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The guardian of fire!


Taylor Anfinson

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[img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=The%20guardian%20of%20fire&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Fire&level=9&magictraptype=None&rarity=Secret%20Rare&picture=http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-W2X4y2fzJ40/TfLz0H9rxtI/AAAAAAAAAJQ/DIcJLucWcpA/s1600/firedragon_wallpaper_4.png&set1=1543E&set2=320r3&inset=true&type=Dragon&description=If%20your%20opponent%20summons%20a%20fire%20attribute%20monster%20you%20can%20control%20it%20for%202%20full%20turns%2C%20and%20if%20your%20opponent%20summons%20a%20water%20attribute%20monster%20with%20a%20LVL.%20of%204%20or%20less%20it%20is%20automaticly%20destroyed.&circulation=14322343&atk=3000&def=1900&creator=Taylor%20Anfinson&year=2012&serial=79142828[/img]
k i edidted it. tell me what you think!

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Rewording of the effect for better understanding:

[quote]Once per turn, you can tribute all Monster on your side of the field (Except this card): Destroy all level 4 or lower Monsters on your opponent's side of the field.[/quote]

Alright; this card is a 2 Tribute with no Special Summoning effects. It's effect requires you to tribute more monsters in order to destroy your opponent's weak monsters. On a competitive level; this card ain't worth it. Too many resources for a mediocre effect that Dark Hole trumps over; even Lightning Vortex does it better.

It is an interesting card at an amateur level; but even then it won't be seeing much play since it has too many drawbacks. Here is my advice:

-There is no need for so many Monsters in order to use this card. You can do 2 things:
[list]
[*]Change its effect to not need to tribute monsters (You can compensate for this by making it destroy all level 4 or lower; or you can leave it like that)
[*]Make it a lower level (Preferably 4 or lower) and change its stats (Make the ATK high somewhere around 1800 or 1900)
[/list]

-Despite being the Guardian of Fire; it has no relation to Fire except in Attribute.
-Both in a competitive and amateur level; 2 tributes are practically unused, basically because they are horrendously slow to summon. You can attempt to give it a Special Summoning effect in order to facilitate the summoning.

Overall, as a regular 2 tribute; its not good. 2 tribute monsters with no Special summoning effects now a day need some VERY good effects to even be considered used both in a competitive or amateur level. The game is simply too fast for this card to be of any use.

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[quote name='Galkin' timestamp='1333507337' post='5900983']
Rewording of the effect for better understanding:



Alright; this card is a 2 Tribute with no Special Summoning effects. It's effect requires you to tribute more monsters in order to destroy your opponent's weak monsters. On a competitive level; this card ain't worth it. Too many resources for a mediocre effect that Dark Hole trumps over; even Lightning Vortex does it better.

It is an interesting card at an amateur level; but even then it won't be seeing much play since it has too many drawbacks. Here is my advice:

-There is no need for so many Monsters in order to use this card. You can do 2 things:
[list]
[*]Change its effect to not need to tribute monsters (You can compensate for this by making it destroy all level 4 or lower; or you can leave it like that)
[*]Make it a lower level (Preferably 4 or lower) and change its stats (Make the ATK high somewhere around 1800 or 1900)
[/list]

-Despite being the Guardian of Fire; it has no relation to Fire except in Attribute.
-Both in a competitive and amateur level; 2 tributes are practically unused, basically because they are horrendously slow to summon. You can attempt to give it a Special Summoning effect in order to facilitate the summoning.

Overall, as a regular 2 tribute; its not good. 2 tribute monsters with no Special summoning effects now a day need some VERY good effects to even be considered used both in a competitive or amateur level. The game is simply too fast for this card to be of any use.
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Thanks man appreciate your constuctive critcism i'll edit the card.

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