATER support and "Umi" although im not sure if effects like Umi will affect monsters who are treated as another attribute instead of actually being the attribute. I also gave it a effect that is supported by banifish monsters and a effect that banishes your opponents monster...i was thinking of adding one more effect stating: "While this card is face-up on the field monsters in your opponents banished zone has their effects negated" to counter most banipsychics or other banifishes effect but i felt it was too much and that it wouldnt really be the main focus of this card. Anyways tell me what you think and Thank you for reading.

[Transcendant Pro]

bump.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

First off, you have to say where you can Special Summon this card from. [i]You can Special Summon this card from your ____.....[/i] It provides you the ability to practically do anything that turn he's Summoned since your opponent can't do anything in return. It slowly grows overtime, and if I'm reading it correctly it's practically a 2300 right off the bat. The effect itself seems a bit less powerful then Chaos Sorcerer's since you need to banish your own hand. I guess you can constantly use this and then use like, Return from the Different Dimension or something.

The cards concept is alright but it seems without the Sea-Serpent requirement to Special Summon it, it'd be better off in a D.D. Deck, because as of now I don't know what monsters can work well with this card.

[Transcendant Pro]

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First off, you have to say where you can Special Summon this card from. [i]You can Special Summon this card from your ____.....[/i] It provides you the ability to practically do anything that turn he's Summoned since your opponent can't do anything in return. It slowly grows overtime, and if I'm reading it correctly it's practically a 2300 right off the bat. The effect itself seems a bit less powerful then Chaos Sorcerer's since you need to banish your own hand. I guess you can constantly use this and then use like, Return from the Different Dimension or something.

The cards concept is alright but it seems without the Sea-Serpent requirement to Special Summon it, it'd be better off in a D.D. Deck, because as of now I don't know what monsters can work well with this card.
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Thank you for the comment.
Sorry for asking but what is a D.D. Deck? im not too familiar with abbreviations so help me out a lil XD
I thought this would go pretty good with banifishs although as of now its too focused on Sea Serpents. I might change that in the future later on.
Also thanks for pointing out the Special Summon part. It was supposed to only be from the hand since anywhere else would overpower it just a bit more than i want. Will change soon.

Changed. The bolded and underlined part is the changed wording or added wording since i was too lazy to change the whole card itself and reupload it since right now the uploading in this site doesnt work so i just changed the wording from the lore.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

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Thank you for the comment.
[b]Your welcome.[/b]
Sorry for asking but what is a D.D. Deck? im not too familiar with abbreviations so help me out a lil XD
[b]Different Dimension, but they're actually named D.D. They revolve around Banishing.[/b]
I thought this would go pretty good with banifishs although as of now its too focused on Sea Serpents. I might change that in the future later on.
Also thanks for pointing out the Special Summon part. It was supposed to only be from the hand since anywhere else would overpower it just a bit more than i want. Will change soon.
[b]Your welcome, and I never heard of Banifishes Care to explain?[/b]
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[Transcendant Pro]

Banifishes are basically monsters which consists mostly of Aqua-type, Fish-type, and Sea serpent-type monsters that corresponds with eachother by banishing themselves. Wingtortoise and Sky starray are one of the few main cards of the deck and can easily be abused to gain field advantage. Considering their effects and with the help of deep sea Diva you can easily bring out and banish quite alot of these monsters which really helps this card because of the ATK gain. monsters like Airorca and flyfang really gets the job and is enough to have this monster gain over 3000 ATK in a heartbeat. Spined gillman also helps in that it increases ATK of all fish, sea serpent, and Aqua-type monsters so now fly fang becomes a 2000 ATK beater while "Deep Sea Skull Serpent" is a 2700 beater which will potentially become 2900 after fly fang banishes itself. Basically saying these guys are cards that are really good for field advantage. So far i dont know what boss monster i can choose from but leviair is a great choice since most Banifishes are level 3 so its not so hard to bring out AND it special summons banished monsters so you can reuse their effects to power up Deep Sea Skull Servant even more making it very hard to get past. Hopefully that helped.

[Transcendant Pro]

ill give this another bump.

[Nightm@re-X]

Ok, First I'll go with the OCG

This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by banishing 1 Sea Serpent - type monster from your Graveyard. This card is also treated as a WATER monster while it face-up on the field. Your opponent cannot activate card effects the turn this card was Special Summoned by its own effect. Each time a monster is banished from your field or Graveyard, this card gains 200 ATK. Once per turn, you can banish 1 monster from your hand to banish a monster your opponent controls.

I guess that's it?

Anyways, about the card, Shouldn't the gaining ATK be activated when a monster is banished FROM THE FIELD not yours? I dunno if you were mistaken or not since if it was like that, it would work with its banishing effect.

I have never played with banfishes, but this can be awesome in a banishing deck?

Good card 8.5/10

[Transcendant Pro]

[quote name='Nightm@re-X' timestamp='1333550441' post='5901315']
Anyways, about the card, Shouldn't the gaining ATK be activated when a monster is banished FROM THE FIELD not yours? I dunno if you were mistaken or not since if it was like that, it would work with its banishing effect.

I have never played with banfishes, but this can be awesome in a banishing deck?

Good card 8.5/10
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The banishing from MY field was intentional because if it was to have an effect that activates when they banish from both sides of the field the card would be gaining ATK far too quickly because of its own effect which makes it pretty overpowered. I dont understand how that can be a "mistake"