something i did i think i did well

[Tsukune Aono_380813]

making kingdom cards yea XD

[Xi-3]

The following is my opinion only, and should be taken as such. While my suggestions may help you improve these and future cards, they are also not the only perspective, and should not be taken in any way as the only 'right' answer.

First off, please is the Image icon to post images instead of trying to attach them. This will allow each card to be displayed at full size on the page and make them easier to read. Second, it would be wise to check spelling and grammar before saving each card, that way you can submit less mistakes. When I do submit cards I would suggest submitting a complete support system so you can tell how the cards interact with each other. I tend to post complete sets, however even when my Legacy of the Empire set was not complete you could still tell what each card was supposed to do. Here you only have a card of each type, and your Monster isn't even Sora, to whom your Spell refers. Now some specific recommendations:

Key Blade of Hope and Dreams: When your opponent declares a direct attack, Special Summon 1 Level-4 or lower monster from your hand to the Field in Defense Position. The declared attack must then change to target the Defense Position monster.

"All Together!:" As long as this card is active on your Field, Sora gains 500 ATK or DEF for every other monster you control.
*Note: On my cards I use 'power' to denote both ATK and DEF. This is not, however, recognized OCG. It's simply a shorthand notation that saves space.

Cloud Strife: When this monster destroys another monster in battle it can attack one more time.
*Note: OCG include the slightly-awkward phrase 'by battle' for effects. You may want to use that instead of the more grammatically correct 'in battle' since the former is the officially recognized version.