Sigma Posted April 10, 2012 Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 Well, it seems that I'm back (kinda), I remember not being able to create godly balanced cards like some people before on this site. And now, I wanna try again. I may be a bit rusty at this, so, here you go. Note: Not sure if picture is SFW. [img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/7821/onisamurai.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 Fiend-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-Type monsters This card can only be Synchro Summoned if there are 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field. This card can attack in a row equal to the amount of Fiend-Type monsters equipped. When this card destroys a monster by battle, banish 1 Fiend-Type monster on your side of the field. During your End Phase, equip that card that was banished to this monster. If there are no Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field, banish this card. Hope you guys enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasder47 Posted April 10, 2012 Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 its good but there is an OCG error Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted April 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2012 [quote name='sasder47' timestamp='1334075240' post='5909029'] its good but there is an OCG error [/quote] I think that would come up. :3 Do you mind telling me where this error is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 Yo Sigma. Welcome back. Anyway, I am going to break this down 1 sentence at a time. [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]"This [/size][/font][/color][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/281077-oni-samurai-of-the-night-im-back/#"]card[/url][color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] can only be Synchro Summoned if there are 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field." [/size][/font][/color] Is this even necessary? You need Fiend-Type monsters to Synchro Summon it to begin with. [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]This card can attack in a row equal to the amount of Fiend-Type monsters equipped.[/size][/font][/color] The OCG is off here. And this should probably come after discussing how to equip this card with Fiends. [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]When this card destroys a monster by battle, banish 1 Fiend-Type monster on your side of the field. During your End Phase, equip that card that was banished to this monster. If there are no Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field, banish this card.[/size][/font][/color][color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]I am guessing this is meant to support D.D. cards. Overall opinion: It's pretty good. I'm not going to discuss what kind of combos can be pulled off with it. Perhaps to keep from being too abusive, make a suggestion that it cannot declare a direct attack while equipped with Fiend cards. But it seems pretty solid to me otherwise.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted April 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [quote name='GodWynn' timestamp='1334103995' post='5909527'] Yo Sigma. Welcome back. Anyway, I am going to break this down 1 sentence at a time. [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]"This [/size][/font][/color][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/281077-oni-samurai-of-the-night-im-back/#"]card[/url][color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] can only be Synchro Summoned if there are 1 or more Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field." [/size][/font][/color] Is this even necessary? You need Fiend-Type monsters to Synchro Summon it to begin with. [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]This card can attack in a row equal to the amount of Fiend-Type monsters equipped.[/size][/font][/color] The OCG is off here. And this should probably come after discussing how to equip this card with Fiends. [color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]When this card destroys a monster by battle, banish 1 Fiend-Type monster on your side of the field. During your End Phase, equip that card that was banished to this monster. If there are no Fiend-Type monsters on your side of the field, banish this card.[/size][/font][/color][color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]I am guessing this is meant to support D.D. cards. Overall opinion: It's pretty good. I'm not going to discuss what kind of combos can be pulled off with it. Perhaps to keep from being too abusive, make a suggestion that it cannot declare a direct attack while equipped with Fiend cards. But it seems pretty solid to me otherwise.[/size][/font][/color] [/quote] Thank you. I thought it was going to probably be meant to supporting it's own archetype, but, yeah, it just might support D.D. cards. I will change the effect a bit so the OCG is correct, and balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [quote name='Sigma' timestamp='1334104413' post='5909536'] Thank you. I thought it was going to probably be meant to supporting it's own archetype, but, yeah, it just might support D.D. cards. I will change the effect a bit so the OCG is correct, and balanced. [/quote] No problem. If it becomes part of a set though, let me know and I will be glad to do a review of it as well. I may also change my review of this card because things change as support comes in. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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